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Chapter 9 - Sacrifice of Angels
VBlew commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Sacrifice of Angels
What an emotional chapter, just when it looked like things may be improving, we get this tragedy thrown in there. -
Terrific ending to this section. Looking forward to the continued story.
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This is a very interesting twist to the story, now to find out what Jackie was really doing, and what effort will have on Ludo and Damian.
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Very fun short story. Seems like what could be the beginning of a longer story.
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These guys certainly are special. Are they genetically altered to be like super soldiers? What do they mean eliminate the risk? How are the regular humans going to help?
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This chapter Jacques is being led to care for Alex. Seems strange that Solomon is just being th director in all of this so far. Noir being Black in French hence the relationship to the foundation for Jacques. Looking forward to more and the reappearance of the hand.
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With that prior dream of Seth showing him the book under the bed, I don’t get why he put it back unread…. Clues boy, you’re missing clues. This last dream with Asher being attacked was not good. He needs to talk with Asher soon.
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Nice bringing them all together. Hopefully Ben gets a better impression by Matt since they will all be living together.
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Beautiful beginning to what looks to be an amazing relationship. Being from Illinois originally, I really get the Lincoln vibe. Gay or possibly Bi, he had a lot of documented relationships with men.
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Loved this chapter. It seemed like the end was either the end of a very short story or a good cliffhanger. I’m glad that it will continue. I love their banter, they are attracted to each other. I’m very curious if Aaron planned this encounter or if it really was an accident.
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Good for Riley listening to Danny and making a good decision to marry Cedric. They need to really discuss Riley’s condition so he doesn’t accidentally infect Cedric.
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Interesting premise to be able to see auras. I’ve met a few who say they can. Not that they have said anything about this darkness you have in this story. So far we have yellow, green, brown, red, blue and black. Looking forward to see what else he discovers with this ability.
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A Wary Travel Companion, Pt. 1
VBlew commented on Mike Carss's story chapter in A Wary Travel Companion, Pt. 1
They each are learning about each other. The fact that Callum doesn’t know about the mountain range is very interesting. Why did his people originally move this direction. Were they driven out or have a need for food that was not where they were??? I really like Rym, he is listening and caring, not that Callum is seeing that, he’s to focused on trying to escape, but to where? He doesn’t even have an idea how far he traveled from where he started. Also, is he the only survivor of the errant transport? -
Gus is a savior in this instance. Ben was spiraling and doesn’t have the tools yet to deal with that. Glad he and Josh are there for him… The other friends are not sure what happened, but not upset at Ben. Hopefully they will keep being his friend, he needs them even if he doesn’t know it yet.
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So, another gay boy enters the picture. Killian needs to look under the bed for that book that Seth was showing him in the dream…. Asher has feelings, and told his brother, but not the boy he really wants to be his boyfriend, that’s messed up. Excellent chapter.
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The progress on the foundation seems to be proceeding well.
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Reticular Formation - Part I – Danger
VBlew commented on William King's story chapter in Reticular Formation - Part I – Danger
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Cautious tale, will Alex have a savior from what appears to be something sinister going to happen?
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Interesting start to this story. Seems like coming to this house is healing. Will keep reading to see what else it is.
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A beautiful beginning to what looks to be an amazing journey. Looking forward to it all.
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Thanks for this story. It is an awesome story of someone being supported into their becoming aware of their sexuality being gender fluid. And fortunate meeting someone pansexual who accepts them as they are.
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What a beautiful conclusion to this wonderful story.
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Chapter 8 - The Boy Who Lived
VBlew commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 8 - The Boy Who Lived
Beautiful chapter, glad Jacob is good, actually this accident could have added to his longevity, because they found the issue in his brain.- 15 comments
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The opening waking up with heart palpitations, and the unease this week seems to have come about after Josh said he may be seeing someone…. It seems like the fear of losing their relationship is manifesting. Hopefully Gavin will be able to help, if he can make it to Saturday.
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Interesting that cottontail could be John Smith, but not sure. We don’t really know who was running Xpress before… Jamie has a dilemma, and that last line says it all “What the hell did he want, anyway?”
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