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The training to become a fighter is important, even if to just defend himself. Wouldn’t want to loose a head! That shadow gift is a great one and maybe the rarer form. We know of two other gifts now. Plus he seems to know when to avoid things, like shaking Oriole’s hand…
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Strange interaction with the security on LHI, this island was in another story, and maybe they were being protective of some VIPs on the island, but maybe not? Looks like Dev is getting happy with being on the yacht with Marc.
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So, Matt has some of the family abilities, are there more coming? That is a handy ability, but it seemed to need touch to initiate, and he seemed to be out while it happened, so would need someone protective around him while it happens in the future.
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Travel plans in the future, but Thomas did not bring that up at his meeting with Jonathan and Lachlan, curious?
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Chapter 36: Mischievous Mind
VBlew commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 36: Mischievous Mind
@astone2292 first you are an amazing author, I’ve read all of your wok here on GA and your story telling, world creation is superb. I had to step back for a minute to process my feelings with what happened to Vincent in this chapter. At the end of this one he gets to come back from the dead and be with his mate, whom in itself is amazing. If the choice is between being dead or being alive without magic… I’m choosing being alive. It’s disappointing to lose something that is a part of you, but he still has love in his life, and that is worth a lot. It’s your story to tell and please keep writing. -
Interesting twist on the plot with Marc’s sister needing to be rescued. And the need for acting undercover.
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I Didn’t Want To See It As Love
VBlew commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in I Didn’t Want To See It As Love
This was an interesting chapter. Yes they need to discuss what all three of them want in the relationship, we don’t know what Yashuki is thinking or feeling yet, but his actions show that he is interested in both of them. I met some guys who were in a 3 way relationship when I was really young, and it seemed like an open relationship. I slept with one of them, at a beach, then again back at their home in the city. It seemed like they had worked on the rules and boundaries of their relationship. Hopefully if the guys in this story want this polyamorous relationship, they can work it out. -
Very interesting the meeting with Jesus, and the transgender beings. The cruelty perpetrator had a long punishment, but will they come out of it any different?
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Glad you are back writing. This chapter covered a lot of ground. It would be really good if Tala can reverse the wolf spirit damage. I have no doubt that they will get the land situation sorted out. And maybe find out who else’s been bad actors in this whole situation.
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Chapter 35: Deadly Decision
VBlew commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 35: Deadly Decision
So you said you left us a clue, Terik said she was thinking of him as her assistant. So would that include some upgrades to his powers? What a cliffhanger you left us with. -
Xiwang changes what he wants to do now that he has more information about the gods and what they want.
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I’m still suspicious of Yashuki’s motivation with Thomas…especially if he was going with Thomas to his flat.
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Finn is such an amazing guy to love Alec so much and help him go through everything emotionally. Plus getting Alec in shape by running has positive side effects for their time making love. It’s sad to know that there is just one more chapter, but all good things eventually end. Looking forward to where this goes.
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This popped up in the list and I love your stories so had to read it, fortunately it was after work so was able to read it in one sitting. Amazing build up to what looks to have been an enduring relationship. The foreshadowing of the barn was masterful, the back and forth with who was chasing who is very well done. Great characters all around. Thank for a great short story.
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Well Yashuki did not seem to overstep on his massage, even if he was clearly flirting with Thomas. 3 months in jail waiting on a trial seem like a long time. And we haven’t heard if Dante said anything about where he went after his fight with Patrick.
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Wow, that ending, I really can’t believe that he would give up so quickly on his relationship with Pete. They really need to have a conversation, but that has not been how Corbin has worked with everyone else. He has just seemed to take what he wanted, and has left a trail of discarded bodies in his wake… I hope it goes another way for Pete.
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I like the way you introduced this Dreamwalking, it will prove to be very valuable, especially with these people with large egos to deal with. The robotic cats and dogs for the children is a nice touch too.. now to get everything setup for manufacturing in space.
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It’s very interesting that outside forces led to the pairings that led to both Tani and Dante’s births as very powerful beings. Will be interesting if this comes to light, and what happens with their relationship, knowing now that they are both in love with each other.
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Glad the finally got to where Garjah is being held. Now to escape without being caught. Go Bouncer, got one of the people who invaded their home.
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The big outfit reveal. It was great that they each got to design their own, and they seem to really fill their skills/abilities. Looking forward to seeing them out in the field.
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I’m not liking Yashuki’s taking advantage of Thomas’ emotional state.
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Great chapter, it’s interesting to see the thwarting of the attempt to kill Xie Lian. The returning victor being assaulted by one’s they had helped in the past. It will be interesting to see the reason for their instructions.
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I love how you take what we thought was reality, and change the focus a poof, something entirely different. So much drama for what, jealousy,greed? Seems like it would be more than that.
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Very sorry to see Patrick as the deceased. He did seem to be the better of the two brothers. And it very well could be an unfortunate accident. Hopefully caught on the cctv.
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Chapter 33: Final Face-off
VBlew commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 33: Final Face-off
The venue for the battle is an interesting choice, and the last line “No, I'm nowhere near ready." Seems like it may be a setup, as we know he’s at the top of his game with all of the training he has been doing.
