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Nice romantic gesture by Xavier to make up for missing their date.
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Henry after finding out who his love was took the risk to be rejected in bonding, and was met with acceptance. Looking forward to more.
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Great chapter, Tom opening up and sharing what he has been doing and his passion for music.
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I love your description of the area, drawing a mental map of the town and surrounding land. The sheriff did his job well and found out that if Lucas had been on his own, would likely be dead. That no kerchief as a mask was an interesting thought. And the get a bounty on top of it all. Looking forward to the next installment.
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This is starting out well. Sorry that Taylan had to pass away. This looks to be interesting. Want to know more about Mischa, which I’m sure is coming.
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Loan Fallout and New School, New Problems
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Loan Fallout and New School, New Problems
Glad that the family worked through their issue with black people. Reggie saving Matt from drowning was a very good thing. School Bullies are the worst. coming out to Drew seems to have been a good thing too. -
Seems like Rusty’s Mom is Bipolar, and possibly on the wrong meds! Matty getting some good advice to man up and really tell Rusty how he feels about him.
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That was a crazy trip. So glad Tyler is alive. Pete keeps getting messed up though. Hopefully he can still sing ok.
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Great chapter. Finally at the ranch. Met the family. There are things not being said…. And who are the wolves? I’m thinking Shamus is the big black wolf, are the two smaller ones the twins, or Ronin and Katty, since they’re older? looking forward to his reaction, and upcoming enlightenment.
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Loved this chapter. The kids had fun at karaoke! The adults had fun then Kyan and Perry finally kissed and it was very good, and Kyan is all about whatever is to come being with Perry. The difference between this relationship and his relationship with Dyana is very different, and he is realizing how much better this is.
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Great chapter, and good on him for getting the hovercraft. Why is the army messing with him? He was good in his service, served his time. And is now ready to be a civilian again.
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Thanks for the epilogue. Great ending. The boys learning how well they have things, loving parents and most things paid for. looking forward to whatever you bring in part 3!
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Will Brent say anything? Could this lead to a relationship or was it a one time thing? Does Aiden even know what he wants. His intention was revenge, but it turned into something good physically.
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Great happy ending, thanks for the ride.
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Exciting chapter, what seemed like a good escape plan turned out the criminals are very determined to catch up to them. Hopefully in this cat and mouse chasing they get the bad guys caught!
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Great intro to update us since the last story. Could the be encountering the same troublemakers as last time?
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So is Tomas the same as this Twn?
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My guess is that Harry got out, and that will lead to a search for him, and possible meeting back up with someone else.
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Hopefully Tomas will come back after his work is done. He as to know what affect he has had on Henry.
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Great chapter, getting everything out in the open between Connor and Shamus was good. We haven’t heard much about Dakota. They both seemed to have an attraction, but we’re not staying close to each other on the ranch to interact more. Hopefully they will meet again soon.
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Tyler Pays Pete Back and More Cops
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Tyler Pays Pete Back and More Cops
Great news for Tyler connecting with his Uncle. It’s a small world, with all of those thin threads of connection. Rob, RB, was good telling Tyler about his past. He wanted to be honest starting this new relationship, and not hiding anything. That was really brave as it could mean the end of the relationship, or make them stronger. Waiting to find out. -
Welcome back Gary! I was just thinking about you and your stories the other day. Great first chapter introducing these two characters. Looking forward to the story.
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A great chapter of friendship. It’s always better to have friends caring for you than being sick by yourself. That fish in the kitchen is going to nasty when he gets back home though.
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A great chapter of friendship. It’s always better to have friends caring for you than being sick by yourself. That fish in the kitchen is going to nasty when he gets back home though.
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Go Kenny! I think the discipline for the grounding was good for Bryan. He certainly learned his lesson. As for the adults picking on the children, it’s really good that Diego is around to defend them!
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