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Great chapter. Will Talon be wearing white for the wedding?
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The stage is set, they have now. Both admitted how the frail about each other. The key of the lighter is leading them further on in the case.
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Good part of making up. Funny, they have now both been with girls “ all the way” but aren’t ready to take their relationship there? Maybe the gift from dad will help them out.
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Great chapter, good news is that Jacob now knows there are no rules against being friends with his friends.
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Glad you’re back. This chapter has answered some questions and raised some more. What is the Eagle’s purpose? Will they all accept the light? I’m guessing yes, as they have formed a bond. Are Novo’s dead companions real or imaginary? Looking forward to more.
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Good for Caleb seeking answers. And not a coincidence that he connected with this wise priest and family friend! Now to make amends.
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Great Chapter, everyone got to let go of some emotional baggage, and accept the love of their brothers.
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The Bottom of the Ocean
VBlew commented on Sean J Halford's story chapter in The Bottom of the Ocean
Wow. I was so upset with what happened in the last chapter, this rebound sex was off the charts. Now both boys need to apologize and make up, hopefully. Alcohol and drama do lead people to bad decisions, unfortunately. -
I love their back and forth banter. They are getting to know a little more about each other.
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Great ending to a lovely story.
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Wow, the guys decided to go in the tunnel. Brad gets a surprise.
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Research Is the Mother of Learning
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Research Is the Mother of Learning
Otis is quite naive, and Hudson’s act being undercover is messing with them being friendly with each other. Perseverance will be the key here. Hopefully nothing happens to Otis being Hudson’s neighbor, as part of the trafficking going on.- 54 comments
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This chapter has so much loss. Now we get a glimpse of the pain that Albert has had. And now he has someone new to love him.
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Some more progress on what’s causing the memory loss in the men.
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Surprised that Julia too over running the company instead of Joshua’s birth father. This story did start with a falling out, but I thought is was with his father, who is a large shareholder of the Corp.
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The loving supportive boyfriend with taking good care of his hurt boyfriend. Than that letter from his mother. What an amazing gift she shared.
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Good thing there is a paramedic right there.
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This was a hard conversation for both of them and the emotional baggage they both have seems to be frustrating each other as much as they love each other. Hopefully they can find a way forward. They are both young for this level of love to develop.
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Rugby, Telescopes, Champagne
VBlew commented on Sean J Halford's story chapter in Rugby, Telescopes, Champagne
Tragic ending to a very nice chapter. Hopefully he is not too injured and it makes his father realize what a precious thing his son’s life is and that who he loves is not his choice. -
I like how you snuck in that they are now boyfriends. Finally😁
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Glad to know what Chris’ history is. Now they can move forward. Divorce is hard enough, and then having the other parties act like it’s no big deal is something. It just came out in anger. the piano teacher is awesome. Date night coming up.😁
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Another excellent chapter. Maybe this stayover will let Chris tell Caleb what he did in the past, and hopefully clear that part of his past out.
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Good for Vanus standing up for himself and Bazzle about the case. What a messed up childhood he had. It seems like this relationship me help both of them with moving forward.
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Never been into games like they are playing, but you’re making it interesting.
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Great rescue scene! Now to get out and back to the surface.
