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A very nervous Jonah. At least he was not recalled to NC, the judge was not happy with his antics. The way Will asked him to prom was awesome.
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Great chapter. Marc is at least realizing he is partially culpable in the interactions with Adam. Hopefully that will lead to a quick reconciliation. They both love each other and want to be together, but Marc still has work to do. Wondering now what surprises the other side is planning that they are unaware Marc already knows about?
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Rory looking at Desmond sent Kieran over the edge. Rory is his and told him so when they got back to the castle. Kieran was a little aggressive with the fingers after getting Rory all worked up with the tongue action… in the end it worked out. Was the jewelry bond stronger because of the Fae blood? I’m worried about Desmond after his interaction with the lake. Did he get infected with something evil? I hope Lachlan gets his just reward for being such an asshat. Cloudless when an advisor give him good intel. And seemingly very bigoted toward Fae…
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I had to look back and see if the Faro had done something that caused Leo to loose part of his tongue, but it appears this happened before. He at least will be kept alive. Has no idea he is on a space ship.
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That XXX warning was right on. Mike is more than a friend. Making the first time for Art as good as he could. Now on to round two…
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Those must have been massive helicopters. Kind of like putting a triple wide mobile home together. Just instead of trailers they used helicopters. Excited for the guys to spend a night in the cabin.
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Would You Sleep with Me?
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Would You Sleep with Me?
Fantastic start. Looking forward to this. I’ve been missing new wolf shifter stories, and here you share one. it looks like the mate is secure behind security in is glass tower….- 25 comments
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Maybe now Adam will have a better appreciation for Marc and what he was doing to try and save his bonded from having to be a part of the war. Grandma know she messed up and Marc explains his intentions to finish and start a “quiet”, private life with Adam. Adam gets to see war firsthand. What kind of ship did they find being built? Now they will own the tech and the scientists behind it!
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Chapter 6: Strange Bedfellows
VBlew commented on The Radish Spirit's story chapter in Chapter 6: Strange Bedfellows
Waking up having a wolf garden him, Ben gets out of bed. Meeting the knight who rescued them, and gettin to wake lord Nari up. Now we learn he may be a prince? Great light hearted chapter. -
Did C.O. Get occupied by someone else? Or did his phone die? It’s got Thayer in a mood. Deck needs to pick an offer and soon, or maybe end up like his brother.
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Excellent chapter, Zach was found safe, the people behind the plot to hurt Dante are found. Did they also have something to do with the meeting between Sunu and Anit? Possibly a reconciliation between father and son? Will Dante be allowed to go to the immortal realm with Tani?
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What an ending to an amazing story. It’s a sad thing that exists in society and you have lit it up with a floodlight, bringing many factions together. Looking forward to any other stories you write.
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Chapter 5: A Close Encounter
VBlew commented on The Radish Spirit's story chapter in Chapter 5: A Close Encounter
Dang, Nari was attacked by the Boar, and there is a mystery knight coming to the rescue. Great cliffhanger. -
Reconciliation at last. Once Roman was able to explain, and they had a mutual dislike for Derek, things seem to really improve. Max the Boy Scout? How would he explain condoms and lube in the chair to Emma if she found them on a visit? 😂 The sex was amazing, now some sleep, and waking up together, so no more misunderstandings!
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I sense a road trip coming up…
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That was a quick save for Nari grabbing Ben before he went off the cliff. Now heading to Nari’s home.
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Patience seems to have paid off, hopefully. Maybe the guys can find a way to help the Dine since they are technically part of the tribe.
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A Dance of Death and Other Revelations
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in A Dance of Death and Other Revelations
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Chapter 5 - Roses and Violets 5.2
VBlew commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Roses and Violets 5.2
Interesting chapter with Richter taking Aether to the ball. Interesting room design. The learning of other wolves, and a dog. The part about Aether making his own drinks at the bar was interesting, no bartenders here? Richter also realized that the music was letting his guard down. -
Luis is a terrific father, and very open and loving with his son. Definitely going to be fireworks if Matt has to use that prepared speech…
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Chapter 2: Trouble in Gael and Carlos' perfect lives
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Trouble in Gael and Carlos' perfect lives
Gael needs to get away, what will the father do to him if he finds out??? Lying by omission is just as bad as outright lying Carlos. -
Chapter 1: Beyond the Bathtub
VBlew commented on The Radish Spirit's story chapter in Chapter 1: Beyond the Bathtub
Through the bathtub instead of through the wardrobe… interesting transition between worlds. Looking forward to this story. -
Fun story about getting over heartbreak.
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This was an amazing chapter pulling a lot of pieces together. There is so much more that can be told, and you’re already at an epilogue? Maybe some spinoff stories?
