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Great short with a happy ending.
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It is a police story, so the details of the job they are doing important to the storyline. Mike seems to know more about police work than a typical special. And is for sure flirting… he did get Jamie’s personal number pretty quickly, and is using it. Looking forward to where this goes.
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This is a great start to what looks to be an interesting story. I do have a question as to why Jamie did not seem to be hones and up front with Mike, and just went to the boss and asked not to be paired up again. Seems like this could be something for Mike to be upset about as it seemed like they worked well together this day.
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Great chapter, and looking forward to the story of Jamie and Andre…. They have a history together too.
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Chapter 57 Epic-Log Part Four
VBlew commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 57 Epic-Log Part Four
Lovely. A marriage proposal. And hopefully the college years and the long distance relationship do work out. -
So this was all as a result of Chris’s dad trying to exert some kind of control over him…. That’s so messed up.
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Maks, what have you gotten yourself into? That kidnapping was a big cliffhanger.
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Wow, amazing conclusion to this amazing story. The guys are connected the way they were destined to be. Kane being reincarnated is awesome addition. thanks for sharing this tumultuous, journey.
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Good news that Chris is back and seems willing to explain why he messed up. The way that Mr. Mazibuko, called and supported Cal was a very good level of support. Hopefully it will make some difference at school.
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I’m wondering about the LongEars, is it just a manifestation of anger and hatred, is it a shapeshifter?
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Great chapter and starting some closure. Here’s hoping the council is wise and provides funds for the shelter.
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Wow, another dramatic chapter to end this amazingly challenging story. Thanks for the ride.
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Chapter 56 Epic-log Part Three
VBlew commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 56 Epic-log Part Three
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Lovely short story with a very happy ending.
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Goodbye Denial, Hello Acceptance
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Goodbye Denial, Hello Acceptance
Dylan did a great job of being honest with himself about his feelings for Colton, and the therapy session helped clear any doubts about the guilt. Now to see where they go together. -
This idea of being in stasis and saving an android body running around is very interesting. Would the all have to have the filament implants for the neural link to work? Does the android body go to sleep when the human comes out of stasis? How do you tell if one is human or android? Some of this is like the interface used in Avatar movies. But they weren’t androids they were like living puppets. Plus huge social dynamics to address. looking forward to what they decide.
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Axel had his hands full in this makeshift ER. He definitely cares for Jena. Now for some answers that will maybe, let them explore their relationship.
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Keith, is at least putting himself out there, even if he has to travel a ways to meet others, besides the married guys he hangs out with.
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Very interesting beginning, the confession. Is Adam just that naive? Then the fun with his best friend Thomas, the almost rape, and then him healing the love of his life. Will Thomas recognize that Adam saved him? Will their love continue to grow, will Adam leave this small town?
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Chapter Twelve: Labirinthoset
VBlew commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Twelve: Labirinthoset
What a chapter, and a huge cliffhanger! What is happening to Mark? The chambers with the markings on the floor for each of them. Seemed kind of like the teleportation in the original StarTrek. Was Mark beamed somewhere else, or being put back to just human? Can’t wait to find out. -
Chapter 23: “Plan all the way to the end.”
VBlew commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 23: “Plan all the way to the end.”
It seem the planning and development of superior weapons was beneficial in the defeat, with a seemingly small loss of people. -
Let the games begin, lovely reunion for Henry with his friends. Looking forward to seeing where this goes
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Frances proved herself with ingenuity, and got the support of 5he townspeople to achieve their objectives.
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That was a sad ending, even though we knew it was coming. Thanks for the journey.
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That assistant headmaster was very harsh… they need to talk, and hopefully Dad will be able to help…
