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Fun start to what looks to be an interesting new family. Looking forward to more.
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DV Ch 9 - Happily Life Goes On
VBlew commented on quokka's story chapter in DV Ch 9 - Happily Life Goes On
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Part 3 In the dead of Winter
VBlew commented on Georgie DHainaut's story chapter in Part 3 In the dead of Winter
Beautiful chapter. The love they have for each other, the working through their troubles, and an amazing Grandfather to bring them even closer together. Looking forward to where they go from here. -
Tani still believes that Dante has a family that he can’t interfere with… which is an erroneous assumption he made, and it’s helping him from his love. Also wondering if there is a way for Dante to go to the Ekho realm?
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Wow, that was a fast moving chapter. There is a lot at stake for the children’s sake and it seem that Jitendra had put his faith and trust in very good people to be sure that his children were protected from becoming prey to a family that rejected him.
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Troubling day for Devyn, he is already so low in self confidence that speaking in front of the class was really challenging, but he did a good job up to that point. The revelation of having his own home and seeing where his family was headed, is something that Jason seems to be making sense of. We’ve only been introduced to what appears to be the ground floor, is there an upstairs with more bedrooms, for Richard and Patrick? Also was this all he inherited? If they were able to afford the home was there other assets?
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With Connor being so young and not really having good support around him, it must be really rough. Hopefully when the meet or talk, Jarrod can help.
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I agree with Danners, this story is excellent and there is a lot going on with everyone, hoping the characters speak to you some more as I love this world you created.
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Great chapter, starting with the villain, and ending with the major players getting all caught up for the next thing. I’m really liking this revised version.
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Very glad that they got to have an honest discussion of each other’s feelings, even if it was uncomfortable.
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Great story, really enjoyed reading it, an this seems like a good place to stop for now., with everyone being in a good place
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Cole needs to grow up and have a conversation instead of making assumptions. That’s part of why it took him and Damon to get together in the first place. Glad that he has good friends to look after him.
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Sad to see this wonderful story end. Looking forward to your next adventure.
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The story said Henry was shot twice, but this was still a shock. interesting conversation with Musk.
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I almost thought you would have Mama Stacy interfere with Maddox, bu I get that he needed to do more wrong. Way more malevolent in this revised version… cliff I I can’t wait to see where this goes. The writing is excellent.
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Fun scene with the naked dancing…, sounds like Richard is ok with them being mates. That should make life easier at home at least.
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Finn did a good thing and is now able to get into the town to be closer to his mate.
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Chapter 1: Evaluating Evidence
VBlew commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 1: Evaluating Evidence
I’m with the others. I’ve missed this group. Glad you’re continuing it now. Looking forward to the continuing training for Vincent. -
Chapter 10 - End of an Era
VBlew commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 10 - End of an Era
Good for Jake. He needed to break up with Meg, it was not working. -
That beginning with the outlandish public punishment was hard to take, but it seems to have created a bond an led to communication between the boys
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There is some drama coming up. They both need to get their feelings for each other worked out and figure out what they truly want their relationship to be.
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Great chapter, they finally meet and Dante healed the wound he created on Tani, and apologized. He still has no clue about their relationship, hopefully that will change soon.
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Awesome stories. And I agree with the others, you just teased us with these three morsels of this vast new universe. More please.
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Maddox is a maniacal menace in this story.
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Thanks for the journey, this was an awesome story. Very sad, but extremely well done.
