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Chapter 24 - The Clash
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 24 - The Clash
Maybe this travesty will have them Messiahs rethink their supposed superiority and change, but it’s doubtful since they have to kill shifts to keep up their ranks. -
Pulled in a Dozen Directions
VBlew commented on Refugium's story chapter in Pulled in a Dozen Directions
Is Ike talking about Samael’s relationship with Billy? With Andy so busy, Samael May have to defend himself. -
Looks like a different character’s perspective in this Necko and werewolf verse or yours. Looking forward to it.
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Mateo seem really upset but can’t identify what the problem is, other than wanting to see all of Jericho. And Jericho for some reason has a hang up about that. But it seems there is more to it. Hopefully the guys can help him figure it out.
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I’m glad they actually spoke and corrected the misunderstanding. Now on to rebuilding their relationship.
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Great chapter, seems like a good time was had on the 4th of July.
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I’m glad that was an April Fools joke, I could not imagine you tying up everything in one chapter. Looking like things are working well for everyone
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Kalian is free again, and hopefully he can being Loren back. In the meantime find his sister and destroy a fleet of ships.
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The Problem With Cosplaying
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Problem With Cosplaying
So much in this chapter. A fun shopping trip, an intriguing visitor from Rusty’s past, which stirs up memories, opening up to Maddox a little. Matty’s crazy roommate slashing his cosplay outfit, and Matty threatens the roommate with consequences! What’s Matty going to wear to the party now? Does he have time to get a new costume? Or go to an old standby? Even though it’s not a superhero? I don’t think he’s ready to reveal his alter ego yet with all of the issues he had concerning the tight fit of the Nightwing costume. -
So much intriguing info in this chapter. Sad that Grayson would want to stay broken. is Ashton Tala’s grandfather?
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Great chapter, out on their first mission, and the one they’ve targeted created the augmentation that Zafiro had forced on him… maybe this will lead to a solution, or possibly more of a challenge for him. Especially if the guy wanted to be captured.
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So this is why Ash ran away, but now Moses found where he was living. Is he there to try and take him back or did he get away too?
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Great chapter. I figured out about the bear, but Devin and his family are so much more. Also if the great grandfather is still alive from the 1800s then this ability must add longevity to them as well.
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So much going on in this chapter. Trever really assumed the leadership role he is as a Beta. I’m not sure in this wolf-verse if mates, especially the wolf in this case, would not know that they met their mate. I think Trevor just really likes what he is feeling with Randy, will have to see how that plays out. Glad they were able to get the medical support needed quickly. It helps having friends in other packs. And with an elemental healer that should help recovery.
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Glowing purple eyes? Almost human? Is this the vampire? Possibly a recently turned one? Or one much older, who is hungry too? We still have no idea if there is life other than animals on the island. But he is alive for now. Most people have no survival skills. There are probably fruits around he could eat, he just does not know what to look for.
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Another great chapter, and that did seem like a date. I did notice one thing near the beginning talking about how the days were similar “him always calling me Mateo instead of Mat”. I think the names should be swapped.
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Sounds like it’s going to be an interesting summer!
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Prologue -- Trains Don't Stop For Cocksuckers
VBlew commented on Rusty Slocum's story chapter in Prologue -- Trains Don't Stop For Cocksuckers
Amazing and sad at the same time. A young man figures out his sexuality, and tries to help another. With such a low self opinion of his worth, maybe there is a glimmer of hope started here. -
Chapter 4 An Education in the Bushes
VBlew commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Chapter 4 An Education in the Bushes
Since this is the backstory to where we started in the future, it seems like things got better, then something happened. And the title is a clue. Maybe they are both upset that they wrote each other and never got a reply. Thought something out of their control. They hopefully will talk at some point, and clear up the situation. -
Rusty is taking the high road with Connor. And he has the car to get to his brother’s party. Loving that Maddox and Jonathan, Dad and Mom roles. A key for Matty, yes! he has worked hard for that.
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Wonderful story, and a nice ending with something to contemplate on. It is so true having someone to share your life with can make it better.
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Loving the surprises you keep treating your readers to. So many questions just like the others have. Is the cat a transdimenstional being who has to have a companion to work with? Looking forward to where this goes!
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Looking forward to what all the mystery was about the family’s sudden move, and the boys time at the cabin before the start college.
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Maybe being sent back home Gideon will get to feel the loss of Kavan, while he is being shown Venice like a prince…
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Aside from the bad exchange vets, the guys are taking advantage of their time in the UK. Visiting zoos and possibly seeing animals the would not see any other way.
