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I agree with some of the other comments, those two phone calls were good for them both. They are discussing what the felt and what they went through being apart the first time, and how it affected them. It’s a good place to start to build from. I’m thinking if Alec does get his own place in Iowa that they will be splitting their time between the 2 houses, not living separately really.
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Darius showed both families that they are in a relationship now, and the parents all seem good with it, which is a very good thing. And hopefully the location for their university locations will be settled so that they are either at the same school or not too far apart.
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Another great chapter. It’s good to see that Wukong has this great ability to see through what he is seeing and being taught by a kind and loving god. It will be interesting to see what happens next with the ignorance of the humans calling to exorcise Xie.
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Kye is doing the right thing by his brothers. With his father still in hospital, he really can’t leave Australia, until he gets out and can possibly be their caregiver again, or maybe he will need more care recouping and Kye can be there for him. Regardless, it seems like Marcus was only thinking about himself, which is a shame. Hopefully some time apart will help, and he will make amends, for his rapid departure.
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I binge read the entire story just to get here, and it definitely was worth it. I was also thinking he still needs to clear things up with Mike the Cadet, too. The fact that Pete finally came around is amazing. Looking forward to where it goes from here, and hopefully not such a long wait between chapters, you’ve been working on this for a really long time. Keep going, please.
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Chapter 32: Struggling Shadows
VBlew commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 32: Struggling Shadows
Interesting training session for Vincent with Yakob, but it’s like learning dark magic that may not go so well for the weilder -
Hopefully the discretion needed is appropriate from the staff, but other paying guests?.?
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Extra chapter, please 😁
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Meeting The Future In-Laws
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Meeting The Future In-Laws
So much to unpack in this chapter. Best of all is Francine supporting Jonathan. Fun ahead for Christmas 🎅- 45 comments
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Dante is going to get caught out, and I don’t think it will end well for his relationship with Thomas. Coming out and being honest about it would have been best, but he’s digging a hole with his actions…
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On Vacation for two weeks. Fun times ahead! The boys enjoyed the flight.
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As a shifter would Elijah pose as a hybrid himself to get into wherever the captive is held? Didn’t he do something like that back in the original raid, when they found the ones in the mountain?
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Interesting times for Cook and Axel. He has a way of flirting, the question is, if it’s all for show or substance?
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Coming clean is a good start. The physical trauma, and the emotional trauma are a lot, hopefully now that he’s getting help, he will be getting better and really apologize to his brother.
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An Equal Opportunity Employer
VBlew commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in An Equal Opportunity Employer
A fun light chapter, with everyone getting to get out and enjoy themselves before the resort trainees arrive. Who’s is this new mystery man? so fun reading the “Chinese whisper” scene. -
Chapter 31: Getting Gelato
VBlew commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 31: Getting Gelato
Interesting mix of Vincent being an Alpha to Alpha advisor and Auditor on this trip. And keeping Mason cooled down with the hostile initial meeting with Lesha. Seems old habits were deeply ingrained, even if that’s not the true feeling underneath. Glad that Marc went out to talk with Vincent, that may help to begin some family healing. -
Love the history of the snake as a dragon modified. Not an “evil” creation at all.
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Another excellent chapter, they have the judge there to hopefully finish the guardianship so James can stay full time while they are traveling🙏
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Interesting chapter with the boys on the beach, and the interesting change of the moon phase? So Dante likes to have sex in …? He didn’t finish that, Thomas did. So we assume that was where he was going, but with the sex with his brother in front of an audience, it could have been that too? This is a very interesting story.
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Great to see them on the new planet, and tell everyone about the news from Earth. This is a strange ending to this chapter, what is it that caused the rockfall? If the islands are not volcanic as said before something had to have changed vibration to cause that…
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Wukong’s insight is so on target with the truth, and not the blind binary boxes that people want to simplify their world view to be. Great chapter.
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So that last bit by Dante about an open relationship, and his missing in the middle of the night after having spent too much time talking with the bikers is disconcerting for what may happen to their relationship.
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Looking forward to this adventure, and seeing where you take us this time. Great start. It seems to be moving quickly to have Kye in an environment that he will be supported in.
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A Land of Drought and Flooding Rains
VBlew commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in A Land of Drought and Flooding Rains
It actually ended up good that these people took over the house or they would have found a mess when they got there. Also interesting line of questions from Thomas about which attracted Dante first the bike or the rider?? -
Is Patrick upset with his brother over the Honda rider that came on to him at the bar thinking they had hooked up? When it must have been Dante… They need to talk about that. Dante and Thomas may have an open relationship, but by Thomas’ comment about commitment, maybe not from his perspective.
