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Beautiful short story. Life is looking up for both guys.
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Loved the role playing game theme to this chapter. It brought them all closer, I thought that when Tabby and Oliver saw each other that there might have been a relationship in their past, it was a friendship. Loved Tabby playing match maker here. Walter is a true blessing to Finn.
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After Sam got out of the hospital everything seemed nice for the night, snuggled up on the couch. The day started ok, but then the detective showed up with bad news…. Both brothers had been drugged and raped, with video proof. If Kyle stays in jail, he won’t be safe there with drug suppliers wanting him gone… if he gets out he has a target on his back too…
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Damn that was cruel. I’m assuming he can’t change into his larger form for some reason. He would be better able to defend himself. What is the purpose of taking the stardust? Does it have healing powers?
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Beautiful story. Love the slow building friendship.
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In the beginning of the chapter Jasper said he gave up drinking, but at the end he’s in a bar drunk?
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Finn and Garrett were not good for each other. Kyle is very good for Garrett. Finn just needs to get over himself and look at another direction and find somebody that’s good for him as well. Get him out of this mood that he is in and find real love. It sounds like you have a potential prospect for that.
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Very interesting beginning. Looking forward to the story and the world building.
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Chapter 66: Training Mission to an Outer Moon, Part 1
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 66: Training Mission to an Outer Moon, Part 1
So far so good. This part of space travel isn’t that interesting. It does seem that this is militarily training vs civilian training. -
Seems like his mother was pretty understanding, unlike his father.
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So these Khareans came and took Lali. Wonder if they started the blight too? Hoping to weaken the kingdom for an invasion?
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They made the journey… what will the repercussions be? Jacob just wants to support his dad, an Tommy is not letting go of Jacob.
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I Needed to See How It Would End
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in I Needed to See How It Would End
As rough as it was finding out Lyn does seem to be running away. Alexanders confession of why he got married was something that showed how much he cared for Lyn so that he would be able to continue his life after his mother’s death. Lyn needs to think really hard about that. There is a huge question of why Alexander did not reach out after he divorced, and the timeframe was up? -
I hope they don’t hurt Hudson. That would wreck Liam. Does Hudson see the car, know he’s being watched?
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Seems like Evan really needed to talk it out, but was embarrassed about what he thought had happened. Does Ryan know more?
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Glad Lalianus tried to heal the wheat on his own. The only question is will he burn himself out trying to do all the fields?
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Beautiful, I can just imagine the drawings and the allegory with martians, me living lives hiding in plain sight….
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So sad, being so controlled by the need to have a certain perception about the persona created about your life.
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Interesting. Theodore is still in denial these two are his mates, and will be part of his pack when they find them. Jack is his jubilant blunt self at breakfast. They leave tonight for the next part of their journey.
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Glad Ev is doing better, and finally trusted his caring partner to share what really was going on. The friends all noticed they were in a relationship…
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Oh, maybe Ben went too far? Or hit the wrong target? He may not get fucked after all, if that was what he was after in the first place…
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Chapter 65: Preparation for the Next Mission
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 65: Preparation for the Next Mission
Very interesting that this earth has only had most of this level of tech for a few decades, yet it seems fully integrated into society. Is the military planning on expanding their reach further in space and that is why Shawn had been sent here with gAI? -
[Memory, Senior Year, April] – Secrets Between Us
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Senior Year, April] – Secrets Between Us
This chapter does seem to be a reflection of what Brad said in the grooms room. Alexander knocked him out of the competition by keeping a rad thinking Lyn was straight and he didn’t have any chance…. Even with Lyn crushing all over him.? Were they both so oblivious? Alexander really played a very long game. -
Seem like Kyle gave Sam one of the tainted batches of the bad drug on purpose, he is lucky to be alive… now that he gave out Kyle’s name there’s going to be hell to pay… Jesse already suspected something, this just confirmed it.
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The young parole officer did his homework, then visited his first client… and a good result was had by all…
