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Chapter 6: The Disinformation Engine
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 6: The Disinformation Engine
Carter is continuing to assist in the resistance. The birthday was special, something they don’t get often. Calloway makes his move and is rewarded. -
Brandon was not only a poor excuse for a lover, he was a ruthless thug. Niran wanted to get closer to Kaleo, and took a chance at the hospital. They have a deal to work together. Now it makes sense for Kaleo to be closer to Niran to work on the bid as well as make his family safer.
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Eli and Lucien are getting to know each other and it seems like Eli may have been an intended victim, but that has changed. I believe he would be a willing participant to have Lucien free. Would he turn Eli or consume him completely? In the telling Adrian is performing a task that he hates. Has to get drunk to even do the bleeding monthly… will he do anything to protect Eli, if he is selected?
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Christmas morning was a surprise, getting gifts and funds to buy a bicycle. The getting to know you talk went really well. The major seems like a very nice person to have for the father.
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Beautiful, godling giving up his immortality to be with this man whose name he doesn’t even know…
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Wow, a lot of nominations for most of the family. And the teaser of a sequel going public.
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Leo was so hurt when Ace left the university. Maybe now they can actually make a relationship work. They both seem to want to be together, even thinking of giving up their passionate work. Looking forward to this story.
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This brain repair, did he loose his augmented abilities? The ceremony was quite interesting. It will be interesting to see what Zafiro remembers now.
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Chapter 8- A Taste of Trust
VBlew commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in Chapter 8- A Taste of Trust
Nos sounds like he needs to fully open to Cam to be free of the fear. But he doesn’t know that. Cam is happily showing him around. And slowing things down sexually even if he wanted to get mating, which is a struggle. -
Burn Permits Not Included
VBlew commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in Burn Permits Not Included
House fires have a tendency to happen with this family, but only for seriously bad people… Tristian has been locked in a safe for a while? Did Jack know about the teleportation ability and have this built to block that? Little B didn’t touch anything on the car. It must have had some serious electrical problems… -
Chapter 11 A Date With Boston
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 11 A Date With Boston
Marcus is trying to move on. He has a lot of grief. And someone strong to share it with, but is that the relationship that he wants? -
He got the medical and psychiatric help he needed and seems to be doing better.
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I thought I was in a different story when I started this chapter before I realized it was a POV change. Love the interactions. Gay roommate. Out and open is a good start. New job to go along with classes, wonder who will be a regular at the coffee shop?
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Very glad Matt was quickly seen by the doctors and his leg stabilized, and there was not much further damage done in the fall. Levi downplayed his role, but it was important and his dad recognized that. The job, and the volunteering would be good for him.
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Chapter 5: The Frequency of Dissent
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 5: The Frequency of Dissent
Carters talk of a Nazi camp being an example of their current situation is very bleak. The defiance stands. -
L.P Hartley got it right
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in L.P Hartley got it right
Interesting what I call “celebration of life”, not a memorial. The conversations after just supporting Alex moving on in life and friends change. Neil seems to get along with most people so it’s nice to have him along. He doesn’t seem as shy as he was in the beginning. The decision again on postponing the thought of children is good. Wonder if Neil’s brother gets the same prodding from their mother? -
Eli goes down the stairs into the dark unknown, like descending into the recesses of his mind, not knowing what he might encounter. Lucien is not what he thought he might encounter. A Vampire with restraint who had been following him. The sub basement must extent to under the library for them to have heard each other. Will Eli ask any of his new friends about this discovery? Especially since the initiation ceremony took place on top of the entrance to the hiding place. Will Adrien say something first? Keep on the path to recovery.
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This whole chapter sets the tone for what is coming, isolating Eli. Letting him face whatever is under the chapel alone.
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A very note resting way to start a relationship. Looking forward to this story.
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Things are progressing. Looking forward to their Christmas break.
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Chapter 15 Trousers and Cigars
VBlew commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 15 Trousers and Cigars
August has more than enough land and funds now to make this a very successful venture. A very loving couple of grandmothers, and a great partner and friends. They could build a new house on the other farm to house their growing group of friends. Off to the farm and hopefully Willy James is waiting for them at Barnswallow, or Runyon is going to go searching for him…- 43 comments
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The first round is a Theo sandwich, next up a Vince sandwich…. And maybe a Jack sandwich to round it all out.
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The Saturday Boy, Part Three of Three
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in The Saturday Boy, Part Three of Three
Lovely ending to a great story. Interesting that Patrick’s major is the only practical one in the house. It’ll like he chose this place to study, and anticipated becoming the boyfriend. -
Withe the title of this chapter, I was thinking our friend hiding in the barn was being a ghost, stealing food at knight, nit the pejorative word for Kidd’s physical appearance. It is good that Jo was taken in by his loving grandparents and then came to the ranch after their passing. Shanna is going to get what’s coming to her for her behavior and contribution to the harm of people on the ranch.
