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Interesting beginning to their cruise. Gran won’t put up with someone messing up her trip.
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David’s advice is very sound and he gave the guys an example of a relationship gone bad on set that tanked the careers of those actors. So if they both have feelings for each other they need to respect their relationship not just for the film.
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Spirit Court and More Studio Time
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Spirit Court and More Studio Time
Interesting way to catch your murderer. Now maybe Fabian can fully integrate into the band. It may be a sad goodbye for the other members when he tells them Russell is gone for good. -
I wonder if Hunter is a descendant of the group that melded into humanity? Will they be able to escape this together? I feel there will be a bonding of some kind with the sex that seems imminent. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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The scare tactics increase… Marvin gets a surprise photo of himself the same day. They are together in this, now.
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Loved the shower scene. Isaiah has a photographic memory? That will be very handy. Is Dimitri sitting in the other landing bay? How is Mickey going to get notice he needs to get his son? I like the idea of Dimitri stowing away, and possibly letting Gremlin out. His xenobiology interest would be just too much to not want to study him…
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Excellent chapter, the first test of the synchronized focused bond worked and got them back to Arcum. Holden woke up Kieran and Rory, and are now learning about what they missed being in comas.. now to plan and save the Euphon, and their world.
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An interesting mystery.
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So, interesting thought. Is AJ another personality manifestation? That could explain the reason for not meeting.
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So another like Jacob was possibly discovered in the Amazon? Very interesting.
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This is an amazing chapter. Finding these guys in this hidden valley who are exactly what are needed now. And if they can use the gates to get back to wake Kieran and Rory, they will have a better chance of fighting against Zereth. With Bren helping focus the frequency manipulation they should be better against bond breakers the next time.
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The place his uncle has provided sounds like it’s quite livable. Maybe Neil can help him move.
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Hopefully this time with Ain is helping Fenn see a different perspective. They need each other, and maybe a little time will let them heal physically and emotionally. They need to get moving or possibly get caught.
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Gremlin could be helpful with his smaller body and 4 arms, as a helper to Isaiah. He could not have locked himself in the crate, do maybe his physiology was immune to the radiation that killed the human crew, or the crate shielded him.
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Interesting beginning. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
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R & R, Recording and Research
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in R & R, Recording and Research
Russell was teasing the band when they all got together. Which makes it easier on Fabian, knowing he is not the only one hearing him. Looked like Russell got called to court mid session. They did work out a good solution. Sad there are only two more chapters. -
The ceremony was interesting. It’s good Rhaelce heard the others wanted to hurt Malik and got him away from them. The question is where are they going?
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Hot, but Desmond could have done a little more work opening Brian up before inserting that large tool… what an awesome Christmas present to each other. Coming out and declaring their love for each other.
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It’s interesting that Kent did not have a normal pattern of going to the supermarket. And the thugs knew how he was dressed. Someone else was watching him and specifically called out about him being in the supermarket… Its very good he told Marvin about all of this.
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Hopefully the threat is not directed at Cianán, I have a feeling he would win in a fight, even if he is a healer at heart.
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Beautiful story. So there is something in the water! It’s always interesting to read about native peoples stories. The mythology is fascinating.
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The scenes ran really well, and the simulated sex got them both edged all day, Sky gets Brant off, but what about Sky’s needs? Is Brant going to help out?
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Wow, it seemed like the frequency changing was going to work initially. But we knew they needed that other person. Prophecy is seldom wrong, and now they’re paying for it. And Sev knew about the trap, but just forgot about it??
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Ain was found an brought to where Fenn is, but Fenn’s touch seemed to hurt Ain. Now to get out of the city and heal a little.
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Real food. That was a good start after getting Hughie on the new ship. Did it not already have an AI? All of the dead people died from microwave radiation. We knew before that the ship showed damage from a black hole. Mickie and Isaiah finally kiss. They need to message mom now they have this new ship.
