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This chapter was quite emotional and Levi was quite stoic in front of the people who came to the funeral. Matt is doing his best to support his son, and the comment about different kinds of love was very thoughtful. It’s going to be an interesting journey, especially going to live in Thompsonville, if Levi decides he wants to.
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Beautiful. Music as a language that can’t be argued with. The playing, then the destruction of the piano was amazing. Wonder if Mark as there, just not visible? The fact he gave his fortune away to be himself says so much about the man.
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Great short story. Jerry had really thought out the contingencies. The police had a much easier time than waiting the perps out.
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Noah is all action now. Not even a morning kiss for his boyfriend.
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Beautiful chapter, love the explanation about the source of the music. The leaving everything behind and starting from scratch. Julian is truly a self made man in this life. Who is the mystery man in his bed? Nice cliffhanger.
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Chapter 8: THE ART OF BREAKING POINTS
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 8: THE ART OF BREAKING POINTS
Hopefully the rescue team gets to the mothership before Kyle is incinerated. He’s really a good guy. In a bad situation. -
Sean figured out Gabriel was his savior, even with the hood on. Gabriel enjoyed seeing Sean performing. Now to find the mystery man again and stop him from killing the Senator.
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There seems to be a simmering tension between these two guys. They made it away from the labyrinth, barely.
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Chapter 7: THE ART OF BREAKING
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 7: THE ART OF BREAKING
This explains so much about his relationship with Hughie and Jesse. They have a very long history together. I can see why he took Hughie with him. They can’t really be separated. Hughie is his friend through everything. -
Chapter 6: THE ART OF THE MANHUNT
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 6: THE ART OF THE MANHUNT
Found. Even knowing how far the disease has taken Mickey before, will he be ready for what he finds? Jesse is amazing. Grandma is relentless…what 11yr old wants to talk about their sexual development? -
Marc is being patient, and keeping up the running.
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Wow, Ryan was spiraling into depression, Blake was not helping… Jasper was MIA and just shows up and wants a call boy?
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I think this will let him help Shiloh. Like others have said, it is anonymous Shiloh had no idea that it was Noah’s foundation. Is Chase temporary or is it longer term? Noah is comparing them, but really didn’t have a lot of time with Shiloh before crazy things started happening.
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Wow. That was just, wow. Mark is done, Jillian is done, it’s all broken. Tragic.
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This looks like just the opportunity they needed. Callum while obviously attracted to them, seem genuinely interested in helping and he’s in a financial bind himself.
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Chapter 24: Who killed Robert Hayes?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 24: Who killed Robert Hayes?
Jilian is innocent. Interesting that Roberts phone is still missing.. anyone try finding it? That’s probably a big clue to who murdered him. This family has been a circus from the beginning, it just gets worse with the funeral. This twist with the Will is very interesting, nice cliffhanger. -
Frosted Hearts: The End Part Two
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The End Part Two
A dramatic ending to this book. Both of the main characters are injured and recovering. They will be better together. Hopefully Percy works on his PT and gets all of his motion back. If not, finds something else he is passionate about. -
That was a huge disappointment, going to all that work for a meal to get a txt that the person you’re going to all the effort for has no idea about. I don’t think Austin is going to be able to leave.
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Very fun short story. They both had a similar wanting to get out of the small town they grew up in. Orville having experienced the world sharing that with Jim.
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I do wonder what Noah’s reaction to finding out Colt has basically told all their friends they are dating will be? He is very controlling.
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Arrogance leads a charge to find a larger opposing force.
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Part 13: Nothing Held Back
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 13: Nothing Held Back
I’m wondering what happens after the wedding? Will they want to stay together? Or is this just for the wedding? Does Nathan know they are gay? Did he set them up? -
Barnaby is amazingly resilient at the changes to his travel plans, the boys should be grateful for his arrival.
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He is taking his surfing experience of failing and succeeding into this experience. Fueling the improvement.
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Over the River and Through the Fields
VBlew commented on Yeoldebard's story chapter in Over the River and Through the Fields
Interesting that Sakis finds a picture of a former summoner in this house of his current summoner’s grandfather’s.
