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Julian is doing well on his first day at sea, no motion sickness. And he is curious about how the ship works, and Sam is an excellent teacher. Then the one of the crew wagers about the lines, and Julian performed spectacularly. Looking forward to the next days aboard the ship.
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Ok, Elliot did a great job on his origin story after the word games. Theo still has not seemed to have named himself. The ex-wife figured it out and let him go. Now he is interested in Elliot but not sure what he is doing. Hopefully one of them has the courage to ask the other out on a proper date.
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Thokk has manipulated his way to getting Henry close to him under the mountain. Hopefully they grow their friendship before moving on to something more. They bot seem to be attracted to the other, even if Thokk is still denying his sexuality.
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Static is amazing, and the level of tech they are using is not typical civilian either. I say they move a lot of money out of the companies into something very philanthropic, like gay youth shelters or something like that, just saying it should be doing some good in the world. Not facilitating more of the abuse that it has been supporting. And then release the blackmail material to whoever can best use it to prosecute the perpetrators.
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I get Elliott’s personality, having to talk to people then they are around him, It he was working alone late at night. Theo is the strong silent type. Maybe a good listener. They have broken the ice. Interesting Theo has a son he wants to be there for so he’s working nights. Theo said his mum had him nights, not my wife had him nights, like they are not together. Looking forward to reading the rest of this story.
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What an interesting group at the party. Richard apparently has not developed gaydar yet.
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The runes may hold the human Lucas, but whatever the mages will have no effect, might even backfire on them… Esca hurting Andy just to get to Lucas was a mistake.
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Chapter 28: The House of Healing
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 28: The House of Healing
Marcus made a huge mistake taking these boys and is going to be paying for it very soon. Especially with the dissociative Will coming after him. -
That was a hot, literally, weekend. So much for staying in the closet Robert….
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Chapter 5- Disconnection
VBlew commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in Chapter 5- Disconnection
Did Orion’s blood trigger the teleportation? It seems like all of the campions were called back to their home plane. The Dean is going to be in deep trouble when they get back for letting Orion remain a bully for so long. Relative or not. We get to meet the mother next. -
The horse thiefs turn out to be another pair of lovers on the run, and accidentally fire the one gun with a bullet that they have. Maybe Runyan can give them some tips on firearms before they part company. They need to be able to hunt as well. They may all end up at Barnswallow.
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Chapter 2: Like Nothing’s Wrong
VBlew commented on Thightide45's story chapter in Chapter 2: Like Nothing’s Wrong
A very busy day. The effect of the PTSD is pretty harsh, glad they don’t keep bullets in the house. What could possibly happen in a storm like this? -
The truth is now finally revealed. Marco has lived so long, suffering over and over again the loss of his love.
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Levi was attracted to Casey like a moth to a flame. Fortunately he sobered up enough to keep from getting raped. He is definitely interested in males, but Casey is not the right one… hopefully this will lead him to tell Matt what happened.
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I’m also not feeling that Nicholas is that serious about getting back together. Leaves the door open for Stu, if Richard will even tell him his name, and that he is gay too….
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This was massively humorous. Barry Jr has some staying power. Can’t wait to see what comes next.
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Chapter 27: The King of the North
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 27: The King of the North
Thumb drive backup, easier to steal and destroy. Guillaume did excellent work, saving the drive. Carter’s Line intro sounds very similar to the beginning of the new Reacher season. Suicide on a subway, people thinking he had something he doesn’t and coming after him for it… -
Darn weather messing up their plans. Leo seems to actually be looking out for Jasper. Seems like Ryan could have trued a little harder to get together, even if it was just one night in the last 6 months. Now he’s worried his boyfriend will cheat on him? Seems disingenuous.
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Epilogue: Six Months Later
VBlew commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Epilogue: Six Months Later
This seems like a good place for this to end, they are happy, and settled into a routine. -
Chapter 1: Han Shot First
VBlew commented on Thightide45's story chapter in Chapter 1: Han Shot First
Interesting beginning. -
Does Vale have feelings for Christopher too? Why is he working with Marco, did they find each other much earlier, to do this dig? Can he do some ritual to release Christopher?
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Chapter 31: Aiden seeks Julian's help and his desperation builds
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 31: Aiden seeks Julian's help and his desperation builds
Sofia said she would phone in a tip for where to find Sebastian. Hopefully before he dies, then she will have a third murder on her hands. -
Did the shooter see Tim is a question, that might put Tim in danger.
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Chapter 12 The Island Taketh
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 12 The Island Taketh
Was Darrin on the boat and ended up on the island too? Where has he been all this time? Or was the dead trauma too much and he’s hallucinating? Connor keeps getting in compromising positions with Dale… -
Chapter 16: The Morning After
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Chapter 16: The Morning After
Their friends don’t have boundaries… looking forward to the double date.
