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This is the second appearance of a person, with a mom, tinkering with AI. Eitan’s strange behavior, and his prior use of some software that gAI was suspicious of, makes me think he has some part in the attack on Shawn. Looking forward to the space mission.
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Good news on their prior manager, and them getting out of their contract with him, hopefully they’ll also get funds too.
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He is going to have to be more aware of his surroundings in the future. Seems like this military school, has random fighting as part of their culture. But the intent to kill seems like it should be addressed, aren’t they going to be fighting an external threat, not their own people?
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Limits and Confessions
VBlew commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Limits and Confessions
Ace is making progress even if he doesn’t want to talk about it… -
Part 9: I'll Just Watch (Finale)
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 9: I'll Just Watch (Finale)
Interesting ending… definitely not straight… -
S2 E14: Who Do I Choose?
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in S2 E14: Who Do I Choose?
Dylan came all the way to Paris, and I don’t see it just being for the photo shoot… they both need to have a conversation they have not had yet, and maybe dinner would be a good time for that… -
Amazing chapter, so much happened, in just a day. Shaun is still way too caught up in his perception of what others think of him. Brian was kick ass defending Shaun from a playground bully. Then the surprise of Quinn… Looking forward to the show and wrestling. Maybe Shaun will even apologize to Quinn?
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Chapter 18: A Place of Love
VBlew commented on Jason D. Karl's story chapter in Chapter 18: A Place of Love
Seems like telepathy is being blocked in this facility. Hopefully Reece is ok. Owen really is brainwashed by the cult programming. But probably better him to be a chaperone than someone else…. And he has 11 powers? -
Theo is a very brave young man. Fighting for his love in a time that it was very difficult to be yourself as a gay man.
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Another amazing chapter. Quite emotional the internal battle that is going on within Will. That king of the North persona is a brutal master at this current time. Hopefully he will retreat once the threat is over and Will can have a good relationship with his children and husband
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Brilliant emotional chapter, they are no longer alone.
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Chapter 43: The Breaking of the Fellowship?
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 43: The Breaking of the Fellowship?
It’s interesting, the professor stirred all of this up, and it’s easy to see the correlation between the old AI, and gAI, they are both confused about what they learned. Hopefully some more info will be presented to shed light on their unique situation. -
Yes, I even see how people today are becoming so attached to “their” AI, it’s a friend helping them out….for now.
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Chapter 17: Devil and the Deep Blue Sea
VBlew commented on Jason D. Karl's story chapter in Chapter 17: Devil and the Deep Blue Sea
That was crazy. How did so many agents converge on this location? Who tipped them off? -
Wow, this is amazing writing. The dept of emotions, the thinking going on, with both heads… The ability for them to break through the boundaries that were there before. Sev’s decision to slow it down so that they don’t hurt each other, seems to be some very strong willpower. Looking forward to this from his perspective, having wanted Aiden for 5 years and now possibly getting him.
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Chapter 41: Talking with Zane
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 41: Talking with Zane
Shawn was amazingly supportive of Zane, and hopefully the sex they had had helped him realize that there are other options than being an ass with his teammates. -
It actually felt like they were making progress in this chapter.
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The Adventures of Wishbone
VBlew commented on Yeoldebard's story chapter in The Adventures of Wishbone
Beautiful ending. Interesting that the others went to their Christian heaven and he went to hades with Wishbone. -
He had to get old all alone. Then dementia… cruel gods.
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Razi’s background was a surprise. It was very fortunate that the pepper spray worked even though Micah got hit too. Tad had a new home. Killian is an excellent PI. He does need some help with his gifts. Excellent ending to this very interesting mystery story.
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Wow, at least now, Aiden knows Sev wants him too.
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So this timeline was before POTUS called and Will spoke with him in the last chapter, that would make sense… lots of foreign powers have an interest in this fight. Do wonder what POTUS’ relationship with Father is, if he’s asking the CIA to interrogate Andrew. Glad that Enrico is actually stepping in. Seems like this story timeline is before the whole Wolf dam bombing story, right?
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All this talk of marriage and babies is just too much for Jasper….hopefully he can explain himself, but the straight guys may not get the struggle.
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Beautiful opening to the love in their relationship, communicating their feelings and making love for the first time.
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Preparing to go into the dragon’s lair as it were. It seem it will take all four of them watching to catch anything that Alexis gives up.
