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Interesting beginning. Both men hiding something, one seeming on the run away from someone the other living a solitary life on purpose.
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Chapter 4: Hidden Desires (Jonas)
VBlew commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 4: Hidden Desires (Jonas)
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I knew they could use their powers together, was surprised when the light and shadow combined into matter. Loved this book. Can’t wait for the next one.
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This looks to be an intriguing book. Looking forward to the mystery.
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Welcome back. I love this story, it just keeps getting better. The intrigue, the belief in control, that really isn’t there any longer. The American Clan is strong, and with Tala in control things are changing rapidly.
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Chapter 3: Rising Curiosity (Jeff)
VBlew commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 3: Rising Curiosity (Jeff)
A little more revealing today, this is a slow burn. Just feeling out each other in terms of what they like. -
Yano could track where the order came from. Miller is going to be in deep stuff…Will is such a natural leader, one on one Trump is toast.
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Great battle, it seems like Fenn needs to learn some more control, like moving two or more objects simultaneously. Killing one person at a time is slow going. Effective but slow. The lessons of helping, and seeming fine motor control moving things by their shadows, like chopping wood could be used on people, tearing them apart. He did use that control to save Ain.
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"Will It Always Be Like This?"
VBlew commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "Will It Always Be Like This?"
What a beautiful ending, two things especially stood out, Luca’s letter. Liam had done amazing work to make it safe for child actors to be protected. And Hudson buying the place they first met, and taking Liam there for the memories of their first meeting.- 25 comments
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Beautiful ending. Great short story.
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Yes, finally. Leo had to take the lead.
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Chapter 17: Summer of Jaedan
VBlew commented on RichardWrites's story chapter in Chapter 17: Summer of Jaedan
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Chapter 4 - Finding Home
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Finding Home
They built a great friendship. They love each other, but decided to be best friends rather than be romantic partners. Now on to their next chapter. Beyond university. -
Dang, sorry their security guys didn’t make it. With Little B on the job they will get a Shiloh back. So much for a restarted timeline.
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Nice, all that pent up tension from the workout is going to be released.
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It’s pretty amazing to see the interconnection between the energies, the orca’s I ate ability to sing and direct energy. The combination of everyone working together makes it all work.
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So interesting reading about these guys at this age. Since we know how successful in their relationships they become later in life.
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Chapter 1: Arrival in the Alps (Jeff)
VBlew commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 1: Arrival in the Alps (Jeff)
This is a nice beginning to the story, a little character background. It’s interesting that it’s alpine skiing and not snowboarding. Although there is no time stamp to know exactly when this is taking place. It’s not relevant, just interesting. I haven’t been skiing for a very long time, but used to enjoy it a lot. -
Besides being a hungry student, Felix is attracted to Jo. Let’s see what happens in the shower, especially since Felix doesn’t have a towel.
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Seems like nothing is ever easy for Noah… Hope Shiloh is safe.
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A year is not a long time for a vampire to wait, but for Nathaniel it seems to have been enough time.
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"All The Trees Of The Field Will Clap Their Hands"
VBlew commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "All The Trees Of The Field Will Clap Their Hands"
The trial ended with Liam freed. That was huge. I loved Mateo being included in a part of what they have going now. The decision to be something the industry needed is powerful, hope for young people, and a place to pursue passion.- 20 comments
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Loved the ending. This is one of my favorite Merrickville stories. You left us wanting more.
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What a beautiful romantic time together.
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Although Fenn didn’t want to confront his parents, Ain had no problem doing so. The cat didn’t seem to be harmed by its prior experience. Now they fave another traveling companion. It’s hard to tell if Petre was jealous of their relationship or upset they had not been told directly.
