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Hopefully there is a good safe room in the apartment for Scott, would not want to loose him, or maybe he can take out the would be assassin? Sean is interested in more for his life. His hacking skills could come in handy for working with Gabriel…
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It’s like a family reunion with the older generation popping in to help.
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Frosted Hearts: The Bracelet
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Bracelet
I loved how they moved to the next level. Five using his specially mad tool to finish the bet, and that getting Percy all worked up that he had to go all Dom on him. Their honest conversation about who they wanted to be with. Loved the interaction with the flirty twins. The surprise getting back and possibly interrupting a robber in the house, but I think it’s Ethan, all of those clues around strange things in the pool area, maybe he hacked the security or saw the code Five or Percy were using… Percy clearly knew who they were, and he’s not going to loose Five now. -
Gretchen is right. Shaun needs to post his own video. Sam is great support, first finding that Bobby takedown video, then suggesting how to get Erin back… they have their song selection ready. Halloween is going to be interesting.
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Pericles & Gloria: arrests are made
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Pericles & Gloria: arrests are made
Given the appearance of the artifact in the photo, it could be anywhere on the property, and not be noticed. Like the Barn for example. -
Dean was so devastated, and it’s all Julian’s fault. He lied about being Mateo’s boyfriend, and possible Fiancée, that was really cruel. Find out where in Switzerland he is going and follow him, and apologize.
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So they now know the rules of the game, and saw another set of “pieces” playing their roles. Can they band together and shut down the game?
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Damien starts working with U-N-I and falls for Mark
VBlew commented on unilive's story chapter in Damien starts working with U-N-I and falls for Mark
I’m still reading the original story, loving it. Almost through chapter 26. Pacing myself a little, as I tend to binge when I come across older completed stories that are long. -
Two Boys, Two Towns, One Quiet Collapse
VBlew commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Two Boys, Two Towns, One Quiet Collapse
Stephen made a huge mistake and now the truth of that is going to haunt him. I see a strong woman in Susan, not putting up with his BS any longer.- 10 comments
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Wow, Jack is very forthcoming with his desire. They took a very good first step to getting there.
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Wonderful short story and a happy ending for the 4 guys.
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Damien starts working with U-N-I and falls for Mark
VBlew commented on unilive's story chapter in Damien starts working with U-N-I and falls for Mark
It’s interesting to see this from Damian’s perspective. Glad he got Josh. -
Is Mark openly gay? Or is he another compromised individual? He was really excited for his best friend to have a boyfriend! Is he another of the 13?
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It seems like Tyler has some mystery of his own. Roman numerals date, written, note spoken as if he’s hiding that from someone?
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No, is this going to turn into a musical? I loved those movies… It may be better learning they are not the only ones being manipulated. But that kiss did seem to spark something they are not willing to admit yet.
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The meet cute was funny. Tyler seems obsessed now. Is he who he appears to be. With the possibility of body swapping, it creates an interesting world. That daemon seems like a version of Loki bringing chaos into the world…
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Seems like it’s not just a layover if they’re on the same flight.
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They are such nerds. You say it’s monetized, for whom? Will they come to realize they are more than rivals, and fake boyfriends?
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Cruising Shadows and Quiet Confessions
VBlew commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Cruising Shadows and Quiet Confessions
Maybe the friendship with the professor will lead Kitt back to school. I don’t get why he seems so selfish as to not try reaching out to let Matt know he’s ok…- 12 comments
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This informed consent is interesting to learn about. Raj needs to also see how this is emotionally affecting Juanito who is gay and losing his boyfriend. He can be supportive but realize that a trans woman is not who he really wants to be on a relationship with… Things are looking up for Kilby. Steve is really doing a good thing, getting the boys off the street.
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Damn, just when I thought the shit Bobby pulled was too much, Erin shows up again…. Shaun really needs to post something positive…. Hopefully he doesn’t loose his job over this. Bobby really needs to be called out for pulling this crap at work.
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I think Fenrin is just naive and the Herald is taking advantage of that fact. If Ain finds out he’s going to be outraged. But that jealousy is part of why they are where they are now. Was there previously the same kind of manipulation with Ain by the Herald? That could explain a lot…
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Excellent ending to this book. I was beginning to wonder how the family name continued to where we were in future stories.
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Chapter 19: Will Dean's Love be reciprocated?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 19: Will Dean's Love be reciprocated?
Julian is finally realizing what Dean means to him. Sophia is now a thief and a murderer… -
Chapter 7: Milk slices and maps
VBlew commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 7: Milk slices and maps
The story shows that what seems to be one thing causing a rift can be something completely different.
