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Frosted Hearts: The End Part One
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The End Part One
Ira and John are in for a world of trouble. Percy will not be merciful with intruders intent on hurting Five. I knew Ethan had been hiding in the house. But using Percy’s code should have been a tip-off for it opening areas that Percy was not physically at. Hopefully the concussion is not too bad. -
The journal could provide more clues to who would have wanted to kill Lukas. Interesting that most of the king’s court are gay…
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Part 11: Not Just a Rebound
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 11: Not Just a Rebound
Theo doesn’t want to mess up this relationship. They are both wanting it. Troy spoke first, and got a positive response. They were not going to ignore that kiss. -
What a journey. They will be there for the twins whatever they need. Will be interesting if they finish school in South Africa or move to Australia and finish there. At least they don’t have real estate to deal with no mention from the lawyer about the size of the estate left and if there are funds to provide for the twins future. Hopefully there is insurance to cover things.
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Darrian changed the game from chess to go, and the enemy has no idea.
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Chapter 2: THE ART OF INTERSTELLAR MISCOMMUNICATION
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 2: THE ART OF INTERSTELLAR MISCOMMUNICATION
Kyle is very observant, and once the translation device was introduced their communication got so much better. Mickey misses his husband and doesn’t know how to fix it. The banter in this chapter with all three was hilarious. -
I'm Really Getting Educated.
VBlew commented on E K Stokes's story chapter in I'm Really Getting Educated.
Harry is such a good partner already. Problem solving for the income, and wanting to go meet the family. That’s huge. Even if it means they still have the same attitude, the boys reached out. The sex lessons are ongoing. -
Wow, that was a surprise. A proposal on live TV, on Valentine’s Day. Brant is a romantic guy.
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Has Martin told Nathan about replacing him at the Medical center? He needs to ask him if he wants to move to Sydney as well.
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They are being abducted together? Alonso hired goons to abduct them? The guy is a psychopath.
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Chapter 1: THE HUSBAND'S TALE
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 1: THE HUSBAND'S TALE
Oh Mickey, how are they going to find you? Hopefully Hughie sends a transmission…Kyle is now a member of the crew, he can’t go home. What a mess. What traumatized Mickey so much he had to leave? -
It’s a wonder that Wylan didn’t recognize the witches, but maybe he can’t detect magic being used around him. What a missed opportunity to kill a real threat. The Emir is fantastic, and might add to the Vanguard, much to his mother’s dismay. Ashot was hilarious. He is rich now, 100 pieces of gold! He probably is just in it for the game, but that much money could make them a target.
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Austin, human, commanded an enforcer, there is something happening there. The scene in the kitchen was hot.
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The young master knew what he wanted and asked for it, and Hudson seemed a willing participant. Will he ever come back from ceding sent to this other household?
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The movie boned everyone up, including Dad. Who wouldn’t be with two sexy guys in love making love on screen? Looking forward to the awards and the time together promoting the film.
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This has been there in moments throughout the story, Victor focused on Mark. This is going to destroy Julian when he finds out.
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Part 9 - Task #6 : One Pledge
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 9 - Task #6 : One Pledge
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I really like that he found another person who gets the work, but he didn’t mention Bruce to him? Maybe it’s just my monogamous nature, but that just seems off.
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George is a control freak. But especially with Noah. He didn’t react much about hearing about the burnt treehouse other than boasting about playing poker with the Sherrif. The truck tampering sounds ok if Bret was driving alone, but could seriously injure others, including any passengers.
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Terrific ending to this book. The interaction between Rikard and Lukas was very interesting. Will they join the resistance? Or just try to live a simple life? Just don’t see that happening.
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Luke was upset, just like Matt was when he found out his dad was OK and all that worrying was for nothing. Luke’s idea of giving Levi choices is a good one. Hopefully he is not homophobic.
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Wow, that description of the role in Stronger Together was rough. It’s hard to believe that type of abusive treatment goes on “ in the name of God” demented people. Glad they are both getting good acting jobs and productions are moving forward. Sky should ask his dad about playing a romantic role and not getting involved with the other actor. That could be helpful in his future.
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Interesting beginning. Both young men are attracted to each other. Just have a messed up dynamic with their fathers fighting each other. Seems like August has a mean pa. Looking forward to this story.
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Little B continues to surprise. Dos Noah have any abilities? We haven’t seen any yet. Besides attracting people all around him?
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Strange rambling mind to create this hilarious story. Loved it.
