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Chapter 13: The Price of cheating.
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Price of cheating.
Noah now knows the truth. The fallout from this lying is going to be monumental. -
Leo is afraid of his feelings and acting out. He still hasn’t adapted to this new reality. Maybe Devin will be a catalyst for change.
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Great chapter. As Cal learned before, he has to be honest and up front with this potential new relationship with Brady. Will Alan want him to be his exclusive boyfriend? He dis want to bareback after their good test results came in. Or will he be Ok with it? He seemed to be interested in someone else at the planning meeting, but there was not much focus on that in the prior chapter. also good job coming out to Bert.
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Not knowing who the godly man he slept with was is going to haunt him. Great start to this story.
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Jasper seems to be taking Blake’s relationship advice. Was this headlong something Chris made up? Or did paparazzi actually get a kiss caught?
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Damn good chapter… now that Noah knows what the necklace looks like as soon as he sees Mateo again, it’s going to be fireworks!
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Hearst is still in a negative head space, even after getting a job from Nolan. Jamie and the others got out of their contracts. Jamie now knows what he wants and comes after it. What did he do in his time out? Obviously decided he wanted rabbit.
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The boys are making progress, Dallas has a spine, his father is no good, and will hopefully be out on his arse… Timmy needs to be arrested. Maybe that will change his attitude, but probably not. They have supportive friends when they both get back to school, but it will be different.
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Sam is surrounded by a loving helpful community, they took care of cleaning up the house and preparing the bodies while he dug the graves. Sir Graeme has helped and is a steadfast presence. Hopefully he will stay on longer, and possible help Sam heal. Then if they agree build a relationship.
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Vane through the fight was not on his best, then when he could have helped, did not. Hopefully guilt for this will eat at him, and when Jamie recovers will be promoted for his bravery.
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Beautiful chapter where they can truly be themselves in public. Nice interlude before the next challenge.
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Good deduction on what tool he carried would access the great Dicku. Now a new set of challenges await. Looking forward to them. Our hero really didn’t have a choice but to proceed.
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Terrific ending. MI5 getting all of the detonators secured. Fouling up plans for bad actors to have nuclear capabilities. Will and Andrew, with Jacob headed back to Canada, and the others with enough funds to live well.
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Beautiful story so far, sad, yet inspiring, drawing you in.
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D rescued Joey, even though he was being silly again trying to do a delivery for his brother that got him in this situation to begin with, but he and D may never have met if that hadn’t happened. Now they are on the run. Headed it SC but with only a crumpled $20, and street smarts. Joey does know cars, so that will help.
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What a beautiful ending to this book. The birth has brought hope back to this family. Please write more, the story of Lucien needs to be told.
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That was almost a Monty Python sketch…
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Beautiful ending to a well thought out story. Glad to finally know about the tattoo. This seems like the end of a book, and on to a possible sequel?
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Finally they’re all out to each other!
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Joey…. Wanting D then running away when he calls and says he’s coming for you…. Take Kush and run with D…
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Glad the policemen were just pleasured, sad they won’t remember it. Fun playtime for this trio if a foursome…
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Killian, does need to let people know where he is going on this case… he could have put himself in danger. Finn is an interesting boy… that story about the cult, off the wall stuff… hopefully he will come forward and alibi Caleb. Jake is a little messed up, and seems like could use a real friend, but seems to be in party mode…
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Interesting chapter seeing they are both attracted to each other and not knowing how to deal with it. Joey going home is going to be a huge issue.
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Ryder is back after being frozen in place. Healing kisses from his mate. Anthony is a stubborn old fool, who was once the pack leader…
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Cal and Alan get to the pre party planning section… wonder what role Brady is going for at the party. I’m thinking he may be more conservative like Cal… but maybe more… strange that Alan would be reluctant to get tested for HIV, part of him still being in the closet to himself?
