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Great chapter? They finally got to have a real discussion about their feelings for each other. Dallas still has to come out to his parents. And then school… there are people who will support them.
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The First Adventure As Jr. Imps
VBlew commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in The First Adventure As Jr. Imps
Someone had the foresight to have Mickey wearing a body camera. This should be interesting when 5he bigoted parents arrive to get their bully of a son. -
Brad was in the bathroom for a long time, doing what? He come to the bar seemingly intoxicated, but not smelling of alcohol, something else perhaps? Luke hanging all over Brad all evening, a big clue…. Did Brad and Alexander have something when they were in college. Now it seems like Brad was manipulating Lyn in college just to help him get through…
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The start of a new tradition for them, Thanksgiving surrounded by good friends, prepared by a chef. Looking forward to the completed masterpiece. Maybe they could do portraits o& each other?
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Deep Chapter, still not convinced that Rachel won’t run… Killian has a rough process to go through about deciding to tell Caleb she is alive.
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Jasper in the afterglow of a very nice night of being with Ryan and his mom, comes home to an interrogation by Blake…He needs to come out soon and put all of that thought processing into something productive, like getting a new manager… Chris is a manipulative jerk.
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That could have turned out much differently if the Shaman wasn’t around. He was brave to try and save the guy in the truck, but outnumbered. Interesting with the tickle torture…
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I just finished reading all of this amazing series, an this is marked complete, but does not feel like an ending place like the 2 prior books… are you still working on this or maybe another book?
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Finally some honest conversation with Dallas. Seems like he cares for his friend, it’s the mask JJ has put on that has been bothering him.
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A tickle torture chair… who was it designed for?
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Love this chapter, great family meal, honest communication, and sleeping together, just sleeping 😉
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What a nice surprise with Torsten… the young men seem to have come to an understanding… can’t wait for the next chapter.
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Oh, sexy reporter gettin Killian setup for some cooperation. He definitely needs to tell Novak about this deal… the press can’t come before the police in apprehending the killer…
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Journeying Boy: Poetic Inspirations
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Journeying Boy: Poetic Inspirations
Loved all of the interactions, Vince was very good to intercede as needed at the book signing. The idea of being on the radio seem to be moving forward quite quickly. It is good to have supportive friends and family. -
JJ was truly heroic saving Dallas from drowning, and then the rescue CPR to get him back breathing and out of the elements. They are in a very rural area, so the rescuers may be a while gettin to them. Plus seems like ingesting that dirty water would not be good for anyone. Next will be food.. and a little scouting to see where they may be able to go. If Dallas is able to get up and around. Being struck by a log sounds very serious.
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It’s pretty amazing that Enrico could do all on that on the new phone… move money, create an identity, etc. seems like just what he needed to extend the time for his apprehension.
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Grandkids on the way! Things seem to be going well all around with the now 13 sectors.
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Amy Moves In and Marie's New Home
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Amy Moves In and Marie's New Home
Stupid girl is going to get pregnant…. -
What a difference reality is to the things we make up in our minds…. Sometimes it’s good to miss out on something.
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Loved this. Do none of the current Fae have wings? You’ve not mentioned anyone having wings that I remember. Like father like son… hot headed and temperamental. Rory did a great job calming him down. I feel a sequel coming on…
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S2 E9: Lunch With Frenchman
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in S2 E9: Lunch With Frenchman
Such a contrast between the two men. This is a very romantic chapter. -
Very fun chapter, thespians antics, hopefully the play is a success.
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[Memory, Freshman Year, February] – Sharp, Bitter, Sour
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Freshman Year, February] – Sharp, Bitter, Sour
Lyn is so focused on Brad he can’t see Alexander right in front of him…noticing all of the small things. -
Chapter 8: Noah makes a choice. Will everything be okay now?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: Noah makes a choice. Will everything be okay now?
Noah finally realized what he truly wanted, but still could not really sand up to his father, and Jace pointed that out and ran away. Mateo is taking advantage of Jace’s weakened state. What’s going to happen when they wake up and realize the damage they are doing to Noah?
