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  1. VBlew

    Chapter 1

    Very sexy beginning. Looking forward to more with these guys.
  2. VBlew

    Chapter 12

    They really are growing closer. Nice to have a loving family accept you for Thanksgiving.
  3. VBlew

    Chapter 24

    Leo needs to get his tongue fixed and quit being a whiny little jerk….I can see Devin making friends in this new environment. Jeisa is making a Nobel effort to make things as good as possible.
  4. Love the idea of a matter converter… compress everything into data, then convert it back where you want it to be.
  5. On The question of sex for Elion and Holden, doesn’t something magical happen with a love bonding that enhances their abilities? This word be the first human/human bonding? Or does one of the, have a recessive Fae heritage?
  6. VBlew

    28: Emmett

    Another great chapter. Hopefully Findlay’s dragon reveal is soon.
  7. VBlew

    Chapter 27

    Jim will no longer be a virgin after this Friday night, and it seems Mike is more than interested…
  8. VBlew

    Chapter 2

    The love letters are interesting. It will be intriguing to see what happens when Blake meets William.
  9. Horney teenagers. The points display will likely appear after they leave the store….
  10. VBlew

    Moving on

    Very interesting day at the shooting range. Daniel still can’t bring himself to ask Bruno about the sex with Lucian. Lucian finds the diary and something changes. He understands the history now. Still he gets Bruno in bed and on recording…
  11. VBlew

    Chapter 17

    What a chapter! Fast driving to a helicopter… I do wonder if they can shut down the comms system and restore from a backup prior to the virus? The coincidences of all of this are a lot. And having Sinclair’s ship so close to help rescue is another red flag in the whole scenario.
  12. VBlew

    Chapter 12: Dining

    More points toward leveling up. The points for sex seem to be more than anything else…
  13. Loved the father and son interaction. Gavin was honest after letting Matthew look at all of the pictures of his trip. He is attracted to both sexes but currently more male focused…. Looking forward to more.
  14. VBlew

    Chapter 16

    Will let the anger out, then reeled it back in. His family is everything to him. Andrew is getting closer to finding a smoking gun, but is this a trap about the data breach, still don’t know if that was on purpose by Sinclair, trying to tie up loose ends? Also at the murder scene, the cameras followed the clothes, did the keep an eye on the toilets to see Ezra leave dressed in other clothes? And who entered with those clothes? They keep just missing seeing Al involved in things….
  15. VBlew

    Chapter 10: Dinner

    This is amazing world building. Shawn has sci-fi references, but it’s still not the same as his current reality. Especially about no shame regarding sex. So he had an orgy on his 18th birthday? May have to watch that recording to know who he got with so he remembers when they meet in the future…
  16. VBlew

    Chapter 1

    I love this beginning and pacing, then I seem to recall this story. Are you redoing it?
  17. Elion and Holden are growing together. That fight scene flipped a switch in Holden. No choice but to save the man he is falling in love with. Rory taking charge was powerful. Not letting the opportunity for the bitch to even live to possibly escape and fight again. Love Thalion’s character.
  18. VBlew

    Chapter 1

    Very fun beginning of the spa day. Tickling along the way. Awesome treat by their boyfriends.
  19. VBlew

    Chapter 1

    This was amazingly well written. I felt for him never wanting to go back. Never been to a high school reunion myself… moved away and never felt the need to revisit. Thanks for the story SA.
  20. VBlew

    Track 15

    The guys learn that they signed contracts that clearly are not in their favor. And not able to perform their own music in the future without paying royalties… brutal reality. Now for a plan to wrest control back.
  21. That was intense. The end where he was told the risotto was delicious seemed really wrong. Like lying for effect rather than the truth.
  22. VBlew

    Chapter 4

    Seems like Killian has some psychic abilities, seeing Seth is something. tread carefully with this murder. Hopefully bring Novak in..,
  23. Loved this chapter. Mum wanting to know more about who her son was dating, all ok with it. The invite for them to the Grange. Interesting the band has a gay following, and they get their first dance in public, a huge step for Matt.
  24. Oh, just when it looked like everything was going well someone from Jace’s past appears. Was this before Noah? Guess we have to find out… nice cliffhanger
  25. VBlew

    After The Fall

    That was an ordeal, but in the end the police were actually looking out for him. Sperm donor is going to find out what happens for assault and filing false claims. I noticed that the money coming into the education account was not from his father? So who or what is the source? Maybe it will continue and he will ba able to complete his education. And then pursue his art.
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