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We got the spiel about their history, at least what the director wanted them to know. Then the info about being given 1 ability. Running into the hulking upper classman, we don’t have the analysis from the gAI about his stats yet, hopefully he can talk his way out if a possible problem…
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Joel, is trying to stay in the closet, but that’s not likely to last long if his older brother is a loudmouth, the rumor mill will be running, and if the camping trip has people from both towns, it may come up… Davin looks like he is being a friend. He said he’s not used to sleeping alone, “Gavin is spread out like a corpse in the other room”. So that’s why he wanted to sleep with Joel?
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You made the nerdy villain character really well, love the banter between Ryan and Dale. Hind of a sad history of Phoenix, but it turned out ok.
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That last scene with the feather was something, how much of his essence did Q give to Zac to make him immortal? So many questions.
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It’s fantastic they are being seen for the wonderful artists that they are.
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Great romantic short story.
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I was partially right about the suppression of seditious thinking, now we know it’s an implanted chip. About the doctor threatening he would be abused by upperclassmen, I think gAI will have something to do with that not happening. He jus has to possibly hide his growing multiple abilities…
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Finally, good communication. Now to break the news to mom and the band…
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Fantastic battle of light over darkness. Cain making another appearance giving Desmond his blessing too, and turning the tide of the battle. A baby is born. Love the feast scene. Since Kerian had a vision of a baby girl during his quest, seems like they will be having another child.
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Chapter 7: Noah may have bitten more than he could chew!
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: Noah may have bitten more than he could chew!
Wow, such an emotional chapter. Was this what happened to Noah’s father too? Now he is having his son run a whole department without really understanding delegation and the priority of the family he loves. Then that zinger at the end… “Little did they know…”??? -
Carter’s Order, has a nice ring to it…
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Beautiful chapter, hopefully something with their bonding has healing capabilities because the injuries Holden got while fighting seemed serious. Love their interplay and getting Cian’s blessing was exactly what Elion needed to truly feel his love. Was that a minor cliffhanger with the vibrating mirror at the end? Only so many people have those to communicate and it not like they have caller ID for missed calls.
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Lucien, really seems trapped in his own made up world of how everyone feels about him. He’s pushing away the brothers who really did care about him…not so sure about now. Bruno’s abuse really took a toll.
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So we did learn that Caleb had a friend visit him in the barn, often… and there is possibly a DNA sample available? Mrs. Fields is lonely and doesn’t have anyone now that her husband is gone…
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S2 E8: He Texted Me The Next Morning
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in S2 E8: He Texted Me The Next Morning
Troy needs to be clear with both of them, although Dylan has seriously stated his intentions… -
Violin sonatas & sex tips
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Violin sonatas & sex tips
Fun chapter, the music playing went well. It’s nice they are using the house in a casual manner, not all stuffy like how it had been in their youth. -
A beautiful ending to this story, even if a little sad for Rick and Randy.
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Chapter 3: Walking Barefoot
VBlew commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 3: Walking Barefoot
This was a very mean and demented way of treating someone. Maybe they will all learn something from the experience. And since they’re so young and inexperienced I didn’t notice an NDA being signed…. -
The knight promptly takes charge and they are off to rescue the kidnapped girl. So much hero worship going on, is the knight aware?
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All of the letters are amazing. I just realized this is how historians in the past pieced together people’s lives, through their correspondence. What is said, and what is insinuated.
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Friends & Family with Benefits
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Friends & Family with Benefits
Gavin and Jason should be honest with Matthew about their relationship, he know they both like men. Seems like Jason is living elsewhere, so having him move in at some point in the future would make sense. -
Chapter 16: Let's Get Moving— Off to College
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 16: Let's Get Moving— Off to College
All moved into his college room with a hot 1st roommate, and 2 more to arrive yet… maybe mid stroke in the next chapter? -
Sinclair is a pompous ass, and Jared did good defending his friend and his own honor. But the devastation coming to the defense contractor will hurt a good many people’s livelihoods, all for the greed of one man. A man who was being played himself. Ezra is in a precarious spot, seems like Xue will take care of him even if Enrico will not. In a good way, getting him a new identity. But that means he can’t stay in the UK with all their CCTV he would be spotted.
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Chapter 15: Two Short Weeks
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 15: Two Short Weeks
So besides AI being banned, seems like something is keeping people from subversive conversations?? -
Very calm, almost to calm. Everything is in place. Now on to tear it all apart…
