Jump to content

VBlew

Members
  • Posts

    4,133
  • Joined

  • Last visited

Everything posted by VBlew

  1. VBlew

    Chapter 22

    So these Khareans came and took Lali. Wonder if they started the blight too? Hoping to weaken the kingdom for an invasion?
  2. VBlew

    Chapter 1

    They made the journey… what will the repercussions be? Jacob just wants to support his dad, an Tommy is not letting go of Jacob.
  3. As rough as it was finding out Lyn does seem to be running away. Alexanders confession of why he got married was something that showed how much he cared for Lyn so that he would be able to continue his life after his mother’s death. Lyn needs to think really hard about that. There is a huge question of why Alexander did not reach out after he divorced, and the timeframe was up?
  4. I hope they don’t hurt Hudson. That would wreck Liam. Does Hudson see the car, know he’s being watched?
  5. VBlew

    Chapter 18

    Seems like Evan really needed to talk it out, but was embarrassed about what he thought had happened. Does Ryan know more?
  6. VBlew

    Chapter 21

    Glad Lalianus tried to heal the wheat on his own. The only question is will he burn himself out trying to do all the fields?
  7. Beautiful, I can just imagine the drawings and the allegory with martians, me living lives hiding in plain sight….
  8. VBlew

    "Nobody"

    So sad, being so controlled by the need to have a certain perception about the persona created about your life.
  9. Interesting. Theodore is still in denial these two are his mates, and will be part of his pack when they find them. Jack is his jubilant blunt self at breakfast. They leave tonight for the next part of their journey.
  10. VBlew

    Chapter 16

    Glad Ev is doing better, and finally trusted his caring partner to share what really was going on. The friends all noticed they were in a relationship…
  11. VBlew

    Chapter 18

    Oh, maybe Ben went too far? Or hit the wrong target? He may not get fucked after all, if that was what he was after in the first place…
  12. Very interesting that this earth has only had most of this level of tech for a few decades, yet it seems fully integrated into society. Is the military planning on expanding their reach further in space and that is why Shawn had been sent here with gAI?
  13. This chapter does seem to be a reflection of what Brad said in the grooms room. Alexander knocked him out of the competition by keeping a rad thinking Lyn was straight and he didn’t have any chance…. Even with Lyn crushing all over him.? Were they both so oblivious? Alexander really played a very long game.
  14. VBlew

    Chapter 35

    Seem like Kyle gave Sam one of the tainted batches of the bad drug on purpose, he is lucky to be alive… now that he gave out Kyle’s name there’s going to be hell to pay… Jesse already suspected something, this just confirmed it.
  15. VBlew

    Chapter 1

    The young parole officer did his homework, then visited his first client… and a good result was had by all…
  16. VBlew

    Chapter 1

    What a way to see that part of Europe!! And expand your education at the same time.
  17. VBlew

    Chapter 15

    Bleeding after anal penetration is Not something to dismiss no matter how embarrassed you feel… they did seem to have a good time both times. Just need to be more careful in the future….
  18. VBlew

    JQ-060109

    This was an amazing way to end this first book. We have the knowledge that Caleb was the only survivor of a genetic experiment, that he is fully aware of. Has an ability to become a sleeper personality behind a fully fictitious alias, who is Jacob in this story. But they are communicating with each other now. The future will be interesting. Since he had attended MIT, but does not seem to have been socialized with similar aged peers, will he let himself test to the level that he can excel at, or deliberately test down to stay in a place with others his age? The family, including Greg have really embraced him as a son, brother, nephew, excluding the nasty grandmother….. I can see him using his talents for good, investing and becoming a multimillionaire in his own right quickly, then leading life on his own terms. There is a background threat of the Cerberus AI following everything he does and identifying him as a threat in the future, or possibly helping him…
  19. VBlew

    Chapter 63

    Amazing chapter, loved the acceptance of Elias, and the confirmation by Kimo’s mother. The proposal at the end for a life commitment was brilliant.
  20. VBlew

    Chapter 17

    Is this crop blight something that Lalique can “heal”? They are so in love…
  21. VBlew

    Chapter 31

    Beautiful birthday chapter. Gavin and Lorraine both acknowledge his sexuality. Gavin knowing about Davin… Lorraine guessing about Roy. But we know Roy is straight… the interaction with Cody was honest, but way too short. They will be riding horses soon enough. Celia’s mother is a cuss word. I bet I know what Davin’s wish is….😊
  22. VBlew

    Track 24

    Jasper talks with Blake and gets his feelings out there. He still doesn’t know what he wants…. Maybe the time apart will be good for both of them.
  23. VBlew

    Chapter 15

    Torryn is very protective of his brother. Hopefully Yarlimar clarifies that he is much more than a sex toy to him. Lalianus is very intrigued by the aggressive Torryn.
  24. VBlew

    OB Chapter 4

    Thanks for a great ending to this story. You will be missed, I’ve loved reading all your work. You have a great style and sense of building environments where your characters live and breathe. Would love to read anything you decide to do in the future. All the best in you life wherever it takes you.
  25. The fact that Alexander has been serious about Lyn from the beginning is there in all of the flashbacks. Lyn just never saw it, an of course Alexander never wanted Brad to have a chance at what he wanted…. Unraveling all of this will be interesting. Will Lyn still want to be boyfriends? Will Brad calm down, he was striking out over what he lost out on, but it seems like he would not really have been good at a solid relationship back then anyhow, seems like a player on both sides male and female…. Will Bella still want a wedding? Or did Luke suddenly get feelings and tell his sister because he wants to be with Brad instead? So many questions…
×
×
  • Create New...