RafaelDe
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The characters you create are never mere sides of a similar coin. More like a mishmashed bag of souls...trick, false, two-faced to one-of-a-kind. Well writ, Bellezza
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Each week the poetry kept climbing, climbing, climbing until, finally...CRESCENDO! All that's left to say is, BRAVO and, maybe perchance a hope for ENCORE! I mean... one more wouldn't kill you...would it?!? Enjoyed molto!
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Sadly, powerful poetry is often wrought from the angst of loss and sorrow. Beautiful words, artfully knit. Blessing to you with prayers the souls so soon lost fly FREE🕊 Enjoyed molto!
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Limerick me tickled with a bone full of funny Some gin and a grin... right on the money Too many a vein...?!? His want did not wane! What came to a head was quite punny Loved your Limerick😂... obviously, and 17 was awesome! Enjoyed your offerings molto!
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The Part Of Me That Wants You
RafaelDe commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Part Of Me That Wants You
Nothing sexier than a naked man dressed in confidence. Rusty wears his like armor, a chink here or there to show his true self. Johnathan's is cloak-like, glimmering in the shadows of insecurity Whereas Maddox?!? Shi...oot, Maddox is so tightly swaddled, his is a skin all it's own...unbiddenly entwined and pure. Molto libidinoso!- 24 comments
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Emotions well stirred... Teardrops on my iPad Proving sorrow's nod Kitten cats and puppy dogs, Grim too quick to reap Spring's sweet kiss of promise Melting all that's still Rebirth peers around the bend Floating hope unbound Enjoyed molto!
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Super cute! Love the sense of changing pace throughout the poem. Rush of bubbling excitement Meandering pause to enjoy time well spent Flutter of sweet kisses...with sprinkles😳 Enjoyed Molto!
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Perfectly peaceful poem, with a sly side of Cheshire grin snuck in for good measure!
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Chapter 2: Pulse Nightclub Shooting
RafaelDe commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 2: Pulse Nightclub Shooting
Healing is tough schtuff, but with forgiveness comes peace. For every bad, there is good For every hate, there is love For every despair, there is hope Thank you for your words and remembrance. Enjoyed molto!! -
Tarzan-like Uncoiffed curls frame his face Sinuous muscles unfurl to pounce Leaps and bounds eat moonlit ground, with a frenzied lust Scents of pleasure's promise lie...in wait Coyly basked, he's tethered tight MINE! ARHOOoooOH!
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Chapter 8: Psychotic Plunge
RafaelDe commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 8: Psychotic Plunge
Poor Dirk and the bear he was born into, now walking in the shoes of those he once disdained... WoW! Even karma thinks you're a damned bitch and in serious need of being slapped a vagina. Naught Nice! -
Hope is the soap that keeps the soul clean! Really well knit story...keep on keeping on!
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Readers, why do you read a story but not Comment?
RafaelDe replied to Former Member's topic in The Lounge
To create; divine! Feed the soul, though ego fasts ...Fuhgeddaboutit -
For every evil, there is an equal and opposite good. With no Eike, there would be no Cyn. Eike is, in his own right, a blessing
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Haven't been on GA in many a months. With wild curly tickling at my chops, popped on site the other day only to come across your cathartic tale. Had to come out to say, "Well writ, Signore!" Looking forward to next installment.
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Whisper me sweet nothings As you lick my ear Tell me that you love me Even if untrue Fill my head with little lies As you steal me way For I am your menagerie Naked for your pleasure; Willingly penned in Undulating not for show But basking in your favor
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Grazie for this beautiful poem...truly an entree for the mind to munch on with good friends and a glass of vino. My two cents...?!? Time is man's invention... impatience with a side of blinders. But Once dust is dust, and spirit's free... joker's surely wild! Happy Springshine🌞
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My Miss Marguerite - Chapter 3
RafaelDe commented on RafaelDe's story chapter in My Miss Marguerite - Chapter 3
That she was. Being my first "relationship", she started me on the road of responsibility, patience, fierce loyalty and unconditional love. She showed me if you love completely, without reservation, you will never want for love...never feel the need to take what's not freely given. She was my Lil Scottish Yodita! Grazie, Bella. Your words here, and throughout GA, are like little warm hugs! You, Missy, are a blessing! Happy Easter Sprinshine🌞 -
As spring surrounds us with the sweet smells of life born from the nutrients of a slumbering death, I'm reminded of the first puppy that was ever labeled "Mine". Back home me mum raises Scottie Dogs, and I was given responsibility of one wee little runt that quickly dug her way deep into my heart! This is her story... Tough lil' scottie dog Fearless with his hardened head Cement pond his doom R.I.P. Duff Or so the story's told His daughter was my favored pet
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Powerful words and emotions, indeed! What's sad is that you can "foolproof" a fool 'till you're balls are blue, but foolhardy to believe he'll do more than sit and spin for his own happy ending. Just seems to be the ways and means of things.. Thank you for the thought provoking poem...I enjoyed molto!
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You have all my senses on heightened alert! The nape of his neck curving wide into strong shoulders The clink of fork to plate tinkling in my ears Musky smell of man...hardness of co...OH...Wait! I think that's Me 😳 Never mind...🤐
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Echoing everyone above, while adding my own wee appreciation of your line..."she's got lures in her tackle box" LMAO 🤣 The visual of her girly bits laced with hooks and lure chomp, chomp, chomping like a meat grinder gave me great GriN! Simultaneously sending cold shivers tingling long my spine...mere thought had ma popo inching upside my inside!😳 Truly is a beautifully melodic tale! Bravissimo 👏
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The mechanical, rhythmic pacing through the rolling water was palpable... like a familiar touch of lovers. Night's bright sky, while cocooned in dark, allows Rick to caress his ever present hurt in a very raw and personal way. The pianist, I thinks, will become the catalyst that warms his cockled brrrrrr. Beautifully played! I'm late to the show, but looking forward to catching up!
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High stress situations sometimes result in heedless acts off passion. By no means does an emotionally charged kiss promise anything but choppy waters and a braying ass chomping at a bit...or two!?! Interesting trio you've painted... Who will be the thorny rose? Who will be it's soil, attaching self to root? And who will wear the pirate's suit offering his booty?!?
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Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
RafaelDe commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
Silly blind boys in LOVE! Will hind's sight do them any favors? Heck... will whoever's tapped even see the top coming?!? Or that he came at all? Any who, I'm piqued with goosies😳 from tip to root and itch'n fer ever MORE!- 50 comments
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