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Thank you @FrankD for completing a wonderful story. I really enjoyed reading both of your stories. Looking forward to part three.
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You did a great job of presenting Frank as a likeable man @Soren Kraft. He previously just seemed like a caged animal lacking a personality or soul. I hope Marc has found his dad in Frank, and I am glad they are taking things somewhat slowly and cautiously.
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Enjoyable story. Great to see a fun-loving Bill still being a faithful partner.
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I am feeling so many mixed emotions. Colt is in love and being pressured by Noah to murder George. Noah is being irrational (due to long term abuse by George) where he shoots down all alternatives to murdering George. Colt has had Vincent, Amy, and Michelle all offer to listen and try to help him. I am just hoping Colt wakes up and uses an alternative to cutting the brake lines. What the hell would Colt do if George suddenly decides to make Noah go with him fishing?
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Great story @FrankD. I am disappointed I did not discovery it earlier. You created good memorable characters. On to your second book now. Any new releases planned soon?
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Fun chapter. Must ask.....Do the Will-haters now hate granola bars too?
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The beauty and depth of this story is indescribable. I had tears in my eyes the entire time the orchestra was having the rehearsal. Thank you @Nuno R.F.C.R for a truly unforgettable story.
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Another excellent chapter @Albert1434. Johnny finally succeeded in earning a role. Glad that Sam's and Bruce's relationships with Johnny were clarified.
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I am cautiously optimistic that the group is going to support Noah. Noah is too much in his own head to realize it though. Good to know that Brett's dad is not a fan of George.
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Good chapter. Still getting to know what Levi's really like and how he was raise by Julie and family. The end of chapter shows Levi wants some type of relationship with Matt.
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Together again on their own terms. Great chapter @Nuno R.F.C.R.
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You gave us some great bits and pieces here @CasualWanderer82. Now I am very anxious for the next chapter to give them more meaning. Great chapter!
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A very deep and thought-provoking story. I am sorry I waited so long to read it, especially since I've enjoyed everything else you have written. Thank you for sharing your creativeness with us all @Wayne Gray.
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You are a true gentleman.
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Noah is playing Colt for everything he wants. Colt has morals and a conscious that Noah has lost over the years of abuse. What happens when the pressure on Colt becomes too much and he cannot please Noah sexually?
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Enjoying the buildup of sexual tension between these two. If and when they hookup it is going to be incredibly hot.
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Whatever you do @Nuno R.F.C.R, ignore the negative comments from those who believe themselves to be literary experts on here.
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I am not sure how you keep topping yourself @Nuno R.F.C.R. The scene of Julian at the piano was absolutely beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing the beauty of your writing. So, so happy Mark is with Julian!
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Great story, some very creative features for the safe room. Looking forward to future series!
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Noah is out of control; his motive is justified but his plan is misconstrued. Colt has got to wake up and realize the plan will put him in prison after juvie.
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Really a fun story, loved it!
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I find Trevor an extremely interesting guy for some reason and we really don't have that much background.
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Cann't wait for tomorrow's chapter. Great story Lee!
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The self-dialogue and the dialogue that Johnny had with Sam was so revealing and captured Johnny's reality @Albert1434. I feel like I truly know Johnny now, not just the character. This feels like a perfect chapter. Thank you @Albert1434.
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I think you are on to something about James, I think he may be jealous of Taggert. James in a past chapter had no problem getting rid of Taggert. I agree Taggert feels responsible for hurting Ash, but it may be just his nature, or it could be from the hurt and injuries Taggert has had in his past that makes him want to comfort Ash.
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