Terry P
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Thank you for having the battle itself in only one chapter. I don't think I could have handled it (LOL). What a great chapter with a great end. I'm glad Midori killed Namik rather than him being brought into the city alive to face trial. The end was inevitable and it will really help reinforce Midori's standing.
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I hope nothing happened to Lucas. Maybe he just went to the bathroom and Grant understandably panicked. I'll keep my fingers crossed.
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I usually avoid any stories with BDSM in it, but this has captured me and I'm thoroughly enjoyingit.
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This was the last thing I expected. Dreadful. Huon was so young and with so many plans. Tissues were definitely needed for this chapter.
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With all these different countries showing an interest in the Island I'm thinking it's more about curiosity than anything else. They have to know about each other. It'll be interesting to see how this turns out. If they knew Huon like we do they'd turn and hightale it right out of there.
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This is great! I love it. I wish Chris stood up to Gregory like he did before. So what, if we had been a "whore". The old man new right from the start.
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I enjoyed this chapter. It was a surprise to see Grant get somebody in his life romantically. It's about time. I had thought that person might be Kyle, but alas it was not to be. I wonder if Kyle had any hopes of that happening?
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Good first chapter. I'm really interested to see where this story goes.
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This was my second time reading this story and I enjoyed it just as much.
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I know it's a really tough decision for Eric to make, but once he does he'll feel so much better and freer. It'll all be uphill after that.
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Great chapter with a couple of big surprises. Thanks. I would like to suggest you give a lighter background to the story rather than the gray. It makes reading it a little more difficult.
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We're getting really close to a battle and a victory by Prince Yoshi. Exciting!
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I wouldn't be surprised if he is in the office because of Mr. Darlington complaining to the headmaster. Big mistake on his part if so.
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So sorry to hear about Murray. It seems like suicide, but knowing Lance and the Headmaster I would definitely believe they had something to do with it. As for Mandy sure got a surprise. I wonder if we'll hear any more about it knowing that Lance is involved and Robert is aware of what's going on as well. I don't recall seeing Robert talk to Bart about this and I'm curious about that.
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Arabella has a boyfriend! That's so cool. They're all great kids though and each in their own special way. I love this story. Can't pick a bone with any of it.
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I'm so looking forward to Nan meeting Levi. It'll be a riot.
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It's probably better to focus on one as you've been doing. If you have too much on the go at once it can be overcoming, unless you need a change from time to time.
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I somehow missed this story only to find it was last updated in October 2016. Are you planning on continuing it?
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We Lift Them Up To The Lord
Terry P commented on Sean J Halford's story chapter in We Lift Them Up To The Lord
I enjoyed this very much. I read it because Sean wrote it and I like reading his stories. Thanks for this. -
This was my second time reading this story. I read it about 4 years ago. I thoroughly enjoyed it - again. Thanks
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Good ending. I like that you ended the story here. Though it wasn't long and some of us (myself included) have been critical of Josh I think many of us have experienced the same emotions in the past. Falling in love with someone who was not attainable because they were already in a committed relationship or straight brings up all kinds of emotions in us and we don't think rationally. The "rejection" is hard to deal with. Thanks, Stephanie
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Chapter 2 - Troy Fucks Up
Terry P commented on CarlHoliday's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Troy Fucks Up
I wasn't too sure when I started reading this story, but decided to give it a try. Now after only 2 chapters I am starting to get hooked. It's a very interesting context. Now it's getting even more complex with the appearance of Mary. Where did she come from? -
I'm not sure Josh has really come to his senses about loving Glenn. I sure hope that is true so that Glenn doesnt get hurt anymore - especially after they marry. Glenn is a great guy and good for Josh. Life could be really good for them. He just has to stop being so lovey dovey with Gregg (always these long hugs, etc.). Just give a quick hug and shake hands - that'd let us, and especially Glenn know that he was being honest with Glenn as well as himself.
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And I'm starting to not like Josh. He's so immature.
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I don't know why Greg should apologize for hurting Josh. That's all Josh. He was expecting more than he could ever get from Greg and almost wanted Greg to have an affair with him even though he was straight. Maybe that will change in the future,but it doesn't change the past.
