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So the "old man" is a realm lord and a minor one at that which is apparently by design and preference....He seems to have figured out much, but does he suspect Kieran is really the high king's son? And will his probing of Mr. B expose his role? And Widderkin means gay!
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Despite the comments about keeping it wrapped, teens are teens and even smart ones can get carried away...or not. Also condoms can fail and break. So I don't think anyone should be too judgmental or jump to conclusions. Of course CJ's initial reaction will be interesting and Owen's will be predictably practical. With much of the chapter setting up the introduction and explanation for Lincoln Duvall Ericson, I suspect him to be a recurring character as Carlos doesn't waste space on a one-off character. So we've been warned, only five more chapters in the book... Any news on the title for the next book? As usual, nice job and I'd like more please!
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A Pretty Hard Situation
Daddydavek commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in A Pretty Hard Situation
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"Welcome, young traveller! All is well and the Realm greets you with gratitude and wonder." So they have traveled to a Realm that greets Kieran with gratitude and wonder. Which I'm guessing it is a realm which has been hidden from the Elven kingdom awaiting discovery by the young traveler Kieran and his cohort. Now I really can't wait for next week's chapter....
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I somehow suspect that some of the mouthieness is for show and Carlos certainly knows how to write a good show... More please!
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Yes indeed, no one can claim that CJ doesn't plan and execute and not just for himself but for his friends too. So introducing Senator Duckworth made sense and Brad is starting to get the idea that he does have a special support network. The Senator's insistence that Brad should not limit himself and jumping on his idea that now he couldn't be cop with an example of someone who did despite everything was a nice bonus as well. Well done. As you'll note, the old grandpa has been busy and just got to this chapter. Unfortunately, the coming week looks to be just as busy!
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Just got time to read this, and wanted to add a word of praise. This world does sound a bit like Eden and I still think the old man will play a significant role or turning point in the story....
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The good news is that the odds of Aiden getting laid just became a certainty. The bad news is that he thinks it will be a hook-up...
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Congrats on an information packed chapter that was the fastest read ever! I could listen to the guys discussing the details for the house forever. With a big budget, they should be able to get just about anything they want and get it done right with salvaged and reclaimed wood where it can be used. A green house which is high tech and user friendly is just what you'd expect from these millennials ! Just one more thought...Liz had her eggs frozen and these guys may down the road decide their child needs a sibling too..... More please!
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The whole story to date has been a dance of another kind and perhaps the next chapter will be an example of dirty dancing??
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Well done! All of it! You realize of course that CJ is basically a manipulative personality with a good heart? I'm loving it. More please!
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So sad that Aiden is so clueless when it come to Heath....
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The old man...I wonder who he really is and I have a few ideas. More please!
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Brad's perspective on that war is authentic...and so are his ongoing problems. Hopefully, his support network will be sufficient. Diaz was dealt with, but somehow I think he got off to easy and I suspect CJ thinks that way too. However, Owen did the responsible thing and CJ understands that too. More please!
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The beast in Jed and Wolfie seem to have reached an accommodation and level of trust. Larry is something else and I suspect even he isn't sure what. Maurice is another freak in a story that seems to be filled with them.... The good news is that the sex is first-rate! More please!
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When Will You Be Home?
Daddydavek commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in When Will You Be Home?
Somehow I expect Heath to take an active interest and a direct intervention to see Sparks job takes a turn for the better... Oh yeah he is really into the youngster with the unbelievably sweet ass. -
"If I had followed my better judgment always, my life would have been a very dull one." Edgar Rice Burroughs
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Bret knows how to handle his hot headed Cubans! And the devoted dad and son are quick to kiss and make up!
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Being a bit possessive is not a bad trait. Obsessing and thinking your BF is/would be doing something behind your back is destructive to your relationship. Never having any straight friends except his straight friends is a bit unusual and I'd advise you to respect boundaries and encourage the others to respect them too. That's all you can do and hopefully things will sort themselves out over time. The relationship is only just a year old and it should be growing for the rest of your lives if you nourish it and each other.
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Chapter 25 It's all just hot air ?
Daddydavek commented on FSELL's story chapter in Chapter 25 It's all just hot air ?
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Wolfgang shook Larry's hand the blood drained from Wolfgang's face which tells me he has already learned something.... More please!
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Rhys and Kieran are a powerful duo and the common sense of the others is a truly steadying force. Allies are good. Big and powerful ones are even better. More please!
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Chapter 1 - Riding the Beast
Daddydavek commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Riding the Beast
This story flows well and fast! Now I'm wondering if Wolfgang will reciprocate and be able to take Jed's passion? A whole week?- 63 comments
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The bunny isn't only lying to Heath, but also himself. I suspect a reality check is due. At least I hope so!
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Thank the goddess for the Connor!
