Ben, while sex is intrinsic to human beings and is a part of this story, it is not really a story just about sex. Having said that, there are some hot scenes in the story, but they are not written as JO material. For those kinds of stories, Nifty may be a better site.
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What an inspiring post! Despite all the hard work and challenges, it seems you are getting some real satisfaction in this job. Thanks Matt for letting us know what's going on with you! DDK
The latest chapter of Streak starts with Zach, moves on to JJ and ends with Brad.
JJ and Alex manage to get hot. (Jeremy was spot on with his comment earlier.)
Brad gets a little advice from everyone and just maybe realizes he he has to let go.
It is a well done chapter, but in my estimation the writing describing Zach's little speech at the team meeting was Arbour at his best.
Poor Brad. I think he gets it, but it is really difficult.
You did an awesome job laying it all out concerning JJ .
However, the job you did writing the scene with Zach and the team meeting was Arbour at his best. Well done!
Exactly!
I think that with their shared link and being able to mind-meld that Abel III and Dennis are about as comfortable and secure in their love as two people that age can be.
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You give us a taste and then suddenly it's over and we have to wait a week for more.....
Why do I get the impression that the journey stays a bit bumpy?
A weakened Dennis and Abel III do find some additional fulfillment with more than just each other. It may just be a sign that they are not back to 100 percent themselves however....Remember though, that Dennis and Abel III do share an open link and they do mind-meld which is certainly the rest do not have.
As usual you pick up the relationship! I am so glad you are reading and commentating! Thanks! DDK
I think you have the right of it. The fact that the prisoner's were being kept in seclusion, sedated and that there were two of them made it that much worse. Using his new found power while he was drunk himself may have made its use a little less subtle as well.
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Chapter 27
After Effects
The next morning came all too quickly and we drug ourselves out of bed. For the first time in more years than we could remember, neither of us awoke with an erection, nor were we in any mood for making love. We moved mechanically into the refresher shower unit and scrubbed each other quickly and then started the drying function and quickly finished and grabbed towels. We knew the repercussions of silencing on those who participated would be severe and la
I think the timing of Matt asking to talk to JJ and doing it the way he did made it obvious to JJ, that this was mostly Brad's idea. Will would have handled it with more of an understanding of how JJ processes.
Now JJ wants to talk to Brad and Brad will have to decide if he wants to be the dad who takes care of things and thinks ahead and risk alienating JJ, or the dad that let's his kids test their wings and promises to be there whether they succeed or not and need help.
It's a terrible choice for parents who want to protect their kids from life.....
Perhaps the paranoia of being caught helps keep them in check and then too the power doesn't manifest until after age 21 or thereafter so much of the growing up has hopefully occurred. With the power comes responsibility and Abel III seems to have that,
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