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Now, you see, that's why pen and paper sometimes wins over laptop... far easier to hide I have had... experience... with queues, beaurocracy, DVLC, post offices, officials etc... but I can honestly say I have never exprienced anything like that while getting a sex change and being chatted up by a cop. THank you for sharing.

You are so absolutely gorgeous I would so like to rape your mind. I guess it's impossible to lick chocolate off a mind but I'd try.

my favourite favourite favourite musical is Les Miserables. Of the older ones I sob my heart out still at Carousel (When you Walk Through A Storm *sob sob* ) On a lighter note Half a Sixpence. My daugher can recite word for word Calamity Jane and I love Seven Brides for Seven Brothers is classic... the Sabine women were a sobbing Of the newer ones apart from Les Mis I love Phantom... I actually have some one the songs on my only source of walking music, alongside Black Sabbath, DragonForce, Band of Skulls etc. I also like Chicago a lot and The Woman In White which was a surprising visit as we had booked Les Mis and it was cancelled at the last minute. Hmmm

Ok I have SOOOOO missed the boats. Many apologies to everyone I missed. HUGE hugs to you all especially Tanenbrae because he has a fallen angel as his background

Oh absolutey definitely don't grow up.

Gosh that's some list. I have to say that I agree wholly with most of it. I think pehaps Dvorak is my favourite because he has so much life in his work. It makes me feel that we are doing what he is playing... hunting, watching rivers

YOU are looking FINNNEEE and I still think you've got one of the most beautiful pairs of eyes on GA. Of course Patrick has to win but you and Lacey are close Are you trying to suggest you were born in 1922 and are really an immortal... better not be a vampire or it's fight to the death Seriously, you are both some nice looking guys

Okay, so my response to the last comment vanished so I will have to say thank you twice. Don't worry about Sandi, she isn't going to be around for long. What do you mean by'go with' her. I mean there is less than no chance of a relationship... she's a WOMAN... but he does go with her... baaaad idea

That was quite a chapter. It's not looking so dark for Jack after all. Who would have thought that problems breathing eventually get him the help he needs emotionally. I like the sound of the psychiatrist. I hope that he wll turn out to give Jack the guidance he needs and should have had from his father. I get the impression that his own family is not going to be too happy about it though. And the research project... how intersting. Looking forward to reading more

Do you hear the people sing - les Miserables You're the one that I want - grease TimeWarp - Rocky Horror

HAHA I think that might be wise

This time last year I had no idea what Glee was. I had seen adverts and never really fancied it. Then my daughter came. I watched an episode and now it's like heroin. If I don't get my fix I have terrible withdrawals In case you hadn't worked it out. I am a born again Glee watchere and I don't think it is possible to talk too much about it

I have pretty much decided on the YHA. It's pretty basic but I really don't mind that. I've spent enough times in barns and roundhouses to be happy with just a bed

Thank you for leaving a comment. It is always a huge pleasure to have a review. Most of all I'm glad you liked the story. Don't worry about the writing. I could no more give it up than stop breathing

I'm gutter. My son had GH 5 for Xmas and we haven't kicked the addiction yet. I can't stand the thought that we won't get another fix

I'm not telling you what I'm addicted to eating

Oh god... Andy being soppy and wearing a tiara... now that's an image I'm so happy for you darling. I am a little concerned that it will take the edge off the grumyness but hey... Have a wonderful trip and a wonderful life... you are going to make SUCH wonderful parents. This is SO going to be your year hun

Exploration is good I'm glad you're actually dealing with adults at last... I mean real adults who appreciate that people even themselves make mistakes and aren't afraid to apologise. I apprecaite the bad back and hope it gets better soon here's to a good year

That's the highlight of... ummm... Just... the highlight.. No? I really couldn't believe River's jealous! very very weird! He's just being selfish

I don't know.... IS it better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all?? I guess I swing from one to the other depending on how much I miss him at the time. At the moment I think it's absolutely true... the cost is too high... not that there is any choice in paying it.

I agree with Paya but it only works if there's someone close to be horny with

There are parts in the story where your descriptions just blow me away. i can't lie and I don't think you would want me to, but there are some placed where the linking up parts are a little strained. However... the story is woven in such delicate threads and beautiful colours, with gold and silver, as well as black and grey and such vivid details like sparkling jewels into the tapestry that it doesn't matter at all if there are one or two worn spots here and there. The story is unfolding gently and sweetly and it is leaving me wanting more. I like the fluid style with short snappy sentences giving sharp highlights to the generally more flowing style. Frosty's been scattering commas I can tell She has basket loads of them I have a personal fondness for commas so I think such a generous sharing of the little buggers should be encouraged Of the two I think I am growing to love Dan more, although Matt is totally adorably. I like the way that you are not rushing the sex. Matt's reserve and Dan's understanding are perhaps the sweetest part of the story. Although I am looking forward to reading your take on a full on steamy sex scene

I haven't read this before. I wish I had. Like others have said it's really honest. It's raw and it hurts. I have so felt like the dog pawing at the door... I still am. You've made me think about it actually but that's for another time and place, the important thing is that it made me think. It makes me think about a lot of things. I think one of my biggest fears for my son is that he ever gets to the stage that he is not ale to talk to me. Talking is not always the answer I appreciate that but it certainly helps. I think that by the time you get to the point your guy has there really isn't anything to say to make an impression; to draw him back from the edge of the void. It is so sad that no one noticed before so that they could have stopped it ever getting to this place. I can very much relate to this boy in many ways. There are aspects in what he is feeling that I have felt. I think that there are aspects in him that everyone has felt and that is a huge strength in the story.

I think that one thing that spoils my consideration of what makes 'the one/ is that I have already had him and nothing I have had, seen, dreamed or desired since has come close to matching him. We were parted by others and I've never got over it. There have been others... I've had two 10 year long relatioships and two children but... they weren't him and, truth be told I have spent more than half my life waiting for him. We were very, very different... from different worlds but he was perfect to me, for all his faults and the biggest one was that he was so rash and never thought things through. i tried my best to ground him and mostly I did but in the end it was his hot head that got us into trouble and parted us so I guess I wasn't grounding enough for him.

Nice, I am no a criminal lawyer but I like the tone. I'm glad you've made the lawyers real people. I know it would amaze you but there are those out there who don't think we are The legalities are intersting to me both because I am a lawyer and because I am not a criminal or american lawyer. However, I think you have written it so that it will be interesting to non lawyers too. I am feeling more confident that the feared bombshell won't hit but we haven't seen the defence lawyers yet. It's intersting what you say about speaking to the defence lawyers. That wouldn't be possible here.