NaPoWriMo - 2017 - 14. April 14 : A lot to Regret

"Plating a heart for slaughter"

Good poem. Thank you.

asamvav111 brought up a good line - one that struck me as well. 

I like the pace of this poem...it's almost hypnotic. It has a really strong concept (one I may steal borrow sometime in the future...? Hehe). 

That line also got to me as well.

This was a great poem, Emi. There was so much there I could relate to.

On 15/04/2017 at 2:34 PM, asamvav111 said:

"Plating a heart for slaughter"

Good poem. Thank you.

Thanks for quoting that line and it was what I actually felt when I got betrayed by my Ex. And all those things I regret on...

Thanks for the nice words and reading and reviewing.

~Emi. 

On 17/04/2017 at 11:34 PM, AC Benus said:

asamvav111 brought up a good line - one that struck me as well. 

 

I like the pace of this poem...it's almost hypnotic. It has a really strong concept (one I may steal borrow sometime in the future...? Hehe). 

Thanks for the great review and continuous support. I am you felt like that. And I don't mind you stealing/borrowing/whatevering the concept if felt like it. Thanks for everything.

~Emi. 

On 21/04/2017 at 9:24 AM, Lisa said:

That line also got to me as well.

 

This was a great poem, Emi. There was so much there I could relate to.

I am sorry, it's relates you. I have done so many mistakes I regret on, but I wish it was just me. But we're normal people, right!? Thanks for reading and reviewing Lisa.

~Emi. 

On 01/05/2017 at 3:16 AM, Valkyrie said:

I agree with the other reviewers, that is a very powerful line.  I also love the last two lines.  Great job.

Thanks Val. I am glad you liked it. And thanks for the nice words.

~Emi.