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    Emi GS
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NaPoWriMo - 2017 - 6. April 6 : Happy Marriage Day Sis

Today I don't have time for any poetry as today is my lovely Cousin's marriage. So this little Reverse Haiku is for her. Happy married life Sis...

Happy Marriage Day Sis

Bottom lips spread wide, they smile
Both the signs taken
Bonded their life forever

A big thanks to Val for helping me by providing me the prompts. Thanks to all for reading, liking, and reviewing. All mistakes are surely mine.

 

~Emi.

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Valkyrie
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Congratulations to your cousin :D  What a nice tribute to her special day :)

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AC Benus

Another very compact poem, but like your Words one, it shows how images can hit hard. Very nicely done. 

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On 07/04/2017 at 6:35 PM, Lyssa said:

This is sweet and makes one smile. :)

 

Yeah it's really a sweet moment seeing them smiling on their wedding. They look cute. I am glad this tiny poem made you feel the happiness and smiles. Glad you liked it. And thanks for reading and reviewing Lyssa. I appreciate it. :)

~Emi. 

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On 07/04/2017 at 10:35 PM, Parker Owens said:

Ahhh, such a lovely description. Beautiful to think of.

 

I got happy tears seeing them both. That was a very happy moment for all of our family. A beautiful sight of them smiling. Thank you for lovely words. I appreciate you for reading and reviewing Parker. :)

~Emi. 

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On 08/04/2017 at 1:01 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Aw so sweet.. best wishes for a long and happy life together. 

 

Thanks tim. Thanks for the wishes. I am glad this little piece touched your heart. :)

~Emi. 

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On 08/04/2017 at 3:37 AM, Valkyrie said:

Congratulations to your cousin :D  What a nice tribute to her special day :)

 

Thanks Val. I am glad you liked it. But my cousin still doesn't know that I had written it for her. That's a little sad,  but it's fine. I'll present(gift) it to her in the right time. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

~Emi. 

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On 08/04/2017 at 4:55 AM, AC Benus said:

Another very compact poem, but like your Words one, it shows how images can hit hard. Very nicely done. 

 

Why aren't I blushing!? That's very sweet compliment. I am glad I made it right and made it touch your heart. Thanks for reading and reviewing Ben. I really really appreciate it. :)

~Emi. 

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On 10/04/2017 at 9:54 PM, Defiance19 said:

Sweet and short, and message definitely delivered. Nice job! Congrats to your cousin. 

 

Thank you so much Aunt Def. I am glad message delivered and you liked it. Thanks for the compliments and thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

~Emi. 

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10 hours ago, Lisa said:

This poem painted a pretty picture, Emi. Congrats to your cousin! :)

 

Thanks Lisa. I am glad you could see them smile and all. It's a really a pretty picture seeing them both smiling. I am happy for them. And thanks for the wishes, as well as for reading and reviewing. :)

~Emi. 

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