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    Emi GS
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NaPoWriMo - 2017 - 16. April 16 : My pretty little angel

Prompt : Concerning Angels
Write about angels — directly, obliquely, humorously, mockingly or however. Just let an angel somehow into your poem.

My baby doll, my brother's daughter, has grown into a fine girl. Yesterday at the engagement ceremony, she suddenly looked mature than her age. Gosh! She is growing fast...

 

My pretty little angel

About eight years ago
I hold her precious
As her look fall on me
She never leaves my hand
And never sleep
Until I hold her in my arms

'Now' was a different story
She looks like an angel
But in a mature way
She still hold my hands
But in a royal grasp
She still sleep in my lap
But with cautious mind

A little baby
Was now acute one
My little angel
Was now dazzling princess
This beautiful girl
In about time, will be a fine woman soon

:thankyou: to Val for helping me by providing me the prompts. :thankyou: to all for reading, liking, and reviewing. All mistakes are undoubtedly mine.

~Emi.

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AC Benus

I agree with Parker - a lovely poem. The images are all couched in white :) 

 

Thanks for posting it 

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On 17/04/2017 at 4:42 PM, Parker Owens said:

This is a great story you tell in this poem. You do it with grace and economy. Lovely. 

 

That's so generous of you thinking of me like that. Thanks for the kind words Parker. I really appreciate it...

 

~Emi. 

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On 17/04/2017 at 11:25 PM, AC Benus said:

I agree with Parker - a lovely poem. The images are all couched in white :) 

 

Thanks for posting it 

 

Thanks Ben. Your support is always makes believe in myself. Thanks for always supporting me...

 

~Emi. 

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On 21/04/2017 at 9:33 AM, Lisa said:

This is a beautiful poem for your beautiful niece. :)  They do grow up fast! :(

 

Yes, you are right. They do grow up fast. She has been very mature in her behaviour and always brilliant yet act silly. She is really my angel. And I love her with my heart. Thanks for reading and the comments. I appreciate your support...

 

~Emi. 

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