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    Emi GS
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NaPoWriMo - 2017 - 9. April 9 : Scars for Life

Prompt : Scars
Tell the story of one of your own scars or a scar on someone you love. Alternatively, you might speak more generally about scars, or about what to focus on instead of scars

Scars for Life

Scars; they just don't leave marks.
They make impressions on memories
And holds mysterious emotions
Along with them; the pain.

Scars; they just don't give pain.
They give reasons to remember
And carry enormous puzzles
Along with them; the strength.

Scars; they just don't brace you.
They build up your self esteem
And or raze deprecation
Along with them; the prize.

Scars; they just don't teach you.
They mold you for better
And set some examples
Along with them; grant life.

A big thanks to Val for helping me by providing me the prompts. Thanks to all for reading, liking, and reviewing. All mistakes are surely mine.

~Emi.

Copyright © 2017 Emi GS; All Rights Reserved.
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Lisa

I love the way you talk about the emotional aspects of scars and how, in the long run, they're better for one's character and one's self-esteem. The physical scars themselves don't matter; it's what's inside that always counts.

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AC Benus

wow, I hope you don't mind me saying this, but what an advancement as a poet you've made since last April's collection. Not that there's anything lacking in those poems, but an example like this one just shines. 

 

It's powerful, and it's composed with such a confident hand. wow :) 

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Valkyrie
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There's a nice message here.  Scars can be looked at as life lessons to learn from and embrace.  Nice job. :)

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Emi GS
On 10/04/2017 at 10:00 PM, Defiance19 said:

I enjoyed your first nine days Emi. looking forward to more.  

 

Thanks Aunt Def. :hug: I am glad you enjoyed reading them. I really really appreciate your efforts to read and review my work. 

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On 14/04/2017 at 8:26 AM, Lisa said:

I love the way you talk about the emotional aspects of scars and how, in the long run, they're better for one's character and one's self-esteem. The physical scars themselves don't matter; it's what's inside that always counts.

 

You are hundred percent right Lisa. It's always the inner strength that shows a man. Not his appearance. Not his physical scars. Thanks for the nice words about my poem. I appreciate it. 

 

~Emi. 

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On 17/04/2017 at 11:47 PM, AC Benus said:

wow, I hope you don't mind me saying this, but what an advancement as a poet you've made since last April's collection. Not that there's anything lacking in those poems, but an example like this one just shines. 

 

It's powerful, and it's composed with such a confident hand. wow :) 

 

I am kissing my hand everytime I read your comment on my poem. And I am very glad you felt like that. It's not just me. You and others from here continuously supporting me a lot. I was a flat immature when I started to writing. But all the support and all of your suggestions made me learn a lot and may have resulted in good. Thanks for all the support and for the nice comments.

 

~Emi. 

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On 01/05/2017 at 3:00 AM, Valkyrie said:

There's a nice message here.  Scars can be looked at as life lessons to learn from and embrace.  Nice job. :)

 

Yes, they. And it was the exact thing I wanted to say by this poem. And thank you for figuring it out and thanks for the nice words. :)

 

~Emi. 

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