Moggy's Mutterings - 16. It's Raining

Such a sad poem; a story wrapped in sorrow. 

13 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

Such a sad poem; a story wrapped in sorrow. 

thank you. nice description 

Wow... so real. A complete story here, played out before my eyes. Sad, reflective, and powerful. Well done, moggy... shook me up a little.  

52 minutes ago, Headstall said:

Wow... so real. A complete story here, played out before my eyes. Sad, reflective, and powerful. Well done, moggy... shook me up a little.  

thanks gary.  i may have lived it, and wrote it but having others read and understand it, moves me the most

Wow..I don't know what else to say...In few lines you told a complete story!! Just...WOW!!

1 hour ago, Aviana said:

Wow..I don't know what else to say...In few lines you told a complete story!! Just...WOW!!

thanks. writing these tings is cathartic for me. keeping them short and poem like is the challenge 

So much raw emotion in this.  Wonderfully written, if sad  

On 9/15/2017 at 7:12 PM, LitLover said:

So much raw emotion in this.  Wonderfully written, if sad  

thanks painful then, bittersweet now. everything i've gone through, goes into making me, me. and i don't think i'm such a bad me, sometimes i even like me

I don't usually care for poetry but these are excellent.  I write poetry for myself just to clear my mind.  However, I identify with so many of these.