CassieQ

That's a cool tidbit! Thanks for sharing this.

Exactly. The fight scene with Malik was one of the earliest scenes I wrote for this story. The failure to protect is a source of guilt and shame for Rhaelce as well. Amocava. His motivations are murky. He does. Thanks for reading and the comments, it's much appreciated.

It was an interesting scene to write. The boys are off on quite an adventure. Thanks for reading and commenting!

A wrinkle indeed. They need a plan and Rhaelce has one. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Maybe Rhaelce is exaggerating (someone accused him of outright lying) or maybe he's being honest. I know which one, but I'm not telling. . Thanls for reading and commenting.

Thank you for the many comments. There was a lot happening here and I'm glad to hear it came across well.

This might sound a little morbid, but I really enjoyed writing the funeral scene. The priest has a lot of authority and if he revokes Malik's protection, there's nothing to stop Nyrra from doing what she wanted from the beginning. Thank you for reading and commenting!

I think you are supposed to be quiet on elevators too, and not tip at restaurants, etc.

Double chapter week: https://gayauthors.org/story/cassieq/hazardous/8 https://gayauthors.org/story/cassieq/hazardous/9 Have fun!

Chapter Nine is also up! (Good eye @Davide). Posted early because I'm going on vacation next week. https://gayauthors.org/story/cassieq/hazardous/9

It was well into their second month of trekking on foot and Malik was used to their seclusion and rough living. So when Rhaelce came to a sudden halt around midday and swung out an arm to stop Malik, he was surprised and started to look around, trying to see what had caught the other boy’s attention. Usually, it was something else moving in the woods that they had to check out and either hide, evade, or climb. This time, however, Malik was having trouble figuring out what the issue was. Rhae

I think it's a little more than that. The reactions are for small things. Like acknowledging you read something, or that you found it funny/sad/etc. In a written response, like what @Davide wrote, you can at least add more context.

No, that would be very illegal. Might have been to help with the swelling around the ankle is my guess.

Nice backpedaling.

To be fair, I probably wouldn't have been able to predict that you would get turned on by a massage. Even though I should know you well enough to have guessed.