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[dkstories]

I got to know what happens next.

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The world ends tomorrow.

[ethan thorn]

I got to know what happens next.

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The world ends tomorrow.

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With you writeing it could.

Anyway can't wait to read chapter 30.

Edited December 19, 2004 by ethan thorn

[dkstories]

I got to know what happens next.

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The world ends tomorrow.

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With you writeing it could.

Anyway can't wait to read chapter 30.

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Um, it's posted so go read and enjoy!

[Ibsu]

Um, it's posted so go read and enjoy!

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Very nice work. Thanks for the inspiration today for me to get some writing done.

[Myr]

oh... I fixed the first 4 chapters so you don't go blind from that pink and green nightmare that dan first used. I forgot all about it.

[dkstories]

Well, good news guys! Chapter 30 was the last edited chapter I had available and my editor was in the process of moving. After the big cliff-hanger in Chapter 37, I sent him the last three chapters before he started the move. He promised to edit several chapters from 30 onwards before he even looked at the last three chapters of the story (give the man a medal for sure willpower!). Thanks to his herculean efforts, there should be some new chapters coming out later in the week. Enjoy!

[ORN]

Dan,

I am really enjoying this story as well. I hate you are making us all wait to see how "Dawn of Tears" ends up, but this is a really fun story to read. As always, I am looking forward to more. Keep up the great work!

 

 

 

Richard

ORN

[ethan thorn]

Great work 30 chapters and still loveing it.

[dkstories]

Thanks Ethan and everyone else! Chapter 31 is now posted for your enjoyment.

[ethan thorn]

School is over they are going to be apart for some time i wonder what will happen.

[Ibsu]

It could have ended at 31 and noone would have been the wiser -- in fact, it would have been a great ending.

 

(Well, that or a wedding scene... I'm not sure I like the forshadowing of infidelity or some sort of breakup between the two. Doh!)

[dkstories]

How's this for foreshadowing: The story would have ended much happier if Chapter 31 was the last chapter.

 

 

Beware of the steps ahead!

[Myr]

*grumbles*

[Myr]

Chapter 32 has been posted.

[Rigel]

I can see the foreshadowing now: Davey gives up true love for power. (Maybe the most powerful gay man in the US government since J. Edgar Hoover?) Then again, I know nothing of how the story develops. Off to read Chapter 32....

 

--Rigel

[ethan thorn]

Good chapter.

[dkstories]

Do the pictures work on this chapter for y'all?

[dkstories]

ARGH! There are 3 paragraphs missing from Chapter 32. I've sent the corrected page to Myr who will probably post in the morning. For now, well, they're near the end. It's three paragraphs after the one beginning "Vampire, Vampire Vampire".

 

(no, there are not vampires in this story like Vampire Jarred. Just read and you'll figure out what it means.)

 

I'm going to put the text on here but make it the same color as the background. if you highlight it, you can see the missing text. It's a real important part of the chapter to have missing so...well...enjoy.

 

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[Rigel]

The pictures seem to work fine for me. (Mozilla 1.1 browser; Mac OS 9--not your usual MS virus-prone complement).

 

--Rigel

[ethan thorn]

Yeah the pics worked fire fox 1.0 windows xp sp2.

Edited December 21, 2004 by ethan thorn

[Myr]

chater 32 has been corrected.

[dkstories]

Thanks Myr for fixing that this morning. It's real embarrassing for me to miss something like that. These next few chapters are requiring a lot of extra effort on my part since Dreamweaver seems to hate word html. That means I'm having to go through and re-italiscize everything as well as put in the pictures.

 

Enjoy.

[Ibsu]

Thanks Myr for fixing that this morning.  It's real embarrassing for me to miss something like that.  These next few chapters are requiring a lot of extra effort on my part since Dreamweaver seems to hate word html.  That means I'm having to go through and re-italiscize everything as well as put in the pictures. 

 

Enjoy.

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Instead of saving it as html (word html is god awful!), try saving it as rtf. You might even have better luck trying to cut and paste.

[Myr]

Chapter 33 has been posted.

[Xiamise]

Indeed, and what a chapter it is, The situation is sounding more and more dire! I look forward to reading the rest.

 

Note to self; In the future, make sure before you start reading anything else that the story is complete. The waiting is killing me!