Mark M Posted May 7, 2009 Share Posted May 7, 2009 Blast it all lou!!! seriously so mad....why oh why didn't max do it!! i was sooo cheering for him!! now what happens...marcel is screwed by a gay-bar owner....how sad really....definatly a slut is all i gotta say now... And i really don't get it he's Fit but yet not that fit...which i'm so confused on his finess lol Positive note he has a new friend, and can get ride of lou after a last f**k i guess....hopefully.... but anyway i think marcel needs a talking to by BRAD like Hello he staied with robbie, and i'm begining to miss the whole one on one situation....this sluttyness is just not for me i guess...maybe one day.... Anyway pumped for another chapter! tomorrow! sometime i guess! lol there always posted late at night for me so now i go to sleep!! I believe the chapters have less writing in them as they progress i'm sure some take me like 15 min in the begining to read, and i love it. then i read these in 5 min and i feel deprived like i didn't get my fix.....hmm maybe i'll wait two days before i read lol. How many Chapters is this Episode??? Anyway again Great Maddening read, making me pissed off from your work just makes you an awesome writer, because that's probably something like you intented. Anyway have a good Night! MArk~ Link to comment
colliever Posted May 7, 2009 Share Posted May 7, 2009 and looks who come knocking on the door..Lou!! i didn't expect it to be him but i expected that he was probably going to show up sometime. i can't wait to read what happens next. bruno....that name sounds familiar...can't help but think if we met him before from the previous stories... thanks mark for another great chapter. Link to comment
Sir Galahad Posted May 7, 2009 Share Posted May 7, 2009 (edited) That was a surprise. Lou turning up is like finding a dog turd in your cornflakes, not pleasant! But it looks as though Marcel has weakened enough to bed him again. I wonder how much Lou will rip him off for this time. I thought it was a cool thing for Marcel to get Bruno out of his stupor, and he had hot sex & found a new friend, so no harm done. Looking forward to the next one! Edited May 7, 2009 by Sir Galahad Link to comment
Conner Posted May 7, 2009 Share Posted May 7, 2009 So the chapter started with Marcel doing his "Why am I so unlucky at love?" thing. Frankly, it was a godsend that Lou showed up. Otherwise Marcel would spent the evening in a real funk. I was looking for some sign that Lou had changed his ways. Taking the offered money in exchange for getting out of Marcel's life wasn't it. The ending was positive....I think. Marcel's sticking his neck out again. We'll see I guess. The scene with Bruno was great. Loved it. Disco....I remember it fondly. Link to comment
Mark Arbour Posted May 7, 2009 Author Share Posted May 7, 2009 So the chapter started with Marcel doing his "Why am I so unlucky at love?" thing. Frankly, it was a godsend that Lou showed up. Otherwise Marcel would spent the evening in a real funk. I was looking for some sign that Lou had changed his ways. Taking the offered money in exchange for getting out of Marcel's life wasn't it. The ending was positive....I think. Marcel's sticking his neck out again. We'll see I guess. The scene with Bruno was great. Loved it. Disco....I remember it fondly. LOL. So were you our Canadian version of John Travolta? Link to comment
Mark M Posted May 7, 2009 Share Posted May 7, 2009 haha wow i feel way to young here dico is dead guys hahaha jk jk it's a decent era! Link to comment
Sir Galahad Posted May 7, 2009 Share Posted May 7, 2009 haha wow i feel way to young here dico is dead guys hahaha jk jk it's a decent era! Disco becomes very alive when you've had a lot to drink! ....Just ask Conner. Link to comment
Conner Posted May 8, 2009 Share Posted May 8, 2009 LOL. So were you our Canadian version of John Travolta? I'll tell ya, I gave it my best shot. "Staying Alive" by the Bee Gees still gets me going. I have thrown out my disco "outfits"....just last week. If I were to wear the boots I wore in those days, I'd more than likely fall off them. Disco becomes very alive when you've had a lot to drink! ....Just ask Conner. Actually, there are two passtimes I engage in after I've had too much to drink. Dancing is one; the other is directing classical or band music. I don't mix the two. Dancing to classical music is way too gay. Link to comment
Zeoanne Posted May 8, 2009 Share Posted May 8, 2009 (edited) I'll tell ya, I gave it my best shot. "Staying Alive" by the Bee Gees still gets me going. I have thrown out my disco "outfits"....just last week. If I were to wear the boots I wore in those days, I'd more than likely fall off them. Have you checked the Summer store catalogs? OMG!!! All them styles are coming back!!! UGH! You wouldn't catch me dead on platform shoes EVER!! Bell Bottoms? HELL NOOOO!!!! LOL!!! I saw Poof Sleeves on one of the catalogs, I was like , EWWWW!!!! Keep 'em away from me!! Actually, there are two passtimes I engage in after I've had too much to drink. Dancing is one; the other is directing classical or band music. I don't mix the two. Dancing to classical music is way too gay. I'll bring the Raspberry Vodka and we'll have a blast. We can dance the night away!! WOOHOO!! I love dancing and maybe we can start a band, I don't play any instruments but I can sing, or at least used to in FL with a local band. What is Mark bringing with him? Edited May 8, 2009 by Rush Link to comment
Mark Arbour Posted May 8, 2009 Author Share Posted May 8, 2009 I'll bring the Raspberry Vodka and we'll have a blast. We can dance the night away!! WOOHOO!! I love dancing and maybe we can start a band, I don't play any instruments but I can sing, or at least used to in FL with a local band. What is Mark bringing with him? I do a wicked jitterbug Link to comment
Sir Galahad Posted May 8, 2009 Share Posted May 8, 2009 I'll bring the Raspberry Vodka and we'll have a blast. We can dance the night away!! WOOHOO!! I love dancing and maybe we can start a band, I don't play any instruments but I can sing, or at least used to in FL with a local band. What is Mark bringing with him? The lube! Link to comment
Zeoanne Posted May 8, 2009 Share Posted May 8, 2009 The lube! OUCH!!! <---- is that the little 'O' circle Mark mentions on the sex scenes? Link to comment
Mark M Posted May 8, 2009 Share Posted May 8, 2009 well i'll bring some wicked two step or something....i guess i'm not a dancer but i could probably lay it down on the dance floor!! but truly i'd rather be singing....after i get alot of vocal lessons of course....wouldn't want to hurt anyones ears now haha Link to comment
Tiger Posted May 8, 2009 Share Posted May 8, 2009 Chapter 10 is awesome I must say. Are Max and Marcel finally going to get together. I hope so. Link to comment
Conner Posted May 8, 2009 Share Posted May 8, 2009 So much for Lou changing his stripes! Marcel didn't take it so badly. In fact, it seemed he fully expected it. The rolex switch was a hoot! I'm also thinking Lou's not terribly bright. I was really pissed that Max had Lark over again. I mean if you're going to go all co-dependent on someone, try not to pick a sleeze ball. Where's Brad when you need him? Hopefully, Max will get a clue. Great chapter, Mark! Link to comment
Mark Arbour Posted May 8, 2009 Author Share Posted May 8, 2009 I'm also thinking Lou's not terribly bright. Now Conner, not everyone can be bright AND beautiful like us. Link to comment
Zeoanne Posted May 9, 2009 Share Posted May 9, 2009 That was a great chapter Mark! I'm so glad those two ended up making a commitment and that Marcel answered all of Max's question, starting their relationship with honesty, rarely seen nowadays But.....Only 3 more chapters? Then what? What am I suppose to do? What's brewing inside that magnificent brain of yours? Link to comment
Hoskins Posted May 9, 2009 Share Posted May 9, 2009 That was a great chapter Mark! I'm so glad those two ended up making a commitment and that Marcel answered all of Max's question, starting their relationship with honesty, rarely seen nowadays But.....Only 3 more chapters? Then what? What am I suppose to do? What's brewing inside that magnificent brain of yours? Back to Mr. Granger's bunghole - now with "super lard of the sea" Link to comment
colliever Posted May 9, 2009 Share Posted May 9, 2009 i'm loving how this story is going so far though it certainly has been an emotional roller coaster. hopefully marcel and max can have a happily ever after. thanks mark...can't wait till the next chapter Link to comment
Hoskins Posted May 9, 2009 Share Posted May 9, 2009 (edited) I'm really liking the story too, I was irritated that Marcel was so slutty. I'm glad he and Max are gonna give it a shot. And I hope Lark isn't TOO much of a pain, i'd hate to see the family go all "crampton" on him Great chapter Mark, as always. Looking forward to the next new development... And Max topping for the first time? Aww... Edited May 9, 2009 by Hoskins Link to comment
Sir Galahad Posted May 10, 2009 Share Posted May 10, 2009 Blimey, where do I start. Lou, well...what a surprise, kudos for the fake Rolex though!! Serves the scrounger right, I'm just glad we've seen the last of him for now....maybe! Orgies as well, takes me back a.....never mind Max, where do I even start. I'm not a mushy kinda guy; but even I can see those two are made for each other. M&M Perfect. All we need is some ice cream, sprinkles, strawberries....ehm...I digress. Has anyone else got the feeling that the building Marcel has bought is gonna be worth a lot of money in the future. I still feel Lark is going to stick his beak in somewhere, but I have such a good feeling about this.....something is bound to go wrong!! Link to comment
Mark Arbour Posted May 10, 2009 Author Share Posted May 10, 2009 Blimey, where do I start. Lou, well...what a surprise, kudos for the fake Rolex though!! Serves the scrounger right, I'm just glad we've seen the last of him for now....maybe!Orgies as well, takes me back a.....never mind Max, where do I even start. I'm not a mushy kinda guy; but even I can see those two are made for each other. M&M Perfect. All we need is some ice cream, sprinkles, strawberries....ehm...I digress. Has anyone else got the feeling that the building Marcel has bought is gonna be worth a lot of money in the future. I still feel Lark is going to stick his beak in somewhere, but I have such a good feeling about this.....something is bound to go wrong!! Something is bound to go wrong? In one of my stories? Bahahaahahahahaha. (evil laugh) Link to comment
Sir Galahad Posted May 10, 2009 Share Posted May 10, 2009 (edited) Something is bound to go wrong? In one of my stories? Bahahaahahahahaha. (evil laugh) Of course it is!! [shakes head] I'd be bloody surprised if it was plain sailing 'til chapter 14! I know you're up to something....I just haven't figured out what yet. Edited May 10, 2009 by Sir Galahad Link to comment
Mark M Posted May 10, 2009 Share Posted May 10, 2009 Evil laugh just to tell you Mark starts Muwhahahha i believe you must not think villianus to much... Anyway i love that max and marcel are gona try it out, and i'm pumped to see what grangers plans are, i love your Summer love and MIM and parts of Be rad(closer to the end) Mainly becuase that's where i'm in life....outa highschool in college wanting to try and look around for a relationship. But Marcel=Slut I seriously hope i don't turn into that....and funny thin i duno but are most gay guys dirty??? cuz a friend was depeicting her gay friends and she said there all gross well he'll i'll pretend to be straight if there all gross haha. Link to comment
Sir Galahad Posted May 10, 2009 Share Posted May 10, 2009 Love is in the air. That was a really sweet chapter, so glad they have decided to give ti a go. At least Lark was sent packing after Max finally found some balls. Sex on the dance floor, I've never had anyone dance with me that way! Mmmmm, may have to try those moves next time I go out.....and probably get arrested! Still waiting for the other shoe to drop! 1 Link to comment
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