[Jian Sierra] Come With Me

[jian_sierra]

Come with me

 

Let's embark on a journey

 

To a world in my thoughts

 

My world

 

Words will guide you in your way

 

Don't be afraid to let go

 

I promise not to leave you

 

My intention is to share a part of me

 

My soul

 

I may tease you sometimes

 

And leave you hanging

 

But I won't leave you like that for long

 

I'll introduce you to people

 

Maybe you'll like them

 

Perhaps you won't

 

You may even relate to what

 

They're going through at times

 

These people, though not real

 

Can make you feel how they feel

 

Their emotions

 

Will be yours

 

So will you allow me

 

A few minutes of your time?

 

If you are willing

 

Come with me

[AnytaSunday]

Jian, you are so talented. Did you just whip that up? I'm impressed.

 

And also, thank you too, for sharing your words so that we can enjoy them. Both in your poetry and stories.

 

I'm totally coming with you. hehehe,

 

Anyta

[jian_sierra]

Jian, you are so talented. Did you just whip that up? I'm impressed.

 

And also, thank you too, for sharing your words so that we can enjoy them. Both in your poetry and stories.

 

I'm totally coming with you. hehehe,

 

Anyta

 

Heya Anyta, thanks for reading hehe. I was feeling creative and since I can't start writing a story without finishing it within the day (yeah I'm weird this way), I wrote what I was feeling through poetry. I like sharing what I've written, it's fun, so I hope people won't get tired of me

[Nephylim]

That is such a wonderful way to describe what a writer is saying to their readers when they write. You've captured so much in such a short space. I love it.

[Toast]

I like your approach. Is this a pick-up poem? LOL. In any case you got yourself a reading date.

 

Charm gets me everytime.

[phana14]

jian_sierra! Hi and thanks!

 

I'm pretty sure that this is the FIRST TIME that I have read a 'poem' here and *got it* the first read. This is a special entry because of that.

 

Hang in there, OK? *hugs*

[JJSouth]

Come with me

 

Let's embark on a journey

 

To a world in my thoughts

 

My world

 

Words will guide you in your way

 

Don't be afraid to let go

 

I promise not to leave you

 

My intention is to share a part of me

 

My soul

 

I may tease you sometimes

 

And leave you hanging

 

But I won't leave you like that for long

 

I'll introduce you to people

 

Maybe you'll like them

 

Perhaps you won't

 

You may even relate to what

 

They're going through at times

 

These people, though not real

 

Can make you feel how they feel

 

Their emotions

 

Will be yours

 

So will you allow me

 

A few minutes of your time?

 

If you are willing

 

Come with me

 

Hi Jian

Interesting mind you have

Jus

[Douw]

Tired of you ?......HAHA Not going to happen promise lol is there space for one more person to go with you?