[Jack Frost] Moving On

[Bondwriter]

Hey, CJ's Steph looks just like Jack, so how could he be the author (cute pic of Adrien, though in my own stereotypes he'd be more the rugged up type of guys I'd expect to meet in the Poconos)?

By the way, CJames, I have no clue whatsoever how this old pic of me you used to represent Ben ended up on the Internet. I'll have my lawyers investigate.

[sat8997]

The word tremble exists...

 

http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/tremble

 

Where did I go wrong?

 

I'll get back to the rest of the posts...I just couldn't let Sharon get away with this tonight.

You also knew I'd be sleeping that late and wouldn't see this until this morning.

 

Are you 'shivering' with delight or 'trembling' in fear? I like 'shiver', it has a better nuance.

 

Goddess

[Bondwriter]

Are you 'shivering' with delight or 'trembling' in fear? I like 'shiver', it has a better nuance.

Can't you shiver with fear? I only know tremble from an hymn sung at Easter, Where were you when they crucified my Lord, in which the meaning is obviously a shake/ quake from fear, but shiver didn't necessarily match a pleasurable thrill from what I knew.

[Jack Frost]

Hmm so our mystery boi is found out, hmm maybe a hot threesome

You mean a twosome?

 

Whoops...I spoke too much.

 

Ben

 

 

Steph

 

Adrien (and the Author).

Funny you were close to what I see Ben as.

 

Steph is way too off though...

 

Don't post a picture of yourself, CJ. You'll just make Bondwriter good looking comparing to you.

 

I'll post pictures of the characters I always see them as... Now this is no way meant to shatter your imagination. This story is fiction...so you can believe whatever you want (especially for you CJ...thinking Adrien as a redneck...though I find it offensive for you to think him like that.)

 

Hey, CJ's Steph looks just like Jack, so how could he be the author (cute pic of Adrien, though in my own stereotypes he'd be more the rugged up type of guys I'd expect to meet in the Poconos)?

By the way, CJames, I have no clue whatsoever how this old pic of me you used to represent Ben ended up on the Internet. I'll have my lawyers investigate.

He doesn't look nowhere like me. If you want someone like Steph, come online around 4-5pm (-5 GMT) and you'll see.

 

So that was your old pic? Do you mind me putting it in my porn folder?

 

You also knew I'd be sleeping that late and wouldn't see this until this morning.

 

Are you 'shivering' with delight or 'trembling' in fear? I like 'shiver', it has a better nuance.

 

Goddess

Tremble with fear and excitement.

Can't you shiver with fear? I only know tremble from an hymn sung at Easter, Where were you when they crucified my Lord, in which the meaning is obviously a shake/ quake from fear, but shiver didn't necessarily match a pleasurable thrill from what I knew.

Don't correct the Goddess...I kinda failed there, but I'm getting there to crack her open.

[Drewbie]

Hey, No slave here! Though, you will be one as soon as Bondwriter (Frosty Hunter) and I catch you...

 

I really, really liked the very clever misdirection at the end of the last chapter and the beginning of this one; I had no clue they were friends and joking around. That was very well done!

 

I am still very much enjoying the traveler's eye view of Montreal, the little background details really give a good feel.

 

Pictures, huh? Well, OK, I'll give this a try...

Ben

 

 

Steph

 

Adrien (and the Author).

Cannot look at it Says I do not have permission.

[Bondwriter]

Don't post a picture of yourself, CJ. You'll just make Bondwriter good looking comparing to you.

"If you play with the Devil, your day will come to pay..." (Nikki Sixx, famous 80s philosopher in leather pants)

 

He doesn't look nowhere like me. If you want someone like Steph, come online around 4-5pm (-5 GMT) and you'll see.

Well, the general physionomy and the nice gaze. I thought CJ was being flattering. Actually, to be serious, I kind of picture Steph as you. The first person thing, not very surprisingly. BTW, I picture CJ's Chris as his avatar. Makes for weird pool parties.

 

So that was your old pic? Do you mind me putting it in my porn folder?

Then my lawyers will really be busy...

 

Don't correct the Goddess...I kinda failed there, but I'm getting there to crack her open.

I wouldn't dare. I just asked for a little tiny bit of her wisdom, poor foreigner that I am.

 

Cannot look at it Says I do not have permission.

Well, this is grown-up stuff; I think CJames sets the authorizations individually. A hefty lump of cash (a money transfer to the Cayman Islands) should solve the problem. Oh, and maybe a note from your parents.

[Jack Frost]

Well, the general physionomy and the nice gaze. I thought CJ was being flattering. Actually, to be serious, I kind of picture Steph as you. The first person thing, not very surprisingly. BTW, I picture CJ's Chris as his avatar. Makes for weird pool parties.

SPOT ON! He is pretty much like me...some stuffs are real. Some aren't...just mostly what I dreamed that they could've happened somewhere in my life.

 

Now the photos...I collect them good before I write about them...so I won't forget their facial features (eye colors, hair colors, etc.)

 

Steph...

 

 

Ben...

 

 

Krist...

 

 

Jake...

 

 

Matt...(doesn't he look like a little devil?)

 

 

Adrien...

 

 

Julien...(when he doesn't have his hair dyed black)

 

 

Lo

[Conner]

Nicely done, Cool-one! That chapter was a lot of fun.

[Bondwriter]

Nicely done, Cool-one! That chapter was a lot of fun.

Quite right.

 

I think the Steph pic Jack posted does share some features with his pics. What do others think?

[Drewbie]

I like Jacks vision of guys

[Bondwriter]

I like Jacks vision of guys

I'll take it you managed to see the hunk of the Poconos eventually.

[Drewbie]

No sighs.

[Jack Frost]

Quite right.

 

I think the Steph pic Jack posted does share some features with his pics. What do others think?

Not me. I don't have ear piercings.

 

I like Jacks vision of guys

I like a Drew who likes my vision.

[C James]

Not me. I don't have ear piercings.

I like a Drew who likes my vision.

I think my photo of "Ben" is closer than yours, because Ben is described as having a developed chest, which your Ben does not appear to have.

[Jack Frost]

I think my photo of "Ben" is closer than yours, because Ben is described as having a developed chest, which your Ben does not appear to have.

His chest is toned...not developed. I said before...I pick a photo of a character that I want to be before writing. So I have Ben right to the spot.

 

 

And a sneak preview what could happen in the next chapter (I just need to type fifteen pages of notebook paper into the computer...)

 

[...] We quickly walked past Adrien's room, Ben gasped loudly. Adrien stood next to his bed, wide-eyed with Lo

[Adrian Michaels]

Alright, this is the first time that I've posted here, but I just wanted to say a few things...

 

I LOVE THIS STORY!! (Excuse the caps... I got excited...) It's on my favorites list, and everytime there is an update it brightens my day.

 

Also, the French is my favorite part. I haven't taken the language since high school, but I'm pleased everytime I'm able to understand without the translation. (It means I DID learn something... Madame would be so proud....)

 

It also makes me really want to continue with my French education. Perhaps next semester? I'll have to see if it fits into my schedule.

 

Anyway, Keep up the great work! I can't wait to read more!

[Jack Frost]

Thanks Adrian!

 

 

 

Jesus guys...no one cared about my hint?

[C James]

Jesus guys...no one cared about my hint?

It could cause some odd situations, that's for sure. LoL

[Conner]

[...] We quickly walked past Adrien's room, Ben gasped loudly. Adrien stood next to his bed, wide-eyed with Lo

[Adrian Michaels]

OMG, I totally just noticed it.

 

I had to read it a few times to makes sure that I was getting it right. WHAT?!?!?!?!?

 

Apparently Adrien (Oooh, a different spelling than mine.) is harboring some same sex attraction. I'm betting he just got shut down by his date, and had to erm, "release".

[Bondwriter]

Could it be a dream? It certainly is a surprise since Adrien had not given any hint that he was into boys. Or is it Adrien's unknown twin brother? Or Julien wearing an Adrien's mask. We'll wait patiently for the answer Jack will certainly provide us in due time.

[Jack Frost]

Finally I got some attentions

 

It could cause some odd situations, that's for sure. LoL

That's all you can say?

 

Jesus...I expected more than you.

[Bondwriter]

Finally I got some attentions

That's all you can say?

Another author trying to have his readers write the story for him... And through relentless taunting. If this works, you should get a patent on your method, Jack.

[Jack Frost]

Another author trying to have his readers write the story for him... And through relentless taunting. If this works, you should get a patent on your method, Jack.

If you haven't noticed my previous posts, I already finished Chapter 15 in notebook before I gave out the hint for my readers so they can make their minds go wild as I take my time to type 25 pages of notebook (halfway there, should be done tonight).

[Jack Frost]

https://www.gayauthors.org/eficiton/viewsto...&chapter=15

 

Ta-ta