[dkstories] Chapter 13

[Ratatosk]

Yay number thirteen is up, and I just have to sleep. Work is calling in 4 hours time. I'll have to save it on the memory stick and have it read out at work in the early morning.

Edited September 11, 2006 by Ratatosk

[wolfwalker]

HA finally I was first LOL

 

interesting a little back ground and nice setup of things to come

 

she will be the perfect balance to Garret I think

 

Wolfwalker

[dkstories]

Hmmm, I can't moderate my forums anymore or I'd merge this with the thread started exactly one minute before this one...

 

edit: The two DOH Ch 13 threads have been merged. No content was harmed with this edit. - Vic

Edited September 11, 2006 by naper_vic

[NaperVic]

and from the peanut gallery....

 

[dkstories]

bah, I thought that was fixed...it will be don't worry

[Philistine]

oh, dk. you're like gay santa.

[dkstories]

Jeez, Philistine, comparing me to an old fat guy with a beard and a penchant for dressing in red and white...um thanks?

 

[Trebs]

Ya - he doesn't dress in red and white that much...

[Coming Undone]

Hey Dan

 

Excluding the battle chapter 13 was the best so far!! I can't wait to see where you go with this.

 

Oh yeah, she's perfect for Garret.

 

I'm Coming

[Philistine]

Jeez, Philistine, comparing me to an old fat guy with a beard and a penchant for dressing in red and white...um thanks?

 

 

Edited September 13, 2006 by Philistine

[dkstories]

Ya know, if he'd been in a baseball uniform you'd have gotten an early posting of chapter 14.

 

 

As it is, you're forgiven.

[C James]

Ya - he doesn't dress in red and white that much...

 

 

This was a very good chapter! She's perfect for Garret, under the circumstances, and I noted something interesting: The gene-splicing to select sexual orientation. The existence of a genetic basis for orientation is still hotly debated, but DK seems to have come down on the side of it existing. Hmmm, given the eerie accuracy of some of DK's other predictions, I'm just about prepared to take this as writ!

 

I'm very intrigued by the political angles that are playing out more and more. Very complex and involved (just like real life) and I suspect that there are plenty of aspects to this that we have not yet seen.