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Once I read that Kohler's car was in the driveway, I knew he was a goner! Awesome start to the story, Rich!

So Mike killed Damien? Who killed the senator? I'm like sitting here at the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next!

Jesus. I totally understand Jen's rationalization. She's making it easy for Brett to get angry with her because he knows she'll be there and he can yell and scream all he wants. But...there is no way in hell she should have put up with THAT kind of a temper tantrum! He's calling her the c-word and hoping she'll die??? That's horrible! Can you imagine how fucked up he'd be (even more than he is now) if God forbid something did happen to her? He'd think it was all his fault. No, he'd probably blame her. He already has abandonment issues. I would have been speechless if I were there. And now I'm all caught up! Shit. lol

I am so glad Brett didn't lie to Billy about the weed. Of course, this takes place before pot becomes legal in most states (all states?), so Billy is right to be worried for Brett's safety. You know, the whole gateway drug thing. Why on earth wouldn't Brett's mom, a SHRINK, try to find out different ways Brett can learn? Not everyone learns the same way. I totally understand how the pot could help him with learning and focusing. Does he have ADD or ADHD also? Maybe one of those meds could help him focus better in school? Like Jay, I also thought the chapter was going to be Billy losing it and going crazy on Brett. He did a little bit. At least they cleared the air. I was actually expecting Brett's mom to come home while they were doing it! After all, much time must have passed since Dustin came over, Billy left, Billy came back, Brett came back, and they did it. I thought for sure Brett's mom was going to show up, and they wouldn't have even heard her with all their moaning and groaning. The title of the next chapter makes me kinda nervous. Brett was acting a bit nervous at the end of the chapter. Why? I hope he doesn't freak out over what they did and regret it. Especially since he's the one who insisted Billy pop his cherry.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY, CG!!!!! I hope you're having an awesome day, CG!!

Sui, this was such a fantastic story. I'm actually sitting here in tears. This story hit so close to home on so many counts, from Ren's ex's betrayal, to Ren repeatedly crying in the shower, to him pretending to be happy for the sake of his kids, to being upset they were both going off to college and leaving him alone in the house...I could go on and on. I'm thrilled Ren and Ryan are finally moving forward with their lives -- together. Awesome, awesome story, Sui! Now continue with The Assassin, dammit! lol

Ah, poor Frank, going through that stress every week! And his buddy George having to listen to him freak out every week. lol Great tale, Val!

I really liked this story, Addy! I thought the schizo robot was terrific! He had me fooled! The "I am a real boy" reminded me of Pinocchio. I think the idea of sort of teaching and showing videos to virgin vamps (love that saying!) is intriguing. I suppose they should know just what they're getting into!

This was so enjoyable, Drew! I liked how he was able to finally relax and let things slide once he had been in the water. The water must be very calming for a duck.

So, Justin and Bailey have something going on? Or Justin wishes he and Bailey had something going on? I thought the same thing as Drought when Bailey said "...with Dad gone...all..."; I thought his dad had died, so he didn't want to leave his mom by herself. I didn't realize at these places a student can be a commuter. I thought they all had to live there. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, Mom!

I love your new story, Mom! It's interesting that Chris didn't think the gymnastics team could beat them in push-ups. I guess he didn't realize that gymnastics uses so many different muscles, and these guys are lean and quick. I'm thrilled they won! Ok, on to chapter two.

What a wonderful chapter, Parker! I love Def's description of the baptism and Okie's take on it too. It's so true; the wave washing over TP/Wally, leaving Scott in its wake. Wish he had a different name, though. Scott is the name of my ex. I'm happy that Scott realizes he wants more than the physical aspects of a relationship with Graham. He's going forward propelled by his heart this time. Something he's never used before. Stupid question: If only Graham calls him Scott, and everyone else calls him Wally, won't the others wonder why Graham isn't calling him Wally?

So...is Dorothy as innocent as she claims to be, or is she being set up like her brother? I believe Danny's story of walking into the house and seeing Metcalf dead. I think someone or someones are planting evidence against the James siblings and using them as a scapegoat. As Jeff said, the plot thickens. lol

Well, it certainly seems like Rutherford is covering up for Metcalf. And how DID he know Damian was stabbed? Was it in the papers? I think the senator and co. left early because they knew something was going to happen to Damian, and of course they didn't want anyone pointing fingers at them.

Well, I can't really add to anything in this chapter either. lol I'm just sitting here dumbfounded. The three of them said horribly hateful things, things that can never be taken back. I think at the end, Dustin did what he's learned growing up: call people names and physically abuse them. He's so afraid people will find out about Mike, that he's threatening Billy. Brett went way below the belt with Dustin, and Dustin fired right back, hitting Brett where it hurts the most. They were both despicable. I know Billy's going to blame himself for all this hatred. I hope he doesn't do anything stupid while he's in the house alone. Guess Doc Reilly should have stuck around!

What a chapter, Jeff! Everyone had such thoughtful reviews, there's nothing I can add. I do think Brett has gained much insight from his mom, which is a wonderful thing. I think he's on the ball with a lot of the things he said about Dustin. I'm thrilled Billy's dad called him and they straightened things out. I like Billy's dad so much more now than I did at the beginning of the first book. I guess I really didn't know him then. I'm praying his dad's on the mend now that he's out of his coma. Awesome chapter, Jeff! I'm actually afraid to read the next one. lol

I ditto Jeff; I had to Google it too. I don't know what I was thinking about Rene, but what came out of his mouth wasn't what I was expecting. I'm glad Jason proved to be a loving and caring partner.

It's funny, Talk Me Down was a chapter title to another story on here. So...did we meet Alexei? (Is that how it's spelled?) Somehow I get the feeling Alexei was someone extremely important to Ian, who is no longer alive. Is he pining for Alexei, but also falling in love with Micheal, knowing he's going to end it with Micheal and break both their hearts? Great chapter, Rusiana.

This was a really good chapter, Lit. I love Bryce! I know he's just having fun and doesn't mean anything by his flirting. He has charisma, and I'm sure he's a hoot to be around. I also agree with everyone who mentioned what Alek said to Liam and to Bryce and Nathan was nice. He's only looking out for Liam. He didn't try and get Liam back or upset him in any way. Maybe he's finally coming around.

I think this is a far cry from Mr. Brightside! lol They certainly didn't waste any time getting to know one another. It's good to know they're still together seven years later. I'm looking forward to chapter two, Mitchelll!

I'm curious to know what Gary said to TPTB at Rockefeller Center for him to be able to film there. After all, this movie isn't Serendipity. lol (I think that's the name of the movie with John Cusack where he and his girlfriend ice skate in RC.) I hope Ryan isn't thinking of taking off and moving back to Quebec. I think Erik would really be upset; I believe Erik is feeling what Ryan's feeling, but as Tim said, if he is feeling that, he's also using it to make the movie better. But that doesn't necessarily mean he cares for Ryan any less. I'm praying Ryan doesn't close himself off and refuse to speak to Erik. I know Erik's confused by Ryan's sudden 360, and I'm sure he's going to try to contact him. In fact, he might be waiting for him at Ryan's apartment. Now I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter, HB!

I love the way Ryan and Erik are becoming more comfortable with one another -- even if Erik was drunk! I loved the way he just snuggled up to Ryan, and then Ryan started running his fingers through Erik's hair. The scene was very domesticated and boyfriendy. (Yes, I just made up that word. lol) Great chapter, HB!

Jeezus, HB! Between you and Mac, I have to keep having to run to Best Buy to buy another computer due to mine combusting every time from the damn heat of your chapters! I should get stock in that place. So yeah, good chapter. Ryan is definitely NOT acting when it comes to Erik. I'm actually very surprised he was able to remember Erik's character's name as Ev. I thought for sure he'd be calling out Erik's name.

Oh man, Mac, that was fantastic!! There are so many unanswered questions, you MUST continue!!!! Who is Stacey (in the beginning of the story, she was Stacy) to Matt? Is she his girlfriend? Who's Drew, and why did he beat Stacey up and shoot Matt? Did Drew want Stacey? Or maybe Drew and Stacey were together? Awesome FIRST chapter, Mac!!!

I totally agree with Peter. As I've told you, many of your poems just fly over my head. lol I'm such a deep person, after all. But that doesn't mean I don't enjoy reading them! I love reading you poetry! I don't need to understand it to enjoy it. I think. lol Anyway, I really enjoyed this poem, Doc. I could just picture a little kid standing around waiting to pick some of the blackberries, only to get up there and find out they're all gone! I'm glad the narrator finally had a shot at getting some of the fruit. I love the way you set it up, though, with the description of walking through the woods, not caring what flowers and ants you step on, and then the description of the blackberry bush itself was just beautiful. I could picture the berries dripping their 'dew' onto the ground after the rain. Great poem, Doc!