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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    From the best of the Twilight Zone or Outer Limits...this was well done...thank you SA
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Same here!
  3. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Did you want a @weinerdog instead???
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    Chapter 1

    What a twist...well done SA
  5. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Loved this story!!
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    Chapter 1

    I won't say the author of this comment is lying, I also remember those pesky little maps standing in the AAA office watching the wizened old clerk highlight my route, irrtated as I used my parents AAA card...I did get my own...
  7. drsawzall

    Pillars

    Thank you for this Wayne…simply a fantastic and excuse the expression, a barn burner. looking forward to how this wraps up…No, I may have been harsh with my comments regarding Zane in the last chapter, supposing 63 million reasons may be sufficient as a form of punishment….leastways, for what ever reason the branding stuck with me. As vile an act a man could do to his son, to me should not go unpunished or unknown….again 63 million reasons isn’t enough in this case. This truly is among the best of your work…
  8. drsawzall

    Pillars

    Doh….now I get it
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    Pillars

    Gotta stop commenting to comments before I get to them all….
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    Pillars

    And may not live in Fla anymore….
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    Pillars

    If he’s the son of Zane Yoder why the difference in last names? hummmmm
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 18

    Love this, the advent of Jesus freed Christian’s from the stricture of the Old Testament….so many forget or have forgotten….yet so many of the pious are equally guilty in the various sins the commit… On another note, trading the comments, should we have a comment section for the comments?
  13. Again, such a delight to read! Loved the following and when much younger and confused I may have spent a night with someone like the following, if I translated correctly…. Yeah. Look at her: pricey dress.” “If you can call it that. Fanny pelmet and boob tube more like.”
  14. drsawzall

    Chapter 6

    Machinations abound, that devious Thokk has found an answer to a few of his problems/issues… Lets see if this turns out….
  15. Well now, tell about personal growth….loved this
  16. Should be an interesting tale, an antidote to the old saying bad things come in threes. Did he rent the flat or did I miss that?
  17. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    What a great concept, 400 years ago, looking in the rear view mirror made a decision most likely based on low expectations for earth’s future… Mateo held his gaze. "I hoped it would be something like this." "Why?" Mateo smiled, but it didn’t reach all the way to his eyes. "Because it means they chose something. This wasn't something that just happened to them
  18. Google a TV show called Peyton Place...scandalous for its time
  19. After Gettysburg, the War settled into a brutal stalemate. Then, the war took an unexpected turn: General Grant was found dead. At first, this appeared to be a grim accident. But papers discovered at the scene told a darker story—conspiracy, foreign interests, powerful financiers, and the highest circles of government, tied together by a single missing ledger. Little is noted of the rain-soaked cadets from Virginia stumbling upon Grant’s party, other than they were there. But behind that account lay a frantic hunt to recover the ledger before its contents could expose those willing to reshape nations from the shadows.
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 3

    What he said..what a turn of stereotypes….loving this! Are we gonna have elves, and gnomes, and the rest of the gang!
  21. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    loving the growing heat between these two…the following truly captures the essence of the times… We have men among my people who are warriors and something else besides. Poets. Singers. Men who speak with the gods in the sacred groves and are no less trusted with a spear for it. Rome likes to believe such things are contradictions. They are not, where I come from. They are only a man, being the whole of what he is.” “You make it sound simple.” “It is not simple. It is only true.” Ingomar’s mouth curved, faint and unhurried. “Simple and true are not the same thing, whatever your senators like to pretend.”
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Hummm….so many random disconnected thoughts… Was the good doctor running from something or someone? Can we fully trust this new earth? If all is on the up and up, our good doctor has one heck of back pay package coming…. Who will take part in the search? Will the tech of the present day be able to ascertain The Who, how, and why? Could the disappearance be a result of another species with nefarious intentions? Used for ill gotten reasons? Off to a petting zoo? Huh…what was I thinking?? Then again, I don’t mind being petted… A fantastic start and loving this? Hopefully the missing crew, or the remnants thereof be returned, and are there descendants? Oh my goodness it’s Sunday night there and I am behind the eight ball on my reading…looks like to be a late night…
  23. drsawzall

    The Blueprint

    And the battle is joined….fingers crossed
  24. drsawzall

    Chapter 23

    Nice car but I’d go for the 69 GTO, triple black with black walnut trim.. Looks like Carrington will be the first hurdle! They didn’t waste time. Within minutes, Johnny grabbed the slim leather folder and they headed outside. Sunlight spilled across the driveway, catching the gold firebird decal on Johnny’s Trans Am. The hood shimmered like a living flame, the black paint so glossy it looked wet. Don't get me wrong, the screaming eagle was a very fine car, a son of a well to do neighbor bought this for his son at high school graduation, pure sex on wheels, and the seats were easy to clean up
  25. drsawzall

    Growing Pains

    He needs a job in the library….high school…so glad those days are over
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