Timothy M.
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Just one person reaching out and showing genuine interest can make all the difference in the world. Shaun has great understanding in some was, all he needs is some self-worth. Hopefully, Harley isn't content with a holiday fling. And Shaun is free to follow his heart, since he was ready to leave his old life behind in a much more radical manner. -
Even though it was hard and soul wrenching I think Daniel needed this. He had to know which side the woman who gave birth to him came donw, so he can get his priorities and loyalties sorted. I'm glad his therapists helps him with the guilt and the ways he copes.
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Well, at least Jack finally stood up to Jimmy about his stupid behavior. Maybe there's hope for him yet.
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I do my best to appreciate when readers point out plot holes in my stories, since they generally do it to be helpful. Luckily, my stories are not very plot heavy, and my editors and beta readers catch most of the problems. So, I'm more likely to be chided for lack of plot tension and unexpected story developments. It pays to be boring and predictable.
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He'd have to turn out to be an axe murder before inflicting Stuart on him. I was so happy to have a chapter without that idiot. I'm beginning to appreciate Gloria even more. It's kind of her to ring Geoff with progress reports. I bet it'll also increase her standing with her grand-nephew, whose visits I think she appreciates. I know my spinster grandaunt always enjoyed calls and visits (it gave her the chance to do the cooking and baking she loved). Once Tony has moved in, they could have a small house warming party, and if they invite Wes along with friends and any colleagues they feel close to, it could be a chance for Wes to build a circle of acquaintances, and for Geoff's colleagues to see him as more than the shy awkward guy.
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Inconsequential background or LGBTQ marginalization?
Timothy M. replied to Former Member's topic in The Lounge
But at least you put the matter up for consideration and asked the question, so you could revise your opinion, instead of staying with your first impression and gut reaction. That has to count for something. -
Uhm, Page, that last one for Clo is against GA rules. Better remove the picture. (like I notice dugh very carefully did)
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Scene Four, A Hotel Bedroom During a Summer’s Night
Timothy M. commented on Drew Payne's story chapter in Scene Four, A Hotel Bedroom During a Summer’s Night
I'm glad Harley is genuinely attracted to Shaun, and that he is a good lover. Hopefully, this will be more than a holiday fling. Well done on the sex writing, I know it's difficult. -
I made do with a like though I wanted to do a one about Gary lying about the reason he was beaten up. He is such a fool, but I guess he's too young and inexperienced to know better. But maybe his so-called friend will feel some remorse.
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I always love hearing about the love of Kris and Nöel. They were good for each other, and I'm glad Kris had the love of his life his whole life. The only fly-in-the-ointment was the piercing, yuk. I'm gonna try to ignore that. I look forward to meeting Sho. Does he know about Serai and mates ? If not, I'm not sure sending Ivan will be a good idea, although at least he's prepared. How old is Sho ? Interesting, that Ivan's father let his oldest heir go, maybe he's receptive to sense and good arguments. But ivan's premonitions of danger is a bad sign. Oh well, forewarned is forearmed - literally in this case.
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Scene Three, A Hotel Lobby on a Summer’s Evening, Part 3
Timothy M. commented on Drew Payne's story chapter in Scene Three, A Hotel Lobby on a Summer’s Evening, Part 3
I'm glad the massage helped with the pain and tension in the leg, even as it created tension somewhere else. -
Scene Three, A Hotel Lobby on a Summer’s Evening, Part 2
Timothy M. commented on Drew Payne's story chapter in Scene Three, A Hotel Lobby on a Summer’s Evening, Part 2
Arrgghh, you tease ! You can't stop there ! Anyway, I'm glad Harley is so straightforward about being interested. I hope the massage does help, and wasn't simply a way of getting into Shaun's pants. But whatevr the reason, it certainly made Shaun forget his sad plan. -
And what happened to C ? I'll be back with a proper comment, but I have to go to work now.
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Well, at least Geralt won't be mad at Dandelion for letting Zoltan win the size contest.
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I have to admit I'm deeply curious about J.P.'s take om President Obama and President Trump and all the other issues of the last 15 years.
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Time to give the King and all his minions the fright of their lives. I'm confident Kieran and his friends can do it. Although they've been very lucky so far with accumulating the necessary strength in the nick of time.
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Well, it seems like they had fun during and after.
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One of each, of course.
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Yeah, but Caz is a lady like Clo. (tries very hard not to ) Well, there may be some Rob & Co chapters brewing.
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See @clochette Caz agrees with me. You're probably my only reader who is happy I don't post new chapters.
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I think you've made a good case for Loz being redeemable and deserving a second chance. I was positively surprised by his dad. I'm glad he felt guilty too.
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You have a good point, but at least she owned up to it fast and if Jerry or Brando had objected, she would have taken it down. However, maybe this is part of the explanation for the vandalism on Brandon's car. For the haters it's one thing to be out and isolated (they can ignore the 'loser'), but quite another to be a popular jock and kissing a guy in public. On the bright side they have their first consensual kiss documented. Might be fun to watch 10 years from now - at their wedding, perhaps ?
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Scene Three, A Hotel Lobby on a Summer’s Evening, Part 1
Timothy M. commented on Drew Payne's story chapter in Scene Three, A Hotel Lobby on a Summer’s Evening, Part 1
Haley certainly seems like a nice distraction. Let's hope he doesn't leave Shaun right away. -
I'm impressed you find the time to blog. I can't even think of something to blog about on GA.
