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  1. I can't find the link. Can you help me Albert?
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    Chapter 1 Hooked

    I also saw the bit of you that likes to create your own environment. The way grandmother made changes in her own home. Sound familiar? Thanks for the compliment. I'm not a writer, but do strive to make my comments interesting and relevant.
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    Chapter 167

    Armand is so considerate of Arnaud's discomfort. I did present to opportunity to include a visit to Spain. Greece is rich in history, so going back again will not be a problem. It is fun to see Geno and Angela's little one grow. GG does give Armand warning when there is a big event about to take place. She did say that Armand and Colin would be needed, but I don't think there is a danger for them or the boys.
  4. If it were a shifter story or one you collaborate on with @kbois I would be very surprised. However, you are a talented writer and can easily write anything you put your mind too.
  5. Hi Page! Sounds like Max had a great breakfast.
  6. Hi All! I see that Drew is back to normal. I don't know if it's from stressing about Spike or Drew's vacation has him relaxing a bit.
  7. Don't quibble you two. Drew already nuke that remember?
  8. Typical response from and engineer with an explosive attitude. Don't like it just nuke it. I won't be the first time you've destroy a World Heritage site.
  9. Looks like Drew has the Blahs again. He's never satisfied even on vacation.
  10. Teotihuacan i very impressive, big and beautiful. You also won't need aircon, but getting electricity and plumbing install will be a problem. I don't think your mom will like the steps to the porch or the very small rooms. I really don't think she would be pleased.
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    Chapter 16

    Rick has redeemed his rebellious little self. He's actually smarter than I gave him credit for. Although his reason is still lame. I enjoyed the way Marc's crew is displaying their loyalty to and support of Marc. They are a great group. The visit to Simone revealed a lot about Aunt May that Marc didn't know. The best thing is that there's a good chance May's will is in Sawyer's possession. A fun chapter that give us hope Marc will kick Jonathan's ass out of town.
  12. Damned! I missed the hotdog tree in the picture! Need to have my eyes checked! 😜 Never knew Baobab trees tasted like hotdogs! Although, they do sound more nutritious according to the link.
  13. Anthony loses his love, because much like misaligned stars, misaligned goals are a weak lines to hold a relationship together. Anthony returns home to the country and goes fishing. He loses a silver fish, but nets a golden catch. This is a wonderfully written romance of a second chance for first love. You can't help but feel alive and wonderful after reading this story. A must read for all romantics in the world.
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    Chapter 1 Hooked

    I see so much of you in Anthony and this beautiful tale of love. Anthony's goals are much like your achievements. It was made better by the sensitive way you portrayed Andrew. His break with Anthony took courage, but was best for both of them. They had love, but their goals were so different. Clark was the golden catch when Anthony lost the silver. That red and white is definitely a lucky charm.
  15. A dark, tragic tale begins as Chester walks away from the funeral of his abusive husband, a man he both loved and then hated. Briefly the veil is lifted and when it closes again Chester has closure and can begin to heal. It ends in hope as Chester finds he has the will to live and the support and love to make it happen. This is an eloquent tale of a second chances by one of GA's finest writers.
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  16. This is so much different and dark than your other stories. It surprised me. It does have all the hallmarks of your writing, and was a powerful story. To me, learning why Mark was a monster, and how he sacrificed himself because of his love for Chester was sad, but it did give Chester the closure he needed to begin to heal from the physical abuse he suffered at Mark's hands. Jordy gives hope that Chester will get the support and love he needs to heal.
  17. Keep going on this one. Chasing Rusty Parker is the sequel to this story. It is just as funny and a lot of that is because Rusty is very unique. It has something to do with Catboys.😄🤪
  18. Are you sure @astone2292 is PG rated? His stories sure are not!
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    GMA III

    I am having fun following the comments. I didn't get that opportunity when I read the stories on other sites. @Carlos Hazday I had no idea you were such a tease. I thought it was just some of your characters you imbued with that trait. Bravo to Thiago! His child will have a great many uncles and some aunts to make sure the kid has a great live. I think I a good idea what is happening with Gina. As you said you have been setting up the stage for some major event. Kudos to Ethan for reminding CJ that they all have something to contribute and want the opportunity to contribute in their own way. CJ just needs to remember his friends want to do for each other what CJ does. As for a divorce, there is only one real choice if you want to stay out of trouble with your readers. I suppose that Damien could always be kidnapped by aliens or attacked by werewolves/dolphins. I had fun reading Explosions, so I know you can pull it off. 😜
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    GMA II

    Since it's been a while since I last read a CJ book, I also appreciated the snippets of background that helped me remember the members of the Squad. I appreciate that Thiago respects Nadine to let her make a decision about her own body. Thiago would make a great father, but he still needs some time to grow and develop. The same think holds true of CJ.
  21. What do you get when you mix teenage hormones, inventive teen minds, a baseball and chocolate? Another fun story by Geron Kees! Short and sweet sums it up nicely, but there is also a lot of humor and flirting. This is a great bedtime or under the tree summer story. Sit back, relax and have fun laughing.
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    Chapter 1

    Matt loves Jeff very much to be roped in for the fair and be gooped. I was entertained by the way they flirted with each other as they negotiated. These two guys reminded me of Charlie and Kippy. I think the stories behind the science projects would make a few more fun tales to read. I would love a story about the Runaway Robot at the science fair. Thanks Geron for sharing this with us.
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    Chapter 1 S1

    A very interesting start to this story. I'm looking forward to following Mac and Dev as they get older and more secrets are revealed.
  24. Very well done. Thank you.
  25. I love this chapter and the unique way you interwove flashbacks with real time events in the test. It added emotional texture to the risks they were taking. I also loved that the guys had bonded so well that they had no complaints or problems when Novo explained the light he was giving off by saying, Jersey Giant was a perfect song for Jer to play at this point. It was such a perfect moment.
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