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The fishing trip was a success for all, but a few bigoted idiots got put down fast. Colin and Armand may not be saints yet, but the are wonderful role models. I hope the kids' friends will be included in future fishing trips, especially those with bigoted fathers. Knowing about Colin and Armand will make it much more likely the friends won't become like their bigoted fathers. I wonder how many kids at the home will see Carl's bluebird fly.
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Connor doesn't seem aware of how fast he is changing. I like the way his dream leads to a conversation with Shamus about his rapid changes during puberty. There was another interesting conversation with Shamus questioning Connor to find out how open Connor's mind is to the supernatural. The introductions to the family went well when they arrived at the ranch. It is interesting to see how the cousins reacted to Connor and Danny, as well as how Sarah and Wendy teamed with Carol. Of the cousins, I think Katty is going to be fun and Ronin has an attitude. The wolves that appeared at the end are not a dream. I suspect the big black wolf to be Shamus. The other two are probably older cousins.
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Hi Albert!
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Hi All! Myr garnered some eye candy for the Word for the Day. I thought I'd share it with you all.
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I happy that you still feel up to doing Renfaire. I've enjoyed visiting events like that very much before I came to Thailand. Good to hear that the infusion went well. Sorry to hear about the migraine, but don't feel like you are a whiner! We may not feel your pain, but understand and care. We are all here for you. Take care and say Hi! to your Mum.
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Hi, Gary! Hope you had a great day.
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Sleep well, Albert!
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Hi Page! Sorry it took so long to answer. I was out grocery shopping for tonight's dinner. Aod's father is staying with us, so he sent me with the shopping list.
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We can wait for it until tomorrow. 😀
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Many mistakes are made in our youth, some with dire consequences. Ivor's beautiful short tale relates one of these mistakes, and how the strength, loyalty and love of a best friend helps Josh overcomes the adversity and its consequences.
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Hi Albert! Hope the hurricane missed you. Was there a lot of flooding in your area?
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You wrote a very solid foundation for a start. I like Ethan and worry for Josh. Considering the movie reference I suspect that this is set in the late 70's to 80's. The mention of Mike is ominous and sitting in the rain in underwear gives a physical and visual feeling of depression. Well written Ivor!
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You got me started with this and by the time you finished, I was laughing my ass off! I needed that Doc. Thanks!
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Don't know. I was practically blind by the time I found 4! 👨🦯
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That sounds like me talking to Aod!
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A dichotomy is a separation and/or contrast. Kyan is a prime example whose life and personality are separate and different once he realizes he is not heterosexual but bisexual. Once Kyan saw the real Perry, shy Kyan became the real Kyan with one goal, Perry! I do understand Jessica having an older sister that sometimes went into overprotective mode. However, if she pushes too hard I can see Kyan pushing back. I suspect he might even invite Max to Hawaii to introduce him the the Bro Gang! That would create some great opportunities for fun.
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Bill, the way you write, we don't need any more incentives to keep reading even if there were spoilers!
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And whose fault is that? Just
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I'd watch out Mrs G. It looks like @FanLit is going to go all out Bruce Lee on you if Perry and Kyan don't get it on soon. In fact, I'll go along with FanLit as a sidekick, Jackie Chan!
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I should be mad at you Laura, but.... with a wonderful apology and promise like this I know I am happy to forgive you. Not only that but the interaction between Otis and Hudson was very steamy. I love the fact that Hudson is in love with Otis, and Otis would say yes if only Hudson would ask him. Great writing, especially the dialogue!
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What an interesting history for skinwalkers. I wonder if Devon's grandfather knows that their shaman is the same one who made Issac a skinwalker. The shaman is a great actor pulling off a very old man. @drsawzall commented he felt like there would be a conflict with the evil skinwalkers in the future. I too can see that happening, but you Bill are all ! I had fun thinking about all the questions Mac has and will ask the shaman. I hope the shaman has great patience with Mac.
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I am having a lot of fun reading these first chapters. I really want to find out who the vampire mentioned in the tags is.
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Mauro is up to something, but is his manipulation at the behest of the Comte or of Mauro's own design? Both Caspian and Konstantin messed up with how they handled Gideon and Kavan. The Comte has a problem that needs the powers of both Gideon and Kavan, but is that his only reason for having them work together? The real suspense is what is the problem and its cause. I will be waiting in great suspense for the next chapter!
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Valrinda has once again saved Beckett's life. This time from an assassin in the night. However, Valrinda didn't stick around and I'm wondering why the dragon left Beckett alone.
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August Signature Author Excerpt: Gone Fishing by Headstall
raven1 commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
I've said it several times, but this is a sincerely awesome story. It is one of many romantic love stories written by Gary.
