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Phenomenal chapter❣️ The foundation is going to be a thing of beauty...can't wait to see Roger blissfully raising all of his sons

So done with “The Weakest Link” (Jeremy) and his evil clan, let Dexter have that perpetual little boy! I just feel sorry for the kids that will have to grow up in that toxic environment, for they’ll surely turn out just like their dim witted, spoiled entitled dad‼️Carter if you can, take your dad, your Aunt and Eric, and escape the Jeremy insanity🙏🏽😢

Your writing is amazing, to bring forth a flood of tears and murderous rage at the same time💔 I'm sitting here feeling as if I'm at that scene with one thought...MURDER them all...but not before torturing them verrrrrry slowly!! Get those innocents as far away from that scene as possible and let the torture begin. Give the good ole boy militiaman a medal 🙏 Great chapter, as they all have been...

Stand your ground, Carter❣️ Use your heart AND your common sense this time, please🙏🏽 Do not lose another person that loves you, by letting others influence your decisions. Laura has to be stopped and deposed from her reign of terror! Excellent chapter❤️‍🔥

I feel as if Carter is repeating the same mistake with Leo as he did with his deceased father...not giving their voices a chance to even be considered or given reasonable thought to...it's unfair, and I hope he'll be able to pull his "whoa is me" act together and realize who the real danger is, before he loses another parent!! Stop taking "concepts of a weapon" to an AK-47 gun fight...with Laura and Dexter😵, ask Elena and Ethan how that worked out?!!

Sooo worth the wait

Awww...ready for this one!!!!

PERFECT…in every aspect❣️💯💯Thank you, sir and long or short, we’ll be lined up for Jacob’s story🫶🏽

I whole-heartedly agree with everything wallycleaver said‼️A book 2 could present Carter/Jeremy POV’s, and definitely deal with the unreasonable hatred of both Laura and wannabe fiancé Dexter 🤦🏾‍♀️ Plus you have the wonderful Jeff, who has been in Carter’s corner from day one…🥰 Please continue 🙏🏽💯

Brilliantly put in her place by a caring father who is determined to not let anyone or anything keep him from getting and loving HIS girls!! 🙌

Absolutely LOVED this story❣️❣️❤️‍🔥 PLEASE continue…💯🙏🏽

Poor Carter...can't catch a break from chaos and mayhem surrounding on all sides 😢 Hopefully some force will find him and send Lopez to join his brother...the psycho and the sociopath united in hell‼️...Okkkk, it was just a "dream" (or a plea) Maybe they could coerce Dexter to join them...more fuel for that ever burning fire⁉️ Enough wishful thinking, back to the story...amazing chapter...keeping us on the edge as usual

Well, Dexter seems to be headed to the door of 'no return'...hopefully ASAP!! Of course, he won't leave without a bit of nastiness...its in his DNA😏 Sooo, we'll wait to see him and Carter's ex get karma due them both! Wonderful stage setting chapter ❣️💯

Excellent!

Agree with everyone else...BEAUTIFUL chapter, couldn't have been better❤️‍🔥 And don't worry, we'll just reread this chapter until you grace us with another...SOON