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Excellent, let's give John the chance to finally do better, especially with his children, like we gave his father-in-law! By now, I think he needs to recalibrate his life, look the mirror straight on, stop looking for exit signs, or sneaking around to be you!!

Thank you for both this heart-wrenching and heart-warming story❣️ You've made many of us more aware of the dangers that our kids face in such an intentionally cruel world we live in...we've experienced the anger, all the rage , the flood of tears, unbelievable evil in some humans, and you've shown us what love, kindness, integrity and nurturing hugs can accomplish I look forward to updates on the wonderful characters introduced to us, and the fate of the evil and corrupt as well 🙏 This was an amazingly well written, well constructed story, wish that we all possessed this kind of talent💖

First two chapters…very well done, looking forward to more‼️💯 Hoping Gael leaves and makes them regret treating him so disrespectfully🫶🏽

This was was indeed a journey worth traveling, thank you so much for allowing us to meet and fall in love with your characters and to hate with all within us, your villains❣️ The writing...plots, character development, romance, pain, tears...just amazing💖

Thank you for this one...the characters, the plot twists and turns, the evil villains, the exciting trials in the woods, the fires, and bombs, the interweaving of lives and families, the tragedies...all leading to an impressive ending of love reigning supreme over evil

Absolutely stunning chapter, now to find Dexter and make sure they have adjoining electric chairs!!! This was such a suspenseful chapter and very well written❣️ So, please have a fitting end for good ole Dex the Pest, he'll try and scheme and murder his way out of all of this, of course😬Moving right along, Jeff and Eric could be cuteness personified...yeah?😍

Phenomenal chapter❣️ The foundation is going to be a thing of beauty...can't wait to see Roger blissfully raising all of his sons

So done with “The Weakest Link” (Jeremy) and his evil clan, let Dexter have that perpetual little boy! I just feel sorry for the kids that will have to grow up in that toxic environment, for they’ll surely turn out just like their dim witted, spoiled entitled dad‼️Carter if you can, take your dad, your Aunt and Eric, and escape the Jeremy insanity🙏🏽😢

Your writing is amazing, to bring forth a flood of tears and murderous rage at the same time💔 I'm sitting here feeling as if I'm at that scene with one thought...MURDER them all...but not before torturing them verrrrrry slowly!! Get those innocents as far away from that scene as possible and let the torture begin. Give the good ole boy militiaman a medal 🙏 Great chapter, as they all have been...

Stand your ground, Carter❣️ Use your heart AND your common sense this time, please🙏🏽 Do not lose another person that loves you, by letting others influence your decisions. Laura has to be stopped and deposed from her reign of terror! Excellent chapter❤️‍🔥

I feel as if Carter is repeating the same mistake with Leo as he did with his deceased father...not giving their voices a chance to even be considered or given reasonable thought to...it's unfair, and I hope he'll be able to pull his "whoa is me" act together and realize who the real danger is, before he loses another parent!! Stop taking "concepts of a weapon" to an AK-47 gun fight...with Laura and Dexter😵, ask Elena and Ethan how that worked out?!!

Sooo worth the wait

Awww...ready for this one!!!!

PERFECT…in every aspect❣️💯💯Thank you, sir and long or short, we’ll be lined up for Jacob’s story🫶🏽

I whole-heartedly agree with everything wallycleaver said‼️A book 2 could present Carter/Jeremy POV’s, and definitely deal with the unreasonable hatred of both Laura and wannabe fiancé Dexter 🤦🏾‍♀️ Plus you have the wonderful Jeff, who has been in Carter’s corner from day one…🥰 Please continue 🙏🏽💯