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Zach gets the smack down, literally and figuratively, that he's needed for a very long time!! To the curb with this loser/user, I don't think he ever really loved Will, just used and manipulated him, from day one it's been all about Zach, and what Zach needed and wanted and Will accommodated him at every turn! Zach forced Will to find his balls and get rid of him...this is all on Zach...and for me, I'm glad he's where garbage needs to be..."to the curb"!!! Love this story and it's characters...though I must confess, Zach will NOT be missed🤭

The “relationship” with Zach, has always been a bit of a lopsided misnomer, with Zach being the ultimate beneficiary of having his cake and eating it too! Yet somehow, making Will feeling guilty for seeming to not support Zach in all his SELFISH glory! This maybe the “lightening flash” that may strike him into valuing Will more or the one that finally exposes Zach as the ‘all about me’ prick that he really is. Once you allow Zach’s brand of self centered, narcissistic behavior free reign, it Never ceases on its own, it feels entitled to continue…why not, it’s a perfect scenario for Zach to continue to guilt Will into believing this is ‘love’…it AINT!! Friend zone Zach, and explore your options Will…you deserve better…Zach has never been anything but a rocky road of pain! 🫣🤭

Very happy to have you back, with a new chapter!! Thank you, after our weekend in Florida, this was like a brilliant light at the end of our horrific "Ian" tunnel! I'm hoping Tala will deal with Susan and Tony 'appropiately', if not in the harshest possible way, I fear they will be a constant threat to whatever stability they are hoping to gain for the Florida pack🤔 Wonderful chapter, again...THANKS❣️

My sincere condolences on the loss of your Mum!! Hope you and family are staying close and doing well! Your Mum taught you well, as we can all attest to by your marvelous writing and imaginative mind❣️ Thank you for sharing your gifted talent...you're giving MsG a run for the top spot, for sure!

Great story, on point💯...you're covering both sides of the proverbial 'coin', excellently and fairly!! Thanks for sharing!!!❣️

Somehow, they want these kids just a bit tooooooooooo much for my brain to accept!! Do they know something (maybe ) about the kids that could result in a profitable windfall for these wicked retards?? Have they killed the father, invented lies about Hunter and Dale, tried several times to illegally obtain the kids...to what end...MONEY is a very good incentive for the "ignit bigit"! Check Preistley's background, she's hiding something pertaining to these children...just speculating...while waiting! 😊

This reeks of another attempt by that horrid woman, trying to get her homophobic way, one way or another...after all it's her "God given right" to run everyone's life as she sees fit! Pudgy Fakerson is probably her husband or good ole boy pastor🤔...just speculating!🤫 Very nice chapter❣️

Thank you for writing this story...it's needed!! Parker is in for a world of hurt, for that is the way cops deal with people that choose to see the real and try and help out in situations like this, no matter the color! Sadly, Parker has entered the world where he'll have the ugly label of "nigger lover", which is meant to be just as derogatory and degrading as "nigger", and if not careful, will get treated like me...and then will understand why we scream "Black Lives Matter"! It is not a question of whether all lives matter, because the average white person's life mattering, will NEVER come into play! White privilege will ultimately allow you the privilege of living without the fear of being murdered while driving, or walking, or just being WHITE! Not meaning any offense, just stating the truth in pretty simplistic terms. Great story, excellent chapter, Ronyx 💖

What a stunning story by an amazing writer! You and your insightful characters were much appreciated, during some difficult times!!

Joh, so hoping that everything is ok and that you are in full recovery ASAP, with no lasting complications!!💕 This is a great story, per your usual of course!❤️ There’s really only 3 things Damon should do BEFORE the Cali trip…extract head from a$$, go after Cole, and MAN THE F**K UP!!! It’s time to pull up the big boy ‘drawz’😁🤞🏽

I’m thinking this was staged by our lords of brilliance, to lure whomever is trying to harm them, out into the open to be annihilated!! Just a wish….🤞🏽so sue me😇

Going to go with 84Mags on this one...a "smiling anaconda" is just not my idea of goodness wrapped in a warm smile!! 🏃‍♀️Point me to the 'grinning Grizzly'! Here's hoping Robert survives all this madness and seeks 'asylum' with all of our guys! 😉 Great story, wonderful characters, fabulous chapter...the usual suspects with your work!❣️

Fabulous ending to such a well written story! Okkkkkkkk...so I'm a fan of westerns after these two wonderful sagas!! Sooooo going to miss the guys...until they come back...it's ok, I can wait See you soon, Coy, Boone, Mitch, Will...LARKSPUR!! 🤗 Another "outta the park" one, Gar...thank you lots!👏

Excellent...truly well written...you always tend to come up with the most unique and entertaining concepts and characters!! This one hit the "You're going to Hollywood" buzzer...wonderful characters with a stunning concept of "predator protecting and loving prey"!! I'm just waiting to see what's in store for our Alpha and Key (hint, hint 😉), because I know Shea and Cyn will join them in that adventure! As stated, Fabulous job...AGAIN!!🤩

Definitely worth waiting for...this chapter was a Cat5 "happy dance" chapter!!🥰🤗 Thank you, Sir Garrific, for these 4 Bright Lights of love!

It just keeps getting curiouser and curiouser...and Better and Better!! I keep thinking Tala is going to have to unleash the "Kracken" on a couple of greedy lil thieves sooner than later... Very nicely done, can't wait for the next chapter!

Such a beautiful story for such tragic circumstances and events! So in tune with today’s corrupt, lawless, soulless “money talks…” society. True As It Can Be is just that…true as it can be!! Thank you for this 5 star sort masterpiece

Exactly my thoughts, purrbaby!! You nailed it!

This has been an awesome journey! I am one of the teary-eyed ones, not looking forward to this story ending, but knowing that Matt and Trent and of course Mr. London, will take care of Hayden! So happy Matt has an inheritance and hopefully, he'll use most of it to help himself and the people he loves! Sueing that Judge would be the least of his worries, if I had my 'dreams come true'! ☹️

So, so NICE...this cleared up a few bubbles in my lil mind...the past and how they each evolved, the here and now feelings, and my biggest concern...who's giving up whose home space...milling or farming, by the river or in town!! You handled it JUST right🤗...they will NOT be apart again, no matter what or where!!🥰 Great job, Gar!💯

Ok...Cyn is fine and has come into his own..Hugs for him!! I knew he would see Shea's distress and getting fighting mad!! My concern now is Sam...poor, heroic Sam seems to have been forgotten in all the 'Eike chaos'. Please let my little guy be ok 🥺 Stunning chapter, literally had us on the edge of our seats. EXCELLENT!!

Thank you, Gar...what an appropriate setting for these two men to finally allow themselves to just ...be in love!! Perfect scene, perfect resolution...perfect 10 chapter!!

Oh geezzzz Gary...what a fabulous office visit with a 'real' doc that listens with more than just an ear!!! That exchange between the doc and Mitch was so well done...typical "Garrific"(stunningly terrific)!! Made the day, and now we just have to wait and see how long it takes Mitch to get his priorities in order, given this second chance...drop to your knees, thank whomever you please, and get your butt over to Will's ASAP! 🙏 Awesomeeeeeee chapter, Gar...good luck at the dentist, hopefully he won't use the 'string tied to the doorknob' method's of Mitch's old doc🥰

Fabulous chapter!!! I choose OAKLAND..🤩

A brilliantly written chapter...handled so smoothly, even though you had people lined up around the corner, trying for a field goal kick using Mitch's arse!! Does he not see that Will is going to suffer whether he lets him near him or not...that's the nature of the love beast...so, let's put the Tom Cruz/Cameron Diaz theory to work here..."with me ---, without me ___(high or low) your choice Blue Jr(Mitch)!! Again, a high anxiety chapter, masterfully done, Master Gary ❣️