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Chapter 4 When Worlds Collide
Dathi commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 4 When Worlds Collide
Took me a bit to catch up with what you had done, it does work and I am still very excited to read the expansion and development of this tale. The introduction of Auric and herbal healing is an interesting addition. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter and thank you very much for sharing your story, keep up the good work. -
What an exciting first two chapters. I hope that you have a long tale planned because you have given yourself a great starting point. Thank you for sharing your story and I am eagerly awaiting the ensuing installments. Very well done.
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You handle the meeting of two disparate cultures very well, I am have enjoyed reading this story thus far and hope to enjoy reading many more articles of your work. Thank you very much and very well done.
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I am seriously intrigued and am now waiting (im)patiently to be able to read the ensuing chapters. Thank you for sharing, very well done.
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Nicely finished off, leaving a gap to write a sequel should you choose to. Thank you for sharing this wonderful tale, this is one that I avidly looked for every time I opened the site page. I am normally a Sci-fi reader so your story is a bit out of that genre but your well rounded and convincing characters and situations kept me entertained and constantly coming back to check for updates. My interest was maintained through out and I was able to engage in the tale with both intellect and emotion, this is important to me to enhance my experience and enjoyment from reading. Thank you again for this wonderful story and I do hope that there will be many others presented by yourself.
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Raptors stoop for the kill! All is not yet lost and pulling out of a steep dive, while stressful, is do-able. So many places that you could take this, I would have to cast my vote towards continuing with this world, PLEASE! Thank you very much for sharing this start of a wonderful new tale, very well done.
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Finished, well the title said it all; One Semester, another fine tale that join equally with your other presentations. I have enjoyed reading this tale although I have to say that it was Sam who I enjoyed following more than Joel or Peter. Thank you very much for sharing and I hope to enjoy another offering in good time.
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Another awesome chapter, thank you. I am loving the light hearted banter coupled with the humanistic caring and introducing the semi paternal aspect from Phillip. Thoroughly enjoyable tale, I am eagerly awaiting the next installment.
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Glad to see you back writing. A good foundation chapter, I am curious as to where you are going to take this tale. I look forward to seeing the subsequent chapters unfold. Thank you for sharing your story, very well done.
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An interesting start, I am intrigued and curious as to where this is going to go as a story. The arrival of the next chapter is eagerly awaited. Thank you for sharing.
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A good ground laying chapter that leaves you much room for developing a sound story. Thank you for sharing your tale.
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This is an extremely fast paced and entertaining short story. As a stand alone entity it is sound and robust, it also has the breadth of potential scope to spawn a flurry of additional off shoots, very exciting. Thank you very much for sharing this story.
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I am intrigued with this story of yours it has an interesting direction and I am very interested in how you develop this to its natural conclusion. Thank you very much for sharing, please continue.
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I am really enjoying reading this story of yours. Thank you for sharing it, very well done. I am looking forward to reading about Aiden and Ethan and the integration of Ethan into the pack.
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I am enjoying this tale and am looking forward to seeing how you bring everything together to achieve denouement. Thank you very much for sharing this story, very well done.
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The sadness that I feel knowing that the tale of Mirri and Jarra is concluded is ameliorated by the joy, warmth and pleasure obtained from having read this magnificent story. My esteemed thanks to you for sharing your tale and enriching my life because of it. I am eagerly awaiting the arrival of the next part of this masterpiece.
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Who, being of sound mind and body, makes a treaty of any type with demon kind? Thoroughly engaging and enjoyable, thank you very much for sharing your tale. I sincerely hope that you decide to carry on with the saga of Billy Newt and his growth as a warlock.
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An excellent story that has the potential to be developed into a saga, if you felt the inspiration. Thank you for sharing your story.
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This story just keeps getting better as it progresses, very well done. The controlled response to the horrendous acts visited upon the holidaying party is well considered and appropriate. Thank you very much for sharing and I am, as always, eagerly awaiting the next instalments arrival.
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Intriguing and exciting, the possibilities ahead are almost boundless. Very well done and thank you for sharing your tale. I am eagerly awaiting the arrival of the following chapters to see how you develop this story.
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My Coffee Disappeared!!!???
Dathi commented on Emi GS's story chapter in My Coffee Disappeared!!!???
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I have to say that I am very impressed. With the prompt base that gave rise to this piece of work you managed to craft a tale that flowed logically and magically. As a stand alone piece it is great however it is well enough structured that it has the potential to flow into a much larger piece. Very well done and thank you for sharing this tale.
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I am definitely enjoying this tale, it is a fascinating concept. Thank you very much for sharing and very well done. I am eagerly awaiting the arrival of the next chapter.
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I echo Columbus Guy, make them pay and make it hurt, badly. Very sad chapter however it was very artfully crafted and powerful. Thank you for sharing your story and as always I eagerly await the arrival of the next instalment.
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Act I: Lost Property (part III)
Dathi commented on buildercub's story chapter in Act I: Lost Property (part III)
Awesome, I'm hooked. There is so much scope and direction that you have almost unlimited possibilities. I found the characters to be well rounded and believable and the storyline of scientific and military co-operation to be sound. I am very much looking forward to reading the future chapters of this tale. Thank you for sharing your story.
