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  1. Once again, Freddie appears to be worth his weight in gold. Simon is so fortunate to have him as a friend. Perhaps something good will happen to help mend the fraying relationship he has with his mother - or something that lifts her mood; perhaps his father getting hit by a bus? Looking forward to more.
  2. This is a tough question, and an important one. Thanks to @JimSqu Sunbelter, @jkwsquirrel, @Rigby Taylor, @Timothy M. and @Yeoldebard for taking it on. My preference is for a well told story that engages and draws me in; regardless of how much or how little sex is involved.
  3. I confess to being clueless; some investigation is needed. Hmmmm.
  4. Hank hurts, that’s plain. He isn’t going to forgive or reconcile anytime soon, not if the scenes toward the end of the chapter are indicative of anything. You provide us with tons of circumstantial and tangential information about why Chase’s grand error amplified his pain, and you help us feel the weight of guilt Chase has heaped on himself. So much seems to be driving these two apart, that maybe Chase will have to learn to live with the ache and the distance while he finds a new circle of friends.
  5. Parker Owens

    Just for Fun

    Can’t wait for the next installment. Ike seems to be in a kind of turmoil, and it isn’t the flu. Devin hoped for more. Will he get it? Meanwhile, I’m enjoying Frank and Ben edge closer, even as the soap flourishes.
  6. Grant has made a critical error, thinking he knows what’s best for Troy. Troy is unlikely to forgive such a transgression. You have set up incredible tension and the possibility of a world of hurt. Well done!
  7. I am sad for the hurt you endure. You express it well enough that I, too, feel your ache. My hand and heart go out to you.
  8. Parker Owens

    Sunrise Surf

    You make the first of every month a treat.
  9. Parker Owens

    Sunrise Surf

    I’m already enjoying this. I’ll be looking for new chapters!
  10. I sent a link of this to our choir director. The music will be ordered!
  11. It must have been exalting, exhilarating and introspective all at once.
  12. @Thorn Wilde Thank you, thank you for posting this magnificent piece.
  13. I’m very glad you liked these. Thanks very much for reading them!
  14. What makes me sad is that anything I’ve written might give you such apprehension. What gladdens my heart is knowing these snapshots made you smile and recall something worthwhile. I know there are others who will one day remember you with smiles, too. You were very kind to read and comment on these. Thank you.
  15. You’re most welcome. Even today, the scent on newly lit tobacco has me looking around for dad. He left me preferring radio sports and a penchant for gardening, among other things. I’m glad these could evoke good memories for you. Thanks for reading!
  16. Thank you. I’m very glad you thought so.
  17. I’m very glad these touched you. These snapshots haven’t faded over time. Thanks very much for reading!
  18. I think the ritual was as important to Dad as the smoke, too. I can still smell it. I’m glad this brought you as good a memory as I gave me.
  19. I think I grow more varieties of tomatoes now than Dad did. But he showed me how to plant and tend a garden, despite my mulish teenage resistance. I’m grateful for his patience now. Thank you for reading!
  20. Thank you so very much for reading them.
  21. Thanks, Wayne. I really appreciate your taking time to read these.
  22. Thank you for reading these. If you gained a glimpse of my father, that’s grand.
  23. Thank you, tim. Remembering these has brought many smiles to me; and I’m glad they do the same for you.
  24. Portraits of My Father Dad still sits at the kitchen table writing letters on his legal pad while the radio recounts an unfolding game, Red Sox, Celtics or Canadiens; each longhand line brings him back to life. Barking Dog was Dad’s pipe tobacco; he got more pleasure fussing with it, scooping, packing and tamping, getting it to light, than its acrid wreaths of smoke gave him, but those grey mem
  25. Parker Owens

    Reciprocity

    I enjoyed this chapter. Troy becomes a little more relaxed with Grant, and maybe Grant is feeling more than pity for Troy. That’s a lovely start. And a furnace to warm everything up! Better still. Now maybe Troy can get his van towed and fixed. You have me grateful for the early chapter, and looking forward to the next.
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