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Love it!! I knew Oliver was gonna play a part in Ryder's recovery. I think they will both be good support for each other. Oliver just has to watch that he doesn't push Ryder to do something he's not mentally comfortable doing. It seems Oliver, like almost every 13 year old, has the tendency to push and push not paying attention to any boundary lines. That could lead to a bad reaction from Ryder. They're definitely gonna have a problem with paparazzi. I'm sure that's gonna be so annoying!
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I'm so proud of Ryder for being honest with Teddy. I would have lost all respect for him if he hadn't. I am, however, pissed at Ryder for telling Teddy to go easy on Nate. Nate doesn't deserve a break. He deserves to be pushed in front of a fast moving vehicle! Can't be near the hospital tho, because they would be too close to life saving equipment. Lol! I also applaud Teddy for keeping his cool. He had to have been totally boiling with anger. I kno I would have been.
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That was NOT the ending I had expected. I hope Nate gets the most severe discipline he can get. FYI, I wouldn't be one bit opposed to him being eliminated all together 😉
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Great to see a new chapter! Love Eric and Mike! Poor Chet, still having to put up with his bible beater grandma. I'm surprised they haven't found a way to keep her away from Chet, especially after what her own husband did. I wouldn't want my child anywhere near someone like her or the religious freaks she associates with! At least make the visits supervised. This visit totally sounded unsupervised, considering the questions she was asking. Luckily for them he's smart enough to come to his own conclusions. So happy for Eric and his rise to stardom. Glad he's got a level head and thinking about Mike and Chet first, and not himself. Looking forward to reading more!
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So happy that Adam is safe from his bastard father! Hope he gets a good dose of karma in jail!
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Great chapter! It was good to have a chapter from Oliver's perspective. U could hear in Ryder's words how much he still loves Teddy. I think Oliver might also play a role in Ryder's recovery and sobriety. They definitely had a connection. Their mom really needs to chill out. It was really unfair for her to accuse Teddy of being irresponsible for leaving Oliver with Ryder. They were in a hospital full of doctors and nurses for god's sake! Its obvious that Teddy AND his parents have a lot of healing to do.
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Great start to the second book, or the continuation! This is gonna be a very interesting ride. Considering I'm not a very forgiving person, I'm very intrigued as to how this plays out. Personally, I think what Ryder did to Teddy was totally unforgivable, despite what his reasons were. The "sex tape" was unnecessary and very cruel. I don't blame Teddy one bit for being angry and bitter. Ryder is lucky he's speaking to him at all. Don't kno that I could do that if in the same situation. That being said, definitely looking forward to more!
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I'm hoping if not a part three, maybe an epilogue???? Kinda begging here! Lol!
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The Gap Year (Part Two)
jaysalmn commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Gap Year (Part Two)
Aww, finally to the love of his life, Jacob! I don't kno if I could have taken any more stories about Charlie hooking up with losers! Lol!! Seriously, that whole group sounded so dishonest. I don't care what their reasons are. I could never do that, nor would I have the respect for someone's decision to do that. Glad to see Frankie is finally true to himself, and didn't send someone else to apologize to Charlie! Lol!! So excited to see how Charlie and Jacob's relationship evolved! Just love them as a couple! -
Great way to end this chapter of their lives. They both kno how the other feels and I'm so excited for them both. I'll be waiting (impatiently, lol) for the next part of their journey.
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Blu's Rise and Hatman's Demise
jaysalmn commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Blu's Rise and Hatman's Demise
Wow! Just when I thought those two couldn't be any worse! Killing people using Kyle and Kaleb's trust funds to pay for it. I agree with Kyle, they should have been taken out. Rudolph and Penelope don't deserve to live. Maybe give them both the death penalty and put them in the express lane?? Lol!! I'm just happy that everyone is ok, and nobody else will be losing their lives at the hands of those monsters. May Rudolph and Penelope rot in hell! -
The Gap Year (Part One)
jaysalmn commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Gap Year (Part One)
So much for not being able to get over David....and eww, with the town slut who also fucked around with Frankie?! I kno its a small town, but geez Charlie, have some standards at least!! Is Charlie really that hard up that he's gonna meet with Frankie?? I kno who he ends up with, but I'm really having a difficult time respecting him in this chapter. -
What a great chapter! Omg, Paula should burn in hell!! All those god loving Christians like her are the most hateful, bigoted hypocrites ever! Like Paula surely wasn't banging the vanilla douche while her husbamd was still alive. WE ALL KNOW SHE WAS!! To threaten Billy with hos own life was a new low for that bitch! Of course Brett's mom will gladly take Billy in, and pay for his insulin. Unlike Paula, she's not a spiteful bitch. I seriously think things between Billy and Paula is unrepairable. Seriously, who the fuck would want to repair a relationship with someone like her?? I sure as hell wouldn't if I were Billy! This is getting good! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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So glad that douchebag Rudolph got arrested! Hope he gets what he deserves! Absolutely love Stephanie! A beautiful girl with a mouth like a trucker...my kind of gal! Lol!! I also think Nan would have liked a good rave! Yup, a Beef And Pizza joint is gonna be their choice for the reception! Considering they're all kinda crazy, that's the perfect choice!
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Great chapter! A wonderful Christmas gift! So glad Joey is gonna be ok. Happy that Gene is accepting and growing with his feelings for Joey, and that he and Nicky have formed a bond. Brought tears to my eyes when Joey thought of his dream of Allen, and Allen said he would understand. Excited to see what happens next!
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I absolutely loved this chapter! All about the love and happiness of family. So happy that everything came together for Ian and Adam. Now they need the house with the white picket fence and the dog running around the yard!
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Jayson is right, Frankie is a chicken-shit bastard! Who the hell sends a friend to break up with someone?? That's worse than a text message or an email break-up! Good riddance to jock trash! On to the musician! Lol!!
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I vote the more horrific the better!! Lol!
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What a great chapter! I'm so proud of Dustin! He seems to be in a good place, and has been really working on himself. He gave some very good advice to Billy. Question is, will Billy use his advice? The name of the next chapter sounds very interesting. Can't wait!!
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To me it just feels like Toby is keeping Liam busy with sex so he won't ask any questions that Toby doesn't have a slick answer to.
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...And this is the reason I don't trust Toby and think he's just using Liam as a way to get off. Toby seems to be more interested in getting off than getting to kno who Liam really is, and of course Liam is still a teenager with hormones all over the place. Toby is definitely using that to his advantage, and I really don't find that to be cute at all. There's obviously nothing wrong with sex, but I'm pretty sure dating consists of more than just getting each other off.
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Good chapter. Toby seems a little too nonchalant about things. What other issues may he be too nonchalant about? I may be the only holdout, LOL, but I just can't bring myself to fully trust him.
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What a great ending! Loved the wedding. The epilogue was wonderful! Loved the ending to Eli's speech. Ian and Cam raised him right, just like we knew they would.
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Uh huh......guess Toby conveniently forgot to tell Mandy he's banging dudes now. Wonder what excuse he'll have for this.
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I hope I'm wrong, too. It just kinda seemed to me that Toby was pushing himself on Liam back at his place. When he didn't get off with dry humping, he had to jack off. To me, it looked like getting off was his main objective. Of course, I'm not very trusting of many people. Lol!
