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Great way to end this chapter of their lives. They both kno how the other feels and I'm so excited for them both. I'll be waiting (impatiently, lol) for the next part of their journey.
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Blu's Rise and Hatman's Demise
jaysalmn commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Blu's Rise and Hatman's Demise
Wow! Just when I thought those two couldn't be any worse! Killing people using Kyle and Kaleb's trust funds to pay for it. I agree with Kyle, they should have been taken out. Rudolph and Penelope don't deserve to live. Maybe give them both the death penalty and put them in the express lane?? Lol!! I'm just happy that everyone is ok, and nobody else will be losing their lives at the hands of those monsters. May Rudolph and Penelope rot in hell! -
The Gap Year (Part One)
jaysalmn commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Gap Year (Part One)
So much for not being able to get over David....and eww, with the town slut who also fucked around with Frankie?! I kno its a small town, but geez Charlie, have some standards at least!! Is Charlie really that hard up that he's gonna meet with Frankie?? I kno who he ends up with, but I'm really having a difficult time respecting him in this chapter. -
What a great chapter! Omg, Paula should burn in hell!! All those god loving Christians like her are the most hateful, bigoted hypocrites ever! Like Paula surely wasn't banging the vanilla douche while her husbamd was still alive. WE ALL KNOW SHE WAS!! To threaten Billy with hos own life was a new low for that bitch! Of course Brett's mom will gladly take Billy in, and pay for his insulin. Unlike Paula, she's not a spiteful bitch. I seriously think things between Billy and Paula is unrepairable. Seriously, who the fuck would want to repair a relationship with someone like her?? I sure as hell wouldn't if I were Billy! This is getting good! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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So glad that douchebag Rudolph got arrested! Hope he gets what he deserves! Absolutely love Stephanie! A beautiful girl with a mouth like a trucker...my kind of gal! Lol!! I also think Nan would have liked a good rave! Yup, a Beef And Pizza joint is gonna be their choice for the reception! Considering they're all kinda crazy, that's the perfect choice!
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Great chapter! A wonderful Christmas gift! So glad Joey is gonna be ok. Happy that Gene is accepting and growing with his feelings for Joey, and that he and Nicky have formed a bond. Brought tears to my eyes when Joey thought of his dream of Allen, and Allen said he would understand. Excited to see what happens next!
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I absolutely loved this chapter! All about the love and happiness of family. So happy that everything came together for Ian and Adam. Now they need the house with the white picket fence and the dog running around the yard!
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Jayson is right, Frankie is a chicken-shit bastard! Who the hell sends a friend to break up with someone?? That's worse than a text message or an email break-up! Good riddance to jock trash! On to the musician! Lol!!
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I vote the more horrific the better!! Lol!
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What a great chapter! I'm so proud of Dustin! He seems to be in a good place, and has been really working on himself. He gave some very good advice to Billy. Question is, will Billy use his advice? The name of the next chapter sounds very interesting. Can't wait!!
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To me it just feels like Toby is keeping Liam busy with sex so he won't ask any questions that Toby doesn't have a slick answer to.
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...And this is the reason I don't trust Toby and think he's just using Liam as a way to get off. Toby seems to be more interested in getting off than getting to kno who Liam really is, and of course Liam is still a teenager with hormones all over the place. Toby is definitely using that to his advantage, and I really don't find that to be cute at all. There's obviously nothing wrong with sex, but I'm pretty sure dating consists of more than just getting each other off.
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Good chapter. Toby seems a little too nonchalant about things. What other issues may he be too nonchalant about? I may be the only holdout, LOL, but I just can't bring myself to fully trust him.
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What a great ending! Loved the wedding. The epilogue was wonderful! Loved the ending to Eli's speech. Ian and Cam raised him right, just like we knew they would.
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Uh huh......guess Toby conveniently forgot to tell Mandy he's banging dudes now. Wonder what excuse he'll have for this.
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I hope I'm wrong, too. It just kinda seemed to me that Toby was pushing himself on Liam back at his place. When he didn't get off with dry humping, he had to jack off. To me, it looked like getting off was his main objective. Of course, I'm not very trusting of many people. Lol!
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Haha! I love "Jate"! Lmao!! I just don't think in the end Jake deserved to be forgiven, much less given another chance. He's proven himself to be a liar and a cheat, and didn't show any guilt about either until he was caught. There's no rebuilding trust off of that.
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I absolutely agree. I, for one, find cheating unforgivable. I would never go back to someone who cheated on me. I'm never gonna be a doormat for anybody! I say Jake would have continued lying all through college. He certainly didn't have a problem lying before getting caught.
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Hmm...kinds looks to me that Toby is using Liam as just a different way to get off. Sorry for being the "debbie downer" of the comments. I have a big problem trusting Toby. I still say he had a thing for Liam's brother, and he's taking Liam because his brother isn't around anymore. We never did get to the bottom of just how close Toby's relationship was with Liam's brother. I think he's playing Liam's vulnerabilities and his crush against him. Oh, and what about Toby's friends with benefits, Mandy? There's A LOT not to trust about Toby.
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Great story. Unfortunately, I could never be forgiving like Kaiden. To me, Jake looking like shit and being sad would be his karma! The one time I was cheated on, I went right past hurt and straight to angry, hateful and bitter. It ran its course and I got over it much quicker. Why be sad and depressed over an asshole? Guess I can understand why Kaiden was, considering his mental state. Oh, and I got a good laugh when u used my "skank ass boyfriend" line! Loved it!! Lmao!
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Great chapter! I just love Caleb. His enthusiasm over going to the beach and the flight was absolutely adorable! He more than deserves the happiness he's finally getting with Matt and Jon. He couldn't ask for better guardians, and they couldn't ask for a better kid. It was so exciting to find out that despite everything Caleb was going through at home, he kept so far ahead on his education. Definitely looking forward to reading more!
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I'm so happy to see the sequel here! I'm happy that Joey went back to school for his doctorate! Ticker and Star are correct that he can do more good as a principal than a teacher. Sounds like he really has respect from the students. Absolutely love Nicky! I think they equally need each other. Feel bad for Gene, although that IS the life he chose. I also don't understand why Tina hasn't left him yet. Its not like she doesn't have her own money and can't get on without him. Says a lot that he remembers so vividly the kiss he and Joey shared so many years ago. Very excited to follow on their journey!
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Lots of happy tears with this chapter! The moment between Adam and Pat was so touching, as was the two dads adoring baby Riley. She's a very lucky little girl. Two loving dads and a big brother to protect her. I can only imagine how adorable the pics were of Adam and Ian with Riley.
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And I’ll never have that recipe again
jaysalmn commented on Sam Wyer's story chapter in And I’ll never have that recipe again
Cute and lovely goes out the window when he's banging another guy behind Kaiden's back! Lol! -
And I’ll never have that recipe again
jaysalmn commented on Sam Wyer's story chapter in And I’ll never have that recipe again
You're welcome!
