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First, there is NO explanation that would excuse Jake cheating on Kaiden! I, for one, think a nasty STD would be appropriate karma. Second, there was no mention from Jake that "it isn't what it looks like". His repeated "I'm sorry" pretty much cemented his guilt. I don't think there was any mistaking what was happening.

Great chapter! I love firefighters, so great touch. Davis deserves someone who values him as more than a fuck buddy, or values him at all for that matter. Kaleb made his bed, now he has to lay in it. However, I don't think u should pair Kaleb with Christopher. I think he's done way too much damage to go that far. I absolutely love Kahn! Good judge of character. Kaleb was a whiney bitch pretty much the whole chapter. He deserved the growls Kahn gave him! Lol!

Great epilogue! So sorry for ur loss. A wonderful dedication.

I feel bad for Kaiden. I don't think he's an idiot and immature at all. In fact, I'm disappointed that he didn't beat the shit out of Jake AND his skanky ass new boyfriend. What an asshole, stringing along Kaiden while fucking someone else. As far as I'm concerned, cheating is unforgivable. I would never speak to him again and hope that karma beats him like a drum! I'm happy Kaiden has a good support system and went back to counseling. Its good to have someone to talk to. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Great chapter! So happy everyone is ok, but mad as hell Van Jordan got away. The song with the proposal was a great touch. I also never received a notification when chapter 12 was posted, so had to go back to read. Looking forward to the epilogue and the next book!

I almost forgot about this story. I also hope there are new chapters in the works.

By far one of the best stories I've read on GA! Loveable main characters you want to protect and embrace and never let go. An emotional journey you don't want to miss.

Omg, I still have tears rolling down my face as I type this! This one really tugged at the heart strings. So happy Joey found a career that he can look out for other boys that might be treated like he was in school, like little Eddie. That picture at the end really turned on the water works for me! Lol! So sad that Allen died, but happy Joey goes on with the wonderful memories of their 15 years together. I'm glad that Allen's stepfather came around and was with Allen when he passed. I think that probably put Allen at peace. Again, one of the best stories I have read on here. I hope u plan on posting Gene's story, as u did on another site. I didn't get to read it, but hoping that u may post it on GA too.

If it's about a road trip and not a courtship, then mentioning love in the description and the gay tag really weren't necessary at all.

Still loving the story. I don't mean to sound impatient, even though I probably am LOL, but when do we start getting a glimpse into the feelings the narrator is having towards Tom??

Fantastic chapter! These are the good things that I have always wished for Joey. He has people who care about him, Allen who loves him, and a promising future! I feel bad for Gene, but can understand why he's doing what he's doing. Happy tears for sure!

Great chapter! Nan and Kaleb shouldn't be let out to roam without a responsible adult along! Lol!! The party was great, and Nan dirty dancing with Wesley was hilarious!! Have a feeling Davis was reading into things way more than Kaleb was. Sucks when that happens.

Great story so far! I found the sequel once, where u write Gene's story, but didn't get to read it. I hope u plan on publishing it here on GA

Feel so bad for Gene. Good that he's in a place where he can be watched, and maybe have someone he can talk to. I agree that somebody needs to beat the shit outta Barry! Give him a big dose of his own medicine! Happy that Joey's test came back negative.

Interesting. Have to say, if my boyfriend had brought a teenager home from a place called "Boy River", he would have been my ex too! Seriously, delete ur old email and start a new one. Not sure that I would trust either Rush or Clay, but I guess everyone is different. Looks to be an interesting journey.

Great chapter! So glad the boys talked everything out. I just love Patrick and how concerned he is for the baby. He's gonna make a great big brother. I'm positive grandma and grandpa won't be taking Anna's side. I think whatever judge they get should hear what the baby's big brother has to say about the situation. I also think Ian and Adam may need to go house shopping!

Loved the chapter! I think I was just as excited as they were for them moving into the house! Loving Mrs B! Was worried for a minute when she was talking about her husband, but technically he did take a spill! Lol!! Snowballs to the back of the head was hilarious. Nate and Bodie are so cute together! Can't wait to read more!

Great beginning! I like Wes and Joseph, and who could possibly not love a story with Benny in it! I'm excited to follow Wes' journey to finding his own happiness.

Bondage isn't my thing, so could have done without it. Great chapter otherwise. Brady's father sounds like a real sick fuck! Can't wait to see how they pay him back for all of his horrible deeds. Brady needs to ease up on breaking down doors. This is Nessay's house after all.

Great chapter, but made me cry too. Joey and Allen are so good for each other. I love that Allen's HIV status doesn't matter as far as Joey's feelings go. Reminds me of when one of my best friends mentioned he was HIV positive during casual conversation. I just shrugged my shoulders and nodded. He kinda looked at me and started laughing. I asked him what he was laughing about. He said "I just told u I was positive and u acted like I told u I didn't like onions or something" I responded "Ur status doesn't change our friendship." He passed a quite a few years ago, at too young of an age. I miss him a lot, but will never forget that conversation in his car on the way to Happy Hour!

Great chapter! Glad that the party went well. I can imagine how emotionally exhausted one can get, especially agonizing over things as much as Kaiden had. Sounded like a great party, as did the next day! 😉 I'm also glad that u decided to add to the story. Can't wait to see what happens next!

So very Happy to see another chapter! Hope u get it internet problems taken care of soon. What can I say about Anna that hasn't already been said? Baby aside, she isn't deserving of the oxygen she breathes! I still say unleash @Dahawk on her as soon as the baby is born! I can totally understand Ian's reaction and how he's handling the whole Adam situation. As I said in last chapter's comment, Ian laid everything out. He was an open book to Adam. Adam was the one who held important information from Ian, THEN accused him of knowing and colluding with Anna! I don't think it's unreasonable to still be angry six weeks later. I sure as hell would be. I don't think an intervention from his dad was necessary. I probably would have told dad to butt out, and any talk about Adam was off limits. Lol! I can understand them being worried, but I think Ian deserves to be angry. I kno for the sake of the story he needed to accept the meeting for a coffee, but I'm not so sure I would have. Also, I NEVER answer my phone without looking to see who it is first!

Great chapter! As much as I wanted to hate Brady and not forgive him for how he treated Nessay back in high school, I think he more than redeemed himself by pushing Nessay aside and putting himself in harm's way. Can't wait to find out who the homophobic assholes are.

So sad that we've reached the end of the story, but what a perfect ending it was! Sam and Brian are definitely perfect for each other. Great story!!

Have to say, I'm very surprised at Adam's reaction to Ian. I would think he'd at least know by now that Ian isn't an evil manipulator like his sister is. I wouldn't only be hurt, but I'd be mad as hell if I were Ian. Ian didn't know anything about Anna's situation. Adam, on the other hand, hid a wife AND unborn child from Ian. Adam better be crawling back on hands and knees begging for forgiveness! I seriously think you should let Dahawk deal with Anna! Lol!!