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I'm in tears once again. This is such a terribly sad story, but I'm desperately hoping that there will be good things to come. Joey deserves that.
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Good chapter. I'm still very disappointed he ended up with Angela, and now has a child of his own. I don't understand why u decided to go in this direction. The premise of the story was for a teen outed as gay and pretty much kicked out of the town he lived, to do what he has done and go back and I assume show the town that being gay doesn't make u less of a person and confront the guy who outed him. There was only one acknowledgement of his even being gay, he has never been with a guy or showed any attraction, and is now married to a woman. It's turned into another straight guy going through life. Great writing, but definitely not what I thought it would be.
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First time reading also. Enjoyed the first chapter. I like Kay, even though he seems pretty cliquey at school. Never hung around guys like him when I was in school. They were always too into themselves, and I find arrogance a turn off. Lol! Really like Jake. Sounds like a really sweet guy. From his actions, I'm kinda surprised he's single. Definitely looking forward to reading more!
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Wow! Intense start. Feel so bad for Brad and Nate. At least their asshole dad was arrested. Brad is gonna be so heartbroken when he finds out Jesse already has a boyfriend. Can't wait to read more!
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Chapter 20 - Dane and other family
jaysalmn commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 20 - Dane and other family
Great chapter! So happy Dane has Alfy as a friend. The two together are adorable! I see them being life long best friends! -
What a sad beginning. My heart breaks for Joey. I agree this probably won't be an easy read, and a lot of tears will be shed in the process, but I have yet to find a Ronyx story that I haven't loved. Looking forward to reading more!
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As far as I'm concerned, if people want to sleep around, more power to them. I definitely haven't been an angel in that department. Lol! The only thing I don't understand is if a person wants to hook up with other people, why be in a relationship? When I think of relationships, especially marriage, I think of trust, loyalty and monogamy. No man is going to convince me that I'm the love of their life while balls deep in another guy!
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Yes, I agree attraction is part of being human and doesn't mean we have to act on them. However, Louis and Harry has already started acting on them. The kiss at the restaurant?? I can even dismiss that as being under extreme stress with Don. At this point, with Don "working properly", and being as back to his old self as he can, to be that strongly attracted in my mind just isn't right. For Harry, as Don's boss, to keep pushing the subject just shows what a scumbag he really is. It seems to me that Louis and Harry have no shame.
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It was great to see Don so happy and excited about the marathon. Exactly what he needed. I don't kno what to think of Miriam. I want to believe her apology, yet the fact that her needing something is the only thing that brought her back to apologize makes me want to just push her towards the door! Lol! Still think Harry is a scumbag. Louis need to tell him right out that it's never gonna happen and quit bringing it up, Or be an equal scumbag and hook up with him. Don made the mistake of planting that idea in his head. Now Louis and Harry are playing their little games. Them being adults, being a game player is pretty sad. Louis needs to remember his vows. If he wants to bang Harry so bad, he should just go be with Harry and let Don find a man who loves him 100%!
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The Backstory (Part Three)
jaysalmn commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Backstory (Part Three)
Prom was great! So happy everyone was so supportive. However, thought what the girls pulled after was pretty shitty. I couldn't have done it. I don't share my partner with ANYBODY! -
What a great chapter! So happy u didn't kill George at the cabin! Lol! When Billy came out to the living room in the middle of the night and George was sleeping in the chair, I was totally expecting Billy to find him not breathing. Thank u for ending this part of the series on a good note. I expect George not to make it very far into the next part. I think the cabin with George is just what the boys needed. Their talk really came from the heart, and I have a lot of respect for George and how he's handling their relationship. Still say Billy's mom is cheating with vanilla douche, even though both she and George say she's not. Looking very forward to part 6!
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I can't believe Aaron left poor Dustin with that bitch, Dr Millie!! The way she talked to him, not to mention how she yelled at Dustin after she slammed the door! WTF??? What the hell is a phone call to Sydney supposed to do?? He, as an officer, should kno how slow the state moves on EVERYTHING, friend or not. He should also kno how many children are abused at the hands of their foster parents, and he heard it first hand! I'm pretty disappointed in Aaron, and he should feel pretty damned ashamed. Btw, Aaron, it wasn't god who put Dustin in the situation with Dr Millie, it was you and Sydney!
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Great chapter, although what Alex is going through just breaks my heart. Brendan IS the best brother a boy could ask for. I agree that Dr Millie was a total bitch. Definitely in the wrong profession. Alex was smart to dismiss her.
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Great chapter! Paula definitely deserved what she got from Billy! U could tell by her response that something is going on between she and the vanilla douche! If there are two things I absolutely hate, they are hypocrites and cheaters. That bitch is both! I did think it was funny that on the way to Brett's, Billy ran into Brett who was on his way to Billy's! Lol!! I also hope that Billy's dad takes both of the boys to the cabin. I also hope that Billy outs his mother as the lying, hypocritical, cheating bitch she is! Definitely looking forward to the next chapter!
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Omg, what a wonderful ending! What a perfect time for Troy to say he loves Jayden than in front of the whole graduating class! I was teared up when he sang that song. Loved the email Jayden sent to their parents. Oh, and Will should feel guilty FOREVER! Lol!! I hope we get a sequel. I'm really gonna miss Troy and Jayden.
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Good beginning! Already like Trevor and Dustin! Can't wait to see where their adventure takes us, and how they discover each other's feelings.
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Oh no! We can't be near the end, yet! There's so much more to be written! Let's face it, everyone loves Jayden and Troy. We don't want it to end! 😭 So glad that Jayden wasn't hurt worse, and at least one of the asshole were taken out! I hope, along with everybody else, that there's a sequel to the story, Or at least an epilogue.
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Glad that all the bad guys were caught and locked away. I like Angela and Tom, but disappointed that she's who he ended up with. I thought the whole purpose of going back to his hometown was to prove that being gay doesn't make him any less of a man. Then he conforms to the norm and ends up with a wife. I figured maybe one of his fellow service men would catch his eye. Also he really didn't deal with anything that had to do with him leaving. I thought the least he would do is confront the "friend" that outed him. I've really enjoyed the story so far, but not so sure about how it's ending.
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Great chapter! Happy that they've started picking a few off. I hope they get the rest when they come back!
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Turtles All the Way Down
jaysalmn commented on mitchelll's story chapter in Turtles All the Way Down
Oh, I remember Reed now. Had to go back to the first story to refresh my memory. He was the stuck up, arrogant ass that cheated on Brandon with his business partner, John. Don't feel one bit sorry for him. That's what thinking with the wrong head gets u. -
I'm also happy that Louis and Harry didn't do anything other than dinner. I don't trust Harry at all, and would have lost all respect for Louis. The kiss sure didn't earn him any brownie points with me. "For better of for worse". I kno Don said it would be ok, but really?? How disrespectful if Louis ever does act on it. Maybe Louis' outburst is the wake-up call Don needed. Although, I don't blame Don one bit for not believing Louis.
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I feel bad for Kevin too! Hope Parker isn't the type that flirts with every boy who shows interest, or maybe using Kevin because he is in with Gary. Also hope it's not so long til the next chapter.
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Great chapter! Think I held my breath through most of the drama! Lol! Yeah, they definitely need helicopters fitted with guns and ammo! Hopefully they take these wack jobs out so Angela and Tom can lead a normal life.
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"Holy shit! Brett and Joey are brothers!" was my first thought too! A lot has been put on the table this chapter! The name of the next chapter, "Fallout", sounds very ominous! Will this be yet another secret Billy yells out to Joey in one of his fits of anger? Or will he spill all to Brett?? Oh, I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Loved the chapter! Jayden is an exceptional guy, just seeing Troy as Troy. Their closeness in the bathroom was great. I love how Jayden gets Troy to do things without literally leading him around. Its exactly what Troy needs. He doesn't make Troy feel different, or like he can't do anything for himself. Loving the story so far, and can't wait to read more!!
