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The Backstory (Part Three)
jaysalmn commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Backstory (Part Three)
Prom was great! So happy everyone was so supportive. However, thought what the girls pulled after was pretty shitty. I couldn't have done it. I don't share my partner with ANYBODY! -
What a great chapter! So happy u didn't kill George at the cabin! Lol! When Billy came out to the living room in the middle of the night and George was sleeping in the chair, I was totally expecting Billy to find him not breathing. Thank u for ending this part of the series on a good note. I expect George not to make it very far into the next part. I think the cabin with George is just what the boys needed. Their talk really came from the heart, and I have a lot of respect for George and how he's handling their relationship. Still say Billy's mom is cheating with vanilla douche, even though both she and George say she's not. Looking very forward to part 6!
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I can't believe Aaron left poor Dustin with that bitch, Dr Millie!! The way she talked to him, not to mention how she yelled at Dustin after she slammed the door! WTF??? What the hell is a phone call to Sydney supposed to do?? He, as an officer, should kno how slow the state moves on EVERYTHING, friend or not. He should also kno how many children are abused at the hands of their foster parents, and he heard it first hand! I'm pretty disappointed in Aaron, and he should feel pretty damned ashamed. Btw, Aaron, it wasn't god who put Dustin in the situation with Dr Millie, it was you and Sydney!
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Great chapter, although what Alex is going through just breaks my heart. Brendan IS the best brother a boy could ask for. I agree that Dr Millie was a total bitch. Definitely in the wrong profession. Alex was smart to dismiss her.
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Great chapter! Paula definitely deserved what she got from Billy! U could tell by her response that something is going on between she and the vanilla douche! If there are two things I absolutely hate, they are hypocrites and cheaters. That bitch is both! I did think it was funny that on the way to Brett's, Billy ran into Brett who was on his way to Billy's! Lol!! I also hope that Billy's dad takes both of the boys to the cabin. I also hope that Billy outs his mother as the lying, hypocritical, cheating bitch she is! Definitely looking forward to the next chapter!
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Omg, what a wonderful ending! What a perfect time for Troy to say he loves Jayden than in front of the whole graduating class! I was teared up when he sang that song. Loved the email Jayden sent to their parents. Oh, and Will should feel guilty FOREVER! Lol!! I hope we get a sequel. I'm really gonna miss Troy and Jayden.
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Good beginning! Already like Trevor and Dustin! Can't wait to see where their adventure takes us, and how they discover each other's feelings.
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Oh no! We can't be near the end, yet! There's so much more to be written! Let's face it, everyone loves Jayden and Troy. We don't want it to end! 😭 So glad that Jayden wasn't hurt worse, and at least one of the asshole were taken out! I hope, along with everybody else, that there's a sequel to the story, Or at least an epilogue.
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Glad that all the bad guys were caught and locked away. I like Angela and Tom, but disappointed that she's who he ended up with. I thought the whole purpose of going back to his hometown was to prove that being gay doesn't make him any less of a man. Then he conforms to the norm and ends up with a wife. I figured maybe one of his fellow service men would catch his eye. Also he really didn't deal with anything that had to do with him leaving. I thought the least he would do is confront the "friend" that outed him. I've really enjoyed the story so far, but not so sure about how it's ending.
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Great chapter! Happy that they've started picking a few off. I hope they get the rest when they come back!
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Turtles All the Way Down
jaysalmn commented on mitchelll's story chapter in Turtles All the Way Down
Oh, I remember Reed now. Had to go back to the first story to refresh my memory. He was the stuck up, arrogant ass that cheated on Brandon with his business partner, John. Don't feel one bit sorry for him. That's what thinking with the wrong head gets u. -
I'm also happy that Louis and Harry didn't do anything other than dinner. I don't trust Harry at all, and would have lost all respect for Louis. The kiss sure didn't earn him any brownie points with me. "For better of for worse". I kno Don said it would be ok, but really?? How disrespectful if Louis ever does act on it. Maybe Louis' outburst is the wake-up call Don needed. Although, I don't blame Don one bit for not believing Louis.
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I feel bad for Kevin too! Hope Parker isn't the type that flirts with every boy who shows interest, or maybe using Kevin because he is in with Gary. Also hope it's not so long til the next chapter.
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Great chapter! Think I held my breath through most of the drama! Lol! Yeah, they definitely need helicopters fitted with guns and ammo! Hopefully they take these wack jobs out so Angela and Tom can lead a normal life.
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"Holy shit! Brett and Joey are brothers!" was my first thought too! A lot has been put on the table this chapter! The name of the next chapter, "Fallout", sounds very ominous! Will this be yet another secret Billy yells out to Joey in one of his fits of anger? Or will he spill all to Brett?? Oh, I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Loved the chapter! Jayden is an exceptional guy, just seeing Troy as Troy. Their closeness in the bathroom was great. I love how Jayden gets Troy to do things without literally leading him around. Its exactly what Troy needs. He doesn't make Troy feel different, or like he can't do anything for himself. Loving the story so far, and can't wait to read more!!
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Chapter 18 - Nothing like home
jaysalmn commented on Avangelion's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Nothing like home
Yay!!! So overjoyed to read a new chapter! I've reread the story countless times! Lol! So glad Tina got what was coming to her. Didn't think of cameras in the stairways and hallways! Also glad that Dom is home where he belongs, and is healing well. I agree that Dom's mother needs to get over it. Can't wait to read more! -
I totally agree with u. I totally get it. Still makes her a horrible person.
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Wow! The first half of the chapter was a rough one. Happy that Penny told Troy what he needed to hear without coddling him. He needed that. Troy's nightmare and Jayden being there to hold him brought tears to my eyes. Glad they made up. Really enjoyed the end of the chapter! 😉 I don't understand how they could let two thugs accused of attempted murder out of jail?? I don't have words to express what a horrible person jayden's aunt is! I hope Jayden and the Neal's at least get a heads up that they're out of jail. What a shitty justice system this community has!
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Wow! I wouldn't call myself a violent person by any means, but I would have beat Dex black and blue if I had been Zane!! I kno he didn't ask Zane to break up with his girlfriend, but to send strong signals and then just brush it off like nothing?? What a first class prick! I wouldn't forgive him if he were the last guy on earth! That being said...I'm soooo looking forward to reading more!! Lol!
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I absolutely agree! He's treating Jayden like he played a role in his beating. I don't care what Troy is going through, treating Jayden like that is just wrong. I feel so bad for Jayden.
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A great, but emotional chapter. I think I would hurt like Troy's mother, even understanding its something he needs to go through. Jayden was correct when he said obviously Will didn't love Troy enough to want to be by his side. I don't understand why he wouldn't want to be right there by his side doing exactly what Jayden is doing. I hope Will kinda just withers away. I did laugh when Troy asked the girls if Jayden was cute. Always looking forward to reading more!
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Chapter 2: "Confusing Contact"
jaysalmn commented on Grydan's story chapter in Chapter 2: "Confusing Contact"
Liking the story so far. So cute how tongue tied Phillip got around Franklyn. Looks like there's mutual attraction there. Haven't read any of the Billy Chase story so don't kno anything about Jamie in that aspect, but he seems like kind of a dick. Just my opinion. -
I agree, it needs more. I would like to see Damien talk to Cory. I'd REALLY like to see Corey, Damien and Jordan confront Xavier. I think confronting Xavier with Damien and Jordan there to support him would be healing for Corey, and a way to close that painful chapter.
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I wonder f it has something to do with what ur trying to read the story on. I'm reading on my cell and am not coming across any of the problems u and the other reader are.
