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Great chapter!! If I didn't already think Nate was the best, I sure as hell would now! He gave Jesse exactly what he deserved. If Jesse was jealous and mean when Brad was single, what's he gonna do when he hears about Mitch? I see more bloody noses in his future! Lol! I really like Mitch. He seems like a very sweet, caring, well-mannered guy. Just what Brad needs. He doesn't need someone that turns mean and vindictive just because he's upset about something that has nothing to do with him.
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I agree with tesao when it comes to Toby. He loved Josh, and now that he's gone his brother will do? Not liking Toby very much after his lame explanations. I also have a big issue on how Toby just kinda glossed over Mandy, like it wasn't a big deal. He also never mentioned putting a stop to their being friends with benefits. Just jumped right to a date. For me, I question how trustworthy Toby would be. I don't see him being very trustworthy at all. Also, judging Mandy's behavior at the bbq, she probably sees it as more than a fuck buddies scenario. I see poor Liam being hurt in the end if he starts anything with Toby.
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Allen having AIDS breaks my heart. Just when I thought the story couldn't get any more sad. I think he and Joey really need each other for support. I'm happy Star is being the mother hen. The boys really need her to keep them in line. Lol! I'm happy she's making Joey go back to school. He's too smart to throw it all away.
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And THAT is where the story went wrong.
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Good chapter. I really enjoy the back and forth between Brad and Nate. Very entertaining. I can understand Brad's mom being overprotective. Glad that Brad understands that too. Unlike others, I took what Jesse did to Brad to be more mean than a joke. Seriously, what kind of person would think of setting up their "best friend" with an idiot mama's boy like Michael?? I would never do that to one of my friends, and I hope none of my friends would do that to me. Sorry, but I don't see the funny in that.
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Very interesting read! I can identify with Jody as far as being that hurt and angry, but would have never considered killing my ex! Lol!! Jody definitely needs some counseling. I agree with CassieQ about Tommy being brave for wanting to date someone who had planned on killing his ex, but I think Jody is also brave for going out with a so-called straight friend that hooked up with his ex. I would never date someone that hooked up with my ex!
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Good story, but still very disappointed on the direction you took it as far as Mitchell's sexuality. I think it would have been a much better story if you had left him gay and had him explore that and maybe find love with one of his fellow servicemen. It's really not even fair to call him bisexual considering he never even spoke of any attraction to or had any experiences with another man. If he was going to end up with a woman, there would be no reason for him to leave home or have "a talk" with anyone. Just didn't make sense.
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A very good story, but unfortunate that you strayed from the original idea and made it a "straight guy" story.
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Vacay the Big Apple Way
jaysalmn commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Vacay the Big Apple Way
Wow! Now that's some drama! Poor Ian. I hope his dad drowned at the bottom of that pool! What a nut job! I agree with Wesley, that at least Ian won't be going back to school for a while. Also hope that Ian didn't get hurt that bad. The fact he was airlifted has me concerned. On a much lighter note, I think Charlie is so cute with Eli! Had to laugh when he told Jacob he was going off the pill so they could have one of their own. Charlie and Jacob are gonna be wonderful uncles for Eli! -
Great chapter! Happy that the training is going well, and SOOOO excited that Don is getting feeling back in his legs and feet! I absolutely hate Harry!! What a complete asshole to push himself on Louis like that. Louis doesn't have the backbone to tell him to "back the fuck off", in those exact words?? I think that's what Harry needs. He's obviously not getting the message. Harry deserved a bloody nose or a black eye at best for his actions. I think Don will have to shut Harry down himself, because obviously Louis either doesn't have the balls to forcefully do it himself or he likes the attention, which doesn't put him any higher than Harry on my list! I would have a big issue with Louis' behavior with Harry if I were Don. I don't kno that I believe Louis when he says it will never happen again.The reason that Don had originally suggested Harry isn't even an issue anymore, so I don't understand Louis continuing his little games with Harry.
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Aww...glad their lesson/date went well. Wasn't sure about Jared at first, but he's ended up being a very good friend to Sam. Can't wait for their next "date". I think I'm just as excited as Sam is! Lol!!
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Great chapter! So happy the date went well, considering his panic attack. His parents handled it great, and Josh made me laugh at his reaction and the "Gay Kay" comment. Happy that he told Sarah he didn't care about the other's drama. They sounded kind of annoying to me. Lol!
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Absolutely loved the chapter! So happy that things are coming together and settling down....for now. Lol! Have to say I'm very surprised at Miriam's turn around, and Doug sounds like a good guy. Maybe, just maybe Rena will be getting some D from Robert too! Looking forward to reading more!
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I agree that it would have been more heartbreaking at the party. In fact I think it would have gone horribly wrong. It's pretty clear that Jesse has feelings for Brad too. I'm really looking forward to see how this plays out!
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Good chapter. I hope eventually u plan on getting to the premise of the story, or maybe consider changing the description and tags on the main page. Considering the direction of the story, it is kinda misleading.
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Yay!!! I was getting kinda nervous there for a minute. It was Definitely worth the wait! So happy for Liam, and that Toby didn't break Liam's heart. He better not! Lol! There has to be a story about the brunette at the party and why Toby has been ignoring Liam, and I for one can't wait to find out what they are. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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I'm in tears once again. This is such a terribly sad story, but I'm desperately hoping that there will be good things to come. Joey deserves that.
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Good chapter. I'm still very disappointed he ended up with Angela, and now has a child of his own. I don't understand why u decided to go in this direction. The premise of the story was for a teen outed as gay and pretty much kicked out of the town he lived, to do what he has done and go back and I assume show the town that being gay doesn't make u less of a person and confront the guy who outed him. There was only one acknowledgement of his even being gay, he has never been with a guy or showed any attraction, and is now married to a woman. It's turned into another straight guy going through life. Great writing, but definitely not what I thought it would be.
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First time reading also. Enjoyed the first chapter. I like Kay, even though he seems pretty cliquey at school. Never hung around guys like him when I was in school. They were always too into themselves, and I find arrogance a turn off. Lol! Really like Jake. Sounds like a really sweet guy. From his actions, I'm kinda surprised he's single. Definitely looking forward to reading more!
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Wow! Intense start. Feel so bad for Brad and Nate. At least their asshole dad was arrested. Brad is gonna be so heartbroken when he finds out Jesse already has a boyfriend. Can't wait to read more!
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Chapter 20 - Dane and other family
jaysalmn commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 20 - Dane and other family
Great chapter! So happy Dane has Alfy as a friend. The two together are adorable! I see them being life long best friends! -
What a sad beginning. My heart breaks for Joey. I agree this probably won't be an easy read, and a lot of tears will be shed in the process, but I have yet to find a Ronyx story that I haven't loved. Looking forward to reading more!
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As far as I'm concerned, if people want to sleep around, more power to them. I definitely haven't been an angel in that department. Lol! The only thing I don't understand is if a person wants to hook up with other people, why be in a relationship? When I think of relationships, especially marriage, I think of trust, loyalty and monogamy. No man is going to convince me that I'm the love of their life while balls deep in another guy!
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Yes, I agree attraction is part of being human and doesn't mean we have to act on them. However, Louis and Harry has already started acting on them. The kiss at the restaurant?? I can even dismiss that as being under extreme stress with Don. At this point, with Don "working properly", and being as back to his old self as he can, to be that strongly attracted in my mind just isn't right. For Harry, as Don's boss, to keep pushing the subject just shows what a scumbag he really is. It seems to me that Louis and Harry have no shame.
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It was great to see Don so happy and excited about the marathon. Exactly what he needed. I don't kno what to think of Miriam. I want to believe her apology, yet the fact that her needing something is the only thing that brought her back to apologize makes me want to just push her towards the door! Lol! Still think Harry is a scumbag. Louis need to tell him right out that it's never gonna happen and quit bringing it up, Or be an equal scumbag and hook up with him. Don made the mistake of planting that idea in his head. Now Louis and Harry are playing their little games. Them being adults, being a game player is pretty sad. Louis needs to remember his vows. If he wants to bang Harry so bad, he should just go be with Harry and let Don find a man who loves him 100%!
